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-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive-cover.xml118
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive.xml35
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX-cover.xml174
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX.xml90
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml261
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/acceptLicense.xml37
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/addUser.xml111
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/add_supplemental_media.xml40
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/ask_mntpoint_s.xml70
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bestTime.xml28
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bootLive.xml199
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/chooseDesktop.xml54
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackageGroups.xml4
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackagesTree.xml16
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureServices.xml27
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureTimezoneUTC.xml20
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_card_list.xml50
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_chooser.xml104
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_monitor.xml112
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/diskdrake.xml148
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/doPartitionDisks.xml348
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/exitInstall.xml16
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/firewall.xml28
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/formatPartitions.xml44
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installUpdates.xml47
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installer.xml330
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/login.xml21
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/media_selection.xml18
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/minimal-install.xml49
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/misc-params.xml133
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/reboot.xml14
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/securityLevel.xml36
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml48
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectInstallClass.xml81
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboard.xml42
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboardLive.xml28
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectLanguage.xml88
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectMouse.xml46
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupBootloader.xml305
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupSCSI.xml26
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/soundConfig.xml52
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/takeOverHdConfirm.xml48
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/testing.xml49
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/uninstall-Mageia.xml50
-rw-r--r--docs/docs/stable/installer/en/unused.xml33
45 files changed, 2205 insertions, 1473 deletions
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive-cover.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive-cover.xml
index 733678c8..29d97b71 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive-cover.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive-cover.xml
@@ -1,76 +1,104 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
-<book xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:lang="en" xml:id="Quick-Startup">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<book version="5.0" xml:id="DrakLive-installer" xml:lang="en"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+ <!--2018/02/19 apb: Disabled setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml because I have included it at the end of setupBootloader.xml-->
+
+ <!--2018/03/24 apb: Disabled doPartitionDisks.xml, ask_mntpoint_s.xml, takeOverHdConfirm.xml, diskdrake.xml and formatPartitions.xml because I have grouped them together under diskPartitioning.xml (as per DrakX)-->
+
<info>
<title>Installation from LIVE medium</title>
- <publisher>
- <publishername>Mageia.org</publishername>
- </publisher>
- <revhistory>
- <revision>
- <date>January 2015</date>
+
+ <publisher>
+ <publishername>Mageia.org</publishername>
+ </publisher>
+
+ <revhistory>
+ <revision>
+ <date>March 2016</date>
+
<revremark>Mageia 5</revremark>
- </revision>
- </revhistory>
+ </revision>
+ </revhistory>
+
<cover>
- <para role="tagline">The Official Documentation for Mageia</para>
+ <para role="tagline">The Official Documentation for Mageia</para>
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="mageia-2013.png"/>
+ <imagedata fileref="../mageia-2013.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>The texts and screenshots in this manual are available under the CC BY-SA 3.0 license
- <link ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.
- </para>
- <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.
- </para>
- <para>It was written by volunteers in their free time. Please contact <link ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation Team</link>, if you would like to help improve this manual.</para>
+
+ <para>The texts and screenshots in this manual are available under the
+ CC BY-SA 3.0 license <link
+ ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.</para>
+
+ <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.</para>
+
+ <para>It was written by volunteers in their free time. Please contact
+ <link
+ ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation
+ Team</link>, if you would like to help improve this manual.</para>
</cover>
</info>
+
<article>
<title>Installation from LIVE medium</title>
- <para><note>
- <para>No one will see all the installer screens that you see in this
- manual. Which screens you will see, depends on your hardware and the
- choices you make while installing.</para>
- </note></para>
- <xi:include href="SelectAndUseISOs2.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="bootLive.xml"/>
+ <para><note>
+ <para>No one will see all the installer screens that you see in this
+ manual. Which screens you will see, depends on your hardware and the
+ choices you make while installing.</para>
+ </note></para>
+
+ <xi:include href="SelectAndUseISOs2.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="bootLive.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="selectLanguage.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="selectLanguage.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="acceptLicense.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="acceptLicense.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="configureTimezoneUTC.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="configureTimezoneUTC.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="bestTime.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="bestTime.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="selectKeyboardLive.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="selectKeyboardLive.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="testing.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="testing.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="diskPartitioning.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="ask_mntpoint_s.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="ask_mntpoint_s.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="takeOverHdConfirm.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="takeOverHdConfirm.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="diskdrake.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="diskdrake.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="formatPartitions.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="formatPartitions.xml"/> -->
- <xi:include href="unused.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="unused.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="setupBootloader.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="setupBootloader.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/> -->
- <xi:include href="reboot.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="reboot.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="addUser.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="addUser.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="login.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="login.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
- </article>
-</book> \ No newline at end of file
+ <xi:include href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
+ </article>
+</book>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive.xml
index 2141248e..ffdfe056 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakLive.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,17 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:lang="en" xml:id="Quick-Startup">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<article version="5.0" xml:id="Quick-Startup" xml:lang="en"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+ <!--2018/02/16 apb: Comment-out setupBootloaderAddEntry because I have incorporated it at the end of setupBootloader-->
+
+ <!--2018/03/23 apb: a) Using diskPartitioning.xml to group doPartitionDisks.xml ask_mntpoint_s.xml takeOverHdConfirm.xml diskdrake.xml and formatPartitions.xml
+b) Disabled doPartitionDisks.xml ask_mntpoint_s.xml takeOverHdConfirm.xml diskdrake.xml and formatPartitions.xml This is to reflect same arrangement in DrakX-->
+
<info>
<title>Installation from LIVE medium</title>
@@ -10,12 +23,16 @@
</note></para>
<para xml:id="CC_BY-SA">The texts and screenshots in this manual are
- available under the CC BY-SA 3.0 license <link ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.</para>
+ available under the CC BY-SA 3.0 license <link
+ ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.</para>
- <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.</para>
+ <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.</para>
<para>It was written by volunteers in their free time. Please contact
- <link ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation
+ the <link
+ ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation
Team</link>, if you would like to help improve this manual.</para>
</cover>
</info>
@@ -36,7 +53,9 @@
<xi:include href="testing.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="diskPartitioning.xml"/>
+
+ <!-- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
<xi:include href="ask_mntpoint_s.xml"/>
@@ -46,11 +65,11 @@
<xi:include href="formatPartitions.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="unused.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="unused.xml"/> -->
<xi:include href="setupBootloader.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/> -->
<xi:include href="reboot.xml"/>
@@ -59,4 +78,4 @@
<xi:include href="login.xml"/>
<xi:include href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
-</article> \ No newline at end of file
+</article>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX-cover.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX-cover.xml
index f26eb588..1f0845fe 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX-cover.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX-cover.xml
@@ -1,129 +1,163 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><!-- Converted by db4-upgrade version 1.0 --><book xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:lang="en" xml:id="Quick-Startup">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<!-- Converted by db4-upgrade version 1.0 -->
+<book version="5.0" xml:id="Quick-Startup" xml:lang="en"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title>Installation with DrakX</title>
- <publisher>
- <publishername>Mageia.org</publishername>
- </publisher>
- <revhistory>
- <revision>
- <date>February 2014</date>
+
+ <publisher>
+ <publishername>Mageia.org</publishername>
+ </publisher>
+
+ <revhistory>
+ <revision>
+ <date>February 2014</date>
+
<revremark>Mageia 4</revremark>
- </revision>
- </revhistory>
+ </revision>
+ </revhistory>
+
<cover>
- <para role="tagline">The Official Documentation for Mageia</para>
+ <para role="tagline">The Official Documentation for Mageia</para>
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="../mageia-2013.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>The texts and screenshots in this manual are available under the CC BY-SA 3.0 license
- <link ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.
- </para>
- <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.
- </para>
- <para>It was written by volunteers in their free time. Please contact <link ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation Team</link>, if you would like to help improve this manual.</para>
+
+ <para>The texts and screenshots in this manual are available under the
+ CC BY-SA 3.0 license <link
+ ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.</para>
+
+ <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.</para>
+
+ <para>It was written by volunteers in their free time. Please contact
+ <link
+ ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation
+ Team</link>, if you would like to help improve this manual.</para>
</cover>
</info>
+
<article>
- <!-- 2013-01-03 removed link to choosePackages.xml, because there is no link to it in installer. link to setupX has been removed for the same reason, before-->
-
-<!--2013-03-31 removed link to setupBootloaderBeginner.xml, because that page is no longer needed -->
-<!--2013-05-10 hid includes for resizeFATchoose.xml and takeOverHdChoose.xml, because since over a year ago, no one in docteam managed to make a screenshot of those installer screens. They seem to already have been obsoleted in Mandriva -->
-<!--2013-05-10 put ask_mntpoint_s.xml before takeOverHdConfirm.xml, to better reflect the order in which the links to them appear in doPartitionDisks.xml -->
-<!--2013-12-08 add soundConfig.xml -->
-<title>Installation with DrakX</title>
- <para><note>
- <para>No one will see all the installer screens that you see in this
- manual. Which screens you will see, depends on your hardware and the
- choices you make while installing.</para>
- </note></para>
-
- <!-- <xi:include href="drakx-intro.xml"/> -->
+ <!-- 2013-01-03 removed link to choosePackages.xml, because there is no link to it in installer. link to setupX has been removed for the same reason, before-->
+
+ <!--2013-03-31 removed link to setupBootloaderBeginner.xml, because that page is no longer needed -->
- <xi:include href="SelectAndUseISOs2.xml"/>
+ <!--2013-05-10 hid includes for resizeFATchoose.xml and takeOverHdChoose.xml, because since over a year ago, no one in docteam managed to make a screenshot of those installer screens. They seem to already have been obsoleted in Mandriva -->
- <xi:include href="installer.xml"/>
+ <!--2013-05-10 put ask_mntpoint_s.xml before takeOverHdConfirm.xml, to better reflect the order in which the links to them appear in doPartitionDisks.xml -->
- <xi:include href="selectLanguage.xml"/>
+ <!--2013-12-08 add soundConfig.xml -->
- <xi:include href="acceptLicense.xml"/>
+ <title>Installation with DrakX</title>
- <xi:include href="setupSCSI.xml"/>
+ <para>
+ <note>
+ <para>No one will see all the installer screens that you see in this
+ manual. Which screens you will see, depends on your hardware and the
+ choices you make while installing.</para>
+ </note>
+ </para>
- <xi:include href="selectInstallClass.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="drakx-intro.xml"/> -->
- <xi:include href="selectKeyboard.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="SelectAndUseISOs2.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="installer.xml"/>
- <!-- <xi:include href="resizeFATChoose.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="selectLanguage.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="takeOverHdChoose.xml"/> -->
+ <xi:include href="acceptLicense.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="setupSCSI.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="selectInstallClass.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="selectKeyboard.xml"/>
+
+ <!-- <xi:include href="resizeFATChoose.xml"/> -->
+
+ <!-- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
<xi:include href="ask_mntpoint_s.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="takeOverHdChoose.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="takeOverHdConfirm.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="takeOverHdConfirm.xml"/>
<xi:include href="diskdrake.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="formatPartitions.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="formatPartitions.xml"/>-->
-<xi:include href="add_supplemental_media.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="add_supplemental_media.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="media_selection.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="media_selection.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="chooseDesktop.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="chooseDesktop.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="choosePackageGroups.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="choosePackageGroups.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="minimal-install.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="minimal-install.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="choosePackagesTree.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="choosePackagesTree.xml"/> -->
- <!-- <xi:include href="setRootPassword.xml"></xi:include> -->
+ <xi:include href="diskPartitioning.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="addUser.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="software.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="configureX_chooser.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="setRootPassword.xml"></xi:include> -->
- <xi:include href="configureX_card_list.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="addUser.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="configureX_monitor.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="configureX_chooser.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="setupBootloader.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="configureX_card_list.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="configureX_monitor.xml"/> -->
- <!-- <xi:include href="setupYabootGeneral.xml"></xi:include>
+ <xi:include href="setupBootloader.xml"/>
+
+ <!-- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/> -->
+
+ <!-- <xi:include href="setupYabootGeneral.xml"></xi:include>
<xi:include href="setupYabootAddEntry.xml"></xi:include>
<xi:include href="summary.xml"></xi:include> -->
- <xi:include href="misc-params.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="misc-params.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="configureTimezoneUTC.xml"/>
-
-<xi:include href="selectCountry.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="locale.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="configureServices.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="configureTimezoneUTC.xml"/>
-<xi:include href="selectMouse.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="selectCountry.xml"/> -->
-<xi:include href="soundConfig.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="configureServices.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="securityLevel.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="selectMouse.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="firewall.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="soundConfig.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="securityLevel.xml"/>
- <!-- <xi:include href="configureNetwork.xml"></xi:include> -->
+ <xi:include href="firewall.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="installUpdates.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="configureNetwork.xml"></xi:include> -->
- <xi:include href="exitInstall.xml"/>
-
- <xi:include href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="installUpdates.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="exitInstall.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
</article>
</book>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX.xml
index 207771b1..ab2d0444 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/DrakX.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,36 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><!-- Converted by db4-upgrade version 1.0 --><article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:lang="en" xml:id="Quick-Startup">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<!-- Converted by db4-upgrade version 1.0 -->
+<article version="5.0" xml:id="Quick-Startup" xml:lang="en"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+ xmlns:ns62="http://docbook.org/ns/transclusion"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+ <!-- 2013-01-03 removed link to choosePackages.xml, because there is no link to it in installer. link to setupX has been removed for the same reason, before-->
+
+ <!--2013-03-31 removed link to setupBootloaderBeginner.xml, because that page is no longer needed -->
+
+ <!--2013-05-10 hid includes for resizeFATchoose.xml and takeOverHdChoose.xml, because since over a year ago, no one in docteam managed to make a screenshot of those installer screens. They seem to already have been obsoleted in Mandriva -->
+
+ <!--2013-05-10 put ask_mntpoint_s.xml before takeOverHdConfirm.xml, to better reflect the order in which the links to them appear in doPartitionDisks.xml -->
+
+ <!--2013-12-08 add soundConfig.xml -->
+
+ <!--2014-05-07 add selectAndUseISOs2.xml Papoteur-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/16 apb: 1st run towards improving Mga7 DrakX manual - Text and typography done for all required xml's.
+ Also, removed the inclusion for setupBootladerAddEntry (was section 24) as I have appended it to the end of section 23 (Bootloader).-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/23 apb: Disabled Include for configureX_card_list.xml & configureX_monitor.xml because there is no point to them being Siblings to configureX_chooser.xml (Graphic Card and Monitor Configuration). They are really Children.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/27 apb: a) Created this section to merge doPartitionDisks.xml ask_mntpoint_s.xml takeOverHdConfirm.xml diskdrake.xml and formatPartitions.xml
+ b) renamed doPartitionDisks.xml as suggestedPartitioning.xml c) These XML's now exist as xi:includes within the newly created partitionig.xml -->
+
+ <!--2018/02/27 apb: Merged configureTimezoneUTC.xml and selectCountry.xml within newly created Locale.xml. b) Disabled configureTimezoneUTC.xml and selectCountry.xml Includes and inserted Locale include.-->
+
<info>
<title>Installation with DrakX</title>
@@ -10,28 +42,20 @@
</note></para>
<para xml:id="CC_BY-SA">The texts and screenshots in this manual are
- available under the CC BY-SA 3.0 license <link ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.</para>
+ available under the CC BY-SA 3.0 license <link
+ ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.</para>
- <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.</para>
+ <para>This manual was produced with the help of the <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">Calenco CMS</link> developed by <link
+ ns6:href="http://www.neodoc.biz">NeoDoc</link>.</para>
<para>It was written by volunteers in their free time. Please contact
- <link ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation
+ <link
+ ns6:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Documentation_team">Documentation
Team</link>, if you would like to help improve this manual.</para>
</cover>
</info>
- <!-- 2013-01-03 removed link to choosePackages.xml, because there is no link to it in installer. link to setupX has been removed for the same reason, before-->
-
- <!--2013-03-31 removed link to setupBootloaderBeginner.xml, because that page is no longer needed -->
-
- <!--2013-05-10 hid includes for resizeFATchoose.xml and takeOverHdChoose.xml, because since over a year ago, no one in docteam managed to make a screenshot of those installer screens. They seem to already have been obsoleted in Mandriva -->
-
- <!--2013-05-10 put ask_mntpoint_s.xml before takeOverHdConfirm.xml, to better reflect the order in which the links to them appear in doPartitionDisks.xml -->
-
- <!--2013-12-08 add soundConfig.xml -->
-
- <!--2014-05-07 add selectAndUseISOs2.xml Papoteur-->
-
<!-- <xi:include href="drakx-intro.xml"/> -->
<xi:include href="SelectAndUseISOs2.xml"/>
@@ -48,21 +72,21 @@
<xi:include href="selectKeyboard.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
-
- <!-- <xi:include href="resizeFATChoose.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="resizeFATChoose.xml"/> -->
- <xi:include href="takeOverHdChoose.xml"/> -->
+ <!-- <xi:include href="doPartitionDisks.xml"/>
<xi:include href="ask_mntpoint_s.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="takeOverHdChoose.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="takeOverHdConfirm.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="takeOverHdConfirm.xml"/>
<xi:include href="diskdrake.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="formatPartitions.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="formatPartitions.xml"/>-->
- <xi:include href="add_supplemental_media.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="add_supplemental_media.xml"/>
<xi:include href="media_selection.xml"/>
@@ -72,7 +96,11 @@
<xi:include href="minimal-install.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="choosePackagesTree.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="choosePackagesTree.xml"/> -->
+
+ <xi:include href="diskPartitioning.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="software.xml"/>
<!-- <xi:include href="setRootPassword.xml"></xi:include> -->
@@ -80,13 +108,13 @@
<xi:include href="configureX_chooser.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="configureX_card_list.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="configureX_card_list.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="configureX_monitor.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="configureX_monitor.xml"/> -->
<xi:include href="setupBootloader.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/>
+ <!-- <xi:include href="setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml"/> -->
<!-- <xi:include href="setupYabootGeneral.xml"></xi:include>
@@ -96,9 +124,11 @@
<xi:include href="misc-params.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="configureTimezoneUTC.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="locale.xml"/>
+
+ <!-- <xi:include href="configureTimezoneUTC.xml"/>
- <xi:include href="selectCountry.xml"/>
+ <xi:include href="selectCountry.xml"/> -->
<xi:include href="configureServices.xml"/>
@@ -117,4 +147,4 @@
<xi:include href="exitInstall.xml"/>
<xi:include href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
-</article> \ No newline at end of file
+</article>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml
index e82044c9..162136e9 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml
@@ -2,6 +2,15 @@
<!-- Made by Lebarhon 2014 03 26
Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about 1.3.2-->
+ <!--2018/02/07 apb: Text and typography.-->
+ <!--2018/02/17 apb: Typo-->
+ <!--2018/02/19 apb: Update Download.png to Mga6.-->
+ <!--2018/02/20 apb: Adjusted sections 1.1 and 1.2.
+ a) The main intro previously stated that there were 2 families of media, but listed at 1.2.4 is NetInstall. Therefore, I included a NetInstall entry in 1.1.
+ b) Logically followed to move the NetInstall description up frome 1.2.4 to the main intro.
+ c) Moved the 'Important' text from Live 1.2.3.1 Common features to the main intro because it is not really part of 'Common features', and I think its more natural location is in the main intro.-->
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Centre-align all PNG's.-->
+ <!--2019/01/03 apb: Update checking.png (which also includes sha512 option). Some rewording to 1.2.4.2, 1.3.1, 1.4.2.3.5. Update text to include sha512 option in 1.3.1 & 1.3.2-->
<info>
<title xml:id="Select-and-use-ISOs-ti1">Select and use ISOs</title>
</info>
@@ -9,30 +18,52 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>Mageia is distributed via ISO images. This page will help you to
choose which image best suits your needs.</para>
- <para>There are two families of media:</para>
+ <para>There are three types of installation media:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Classical installer: Booting with this media provides you with
- the maximum flexibility when choosing what to install, and for
- configuring your system. In particular, you have a choice of which
- Desktop environment to install</para>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Classical installer:</emphasis> Booting
+ with this media provides you with the maximum flexibility when
+ choosing what to install, and for configuring your system. In
+ particular, you have a choice of which Desktop environment to
+ install.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>LIVE media: This option allows you to try out Mageia without
- having to actually install it, or make any changes to your computer.
- If the installation is decided, the process is simpler, but you get
- fewer choices than offered by the Classical installer</para>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">LIVE media:</emphasis> This option allows
+ you to try out Mageia without having to actually install it, or make
+ any changes to your computer. However, the Live media also includes an
+ Installer, which can be started when booting the media, or after
+ booting into the Live operating system itself.</para>
+ <note>
+ <para>The Live Installer is simpler compared to the Classical
+ Installer - but you have fewer configuration options.</para>
+ </note>
+ <important>
+ <para>Live ISOs can only be used to create <quote>clean</quote>
+ installations, they cannot be used to upgrade previously installed
+ Mageia releases.</para>
+ </important>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Net Install</emphasis>: These are minimal
+ ISO's containing no more than that which is needed to start the DrakX
+ installer and find <literal>DrakX-installer-stage2</literal> and other
+ packages that are needed to continue and complete the install. These
+ packages may be on the PC hard disk, on a local drive, on a local
+ network or on the Internet.</para>
+ <para>These media are very light (less than 100 MB) and are convenient
+ if bandwidth is too low to download a full DVD, or if you have a PC
+ without a DVD drive or is unable to boot from a USB stick.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <para>Details are given in the next sections.</para>
+ <para>More details are given in the next sections.</para>
</section>
<section>
<title>Media</title>
<section>
<title>Definition</title>
<para>Here, a medium (plural: media) is an ISO image file that allows
- you to install and/or update Mageia and by extension any physical
- support (DVD, USB stick, ...) the ISO file is copied to.</para>
+ you to install and/or update Mageia and, by extension, any physical
+ medium (DVD, USB stick, ...) the ISO file is copied to.</para>
<para>You can find Mageia ISO's <link ns4:href="http://www.mageia.org/en/downloads/">here</link>.</para>
</section>
<section>
@@ -41,26 +72,28 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>Common features</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>These ISOs use the Classical installer called drakx.</para>
+ <para>These ISOs use the Classical installer called DrakX</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>They are used for performing clean installs or to upgrade a
- previously installed version of Mageia.</para>
+ previously installed version of Mageia</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Different media for 32 and 64 bit architectures.</para>
+ <para>Different media for 32 and 64-bit architectures</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Some tools are available in the Welcome screen: Rescue
- System, Memory Test, Hardware Detection Tool.</para>
+ <para>Some tools are available in the Installer
+ <quote>Welcome</quote> screen: <emphasis>Rescue System, Memory
+ Test, </emphasis>and <emphasis>Hardware Detection
+ Tool</emphasis></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Each DVD contains many available desktop environments and
- languages.</para>
+ languages</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>You'll be given the choice during the installation to add
- non free software.</para>
+ non-free software</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -72,23 +105,20 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Can be used to preview the Mageia operating system without
- having to install it. Can also be used to install Mageia if you
- wish.</para>
+ having to install it</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Each ISO contains only one desktop environment (Plasma,
- GNOME or Xfce).</para>
+ <para>The Live media also includes an Installer.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Different media for 32 and 64 bit architectures.</para>
+ <para>Each ISO contains only one desktop environment (Plasma,
+ GNOME or Xfce)</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><emphasis role="bold">Live ISOs can only be used to create
- clean installations, they cannot be used to upgrade previously
- installed Mageia releases.</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Different media for 32 and 64-bit architectures</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>They contain non free software.</para>
+ <para>They contain non-free software</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -96,13 +126,13 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>Live DVD Plasma</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Plasma desktop environment only.</para>
+ <para>Plasma desktop environment only</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>All available languages are present.</para>
+ <para>All available languages are present</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>64 bit architecture only.</para>
+ <para>64-bit architecture only</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -110,13 +140,13 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>Live DVD GNOME</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>GNOME desktop environment only.</para>
+ <para>GNOME desktop environment only</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>All available languages are present.</para>
+ <para>All available languages are present</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>64 bit architecture only</para>
+ <para>64-bit architecture only</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -124,13 +154,13 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>Live DVD Xfce</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Xfce desktop environment only.</para>
+ <para>Xfce desktop environment only</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>All available languages are present.</para>
+ <para>All available languages are present</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>32 or 64 bit architectures.</para>
+ <para>32 or 64-bit architectures</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -141,24 +171,10 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>Common features</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>These are minimal ISO's containing no more than that which
- is needed to start the drakx installer and find
- drakx-installer-stage2 and other packages that are needed to
- continue and complete the install. These packages may be on the PC
- hard disk, on a local drive, on a local network or on the
- Internet.</para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para>These media are very light (less than 100 MB) and are
- convenient if bandwidth is too low to download a full DVD, or if
- you have a PC without a DVD drive or is unable to boot from a USB
- stick.</para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para>Different media for 32 and 64 bit architectures.</para>
+ <para>Different media for 32 and 64-bit architectures</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>First steps are English language only.</para>
+ <para>First steps are English language only</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -166,8 +182,8 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>netinstall.iso</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Contains only free software, for those people who prefer not
- to use non-free software.</para>
+ <para>Contains only free software, for those who prefer to not use
+ non-free software</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -176,7 +192,7 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Contains non-free software (mostly drivers, codecs...) for
- people who need it.</para>
+ those who need it</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -186,21 +202,32 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<title>Downloading and Checking Media</title>
<section>
<title>Downloading</title>
- <para>Once you have chosen your ISO file, you can download it using either http or BitTorrent. In both cases, you are provided with some information, such as the mirror in use and an option to switch if the bandwidth is too low. If http is chosen, you will also see something regarding checksums.</para>
+ <para>Once you have chosen your ISO file, you can download it using
+ either http or BitTorrent. In both cases, you are provided with some
+ information, such as the mirror in use and an option to switch to an
+ alternative if the bandwidth is too low.</para>
+ <para>If http is chosen you will also see some information regarding
+ checksums.</para>
+
+ <para><literal>md5sum</literal>, <literal>sha1sum</literal> and
+ <literal>sha512sum</literal> (the most secure) are tools to check the
+ ISO integrity. Copy one of the checksums (string of alphanumeric
+ characters) for use in the next section.</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="Checking.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="Checking.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>md5sum and sha1sum are tools to check the ISO integrity. Choose
- one or the other, and copy the checksum <link linkend="integrity">for
- later use</link>. Then a window similar to this one appears:</para>
+
+ <para>In the meantime, a window to download the actual ISO will
+ open:</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="Download.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="Download.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>Select the Save File option, then, click OK.</para>
+ <para>Click on <emphasis>Save File</emphasis>, then click
+ <emphasis>OK</emphasis>.</para>
</section>
<section>
<title xml:id="integrity">Checking the integrity of the downloaded
@@ -209,52 +236,65 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
generated by an algorithm from the file to be downloaded. You may
compare the checksum of your downloaded ISO against that of the original
source ISO. If the checksums do not match, it means that the actual data
- on the ISO's do not match, and if it is the case, then you should retry
- the download or attempt a repair using BitTorrent.</para>
+ on the ISO's do not match, and if that is the case, then you should
+ retry the download or attempt a repair using BitTorrent.</para>
<para>To generate the checksum for your downloaded ISO, open a console,
(no need to be root), and:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>To use md5sum, type: <userinput>md5sum
- path/to/the/image/file.iso</userinput>.</para>
+ <para>To use the md5sum, type: <command>md5sum
+ path/to/the/image/file.iso</command></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>To use sha1sum, type: <userinput>sha1sum
- path/to/the/image/file.iso</userinput></para>
+ <para>To use the sha1sum, type: <command>sha1sum
+ path/to/the/image/file.iso</command></para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>To use the sha512sum, type: <command>sha512sum
+ path/to/the/image/file.iso</command></para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <para> Example:</para>
+ <para>Example:</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="../Md5sum.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="Md5sum.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>and compare the result (you may have to wait for a while) with the
- checksum provided by Mageia.</para>
+
+ <para>then compare the result (you may have to wait for a while) with
+ the ISO checksum provided by Mageia.</para>
</section>
</section>
<section>
<title>Burn or dump the ISO</title>
- <para>The verified ISO can now be burned to a CD/DVD or dumped to a USB
- stick. This is not a standard copy operation as a bootable medium will
- actually be created.</para>
+ <para>The verified ISO can now be burned to a CD/DVD or
+ <quote>dumped</quote> to a USB stick. This is not a standard copy
+ operation, as a bootable medium will actually be created.</para>
<section>
<title>Burning the ISO to a CD/DVD</title>
- <para>Whichever software you use, ensure that the option to burn an <emphasis role="bold">image</emphasis> is used, burn <emphasis role="bold">data</emphasis> or <emphasis role="bold">files</emphasis> is
- not correct. See <link ns4:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Writing_CD_and_DVD_images">the
+ <para>Whichever software you use, ensure that the option to burn
+ an<emphasis> image</emphasis> is used. Burn <emphasis>data</emphasis> or
+ <emphasis>files</emphasis> is NOT correct. See the <link ns4:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Writing_CD_and_DVD_images">the
Mageia wiki</link> for more information.</para>
</section>
<section>
<title>Dump the ISO to a USB stick</title>
- <para>All Mageia ISOs are hybrids, which means you can 'dump' them to a
- USB stick and then use it to boot and install the system.</para>
+ <para>All Mageia ISOs are hybrids, which means you can dump them to a
+ USB stick and then use that to boot and install the system.</para>
<warning>
- <para>"Dumping" an image onto a flash device destroys any previous
- file-system on the device; any existing data will be lost and the
- partition capacity will be reduced to the image size.</para>
+ <para>Dumping an image onto a flash device destroys any previous
+ file-system on the device and all existing data will be lost.</para>
</warning>
- <para>To recover the original capacity, you must redo partitioning and
- re-format the USB stick.</para>
+ <note>
+ <para>Also, the only partition on the flash device will then just be
+ the Mageia ISO partition.</para>
+ <para>So, if an ISO of about 4GB is written to an 8GB USB stick, the
+ stick will then only show up as 4GB. This is because the remaining 4GB
+ is no longer formatted - hence not currently available for use. To
+ recover the original capacity, you must reformat and repartition the
+ USB stick.</para>
+ </note>
<section>
<title>Using a graphical tool within Mageia</title>
<para>You can use a graphical tool like <link ns4:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/IsoDumper_Writing_ISO_images_on_USB_sticks">IsoDumper</link></para>
@@ -265,7 +305,7 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para><link ns4:href="http://rufus.akeo.ie/?locale=en_US">Rufus</link> using
- the "ISO image" option;</para>
+ the "ISO image" option</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para><link ns4:href="http://sourceforge.net/projects/win32diskimager">Win32
@@ -274,7 +314,7 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
</itemizedlist>
</section>
<section>
- <title>Using Command line within a GNU/Linux system</title>
+ <title>Using the Command line within a GNU/Linux system</title>
<warning>
<para>It is potentially *dangerous* to do this by hand. You risk
overwriting potentially valuable existing data if you specify the
@@ -285,35 +325,38 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
<para>Open a console</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Become a root (Administrator) user with the command
- <userinput>su -</userinput> (don't forget the final '-' )</para>
+ <para>Become a <emphasis>root</emphasis> (Administrator) user with
+ the command <command>su -</command> (don't forget the
+ <command>-</command> )</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="../Root.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="Root.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Plug in your USB stick (do not mount it, this also means do
- not open any application or file manager that could access or read
- it)</para>
+ <para>Plug in your USB stick - but do not mount it (this also
+ means do not open any application or file manager that could
+ access or read it)</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Enter the command <userinput>fdisk -l</userinput></para>
+ <para>Enter the command <command>fdisk -l</command></para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="../Fdisk.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="Fdisk.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Find the device name for your USB stick (by its size), for
- example <code>/dev/sdb</code> in the screenshot above, it is an 8GB USB stick.</para>
+ example <filename>/dev/sdb</filename> in the screenshot above, is
+ an 8GB USB stick.</para>
<para>Alternatively, you can find the device name with the command
- <code>dmesg</code>: towards the end of this example, you can see
- the device name starting with <emphasis>sd</emphasis>, and
- in this case, <emphasis>sdd</emphasis> is the
- actual device. You can also see that its size is 2GB:</para>
+ <command>dmesg</command>. Towards the end of the following
+ example, you can see the device name starting with
+ <filename>sd</filename>, and in this case,
+ <filename>sdd</filename> is the actual device. You can also see
+ that its size is 2GB:</para>
<para><screen>[72594.604531] usb 1-1: new high-speed USB device number 27 using xhci_hcd
[72594.770528] usb 1-1: New USB device found, idVendor=8564, idProduct=1000
[72594.770533] usb 1-1: New USB device strings: Mfr=1, Product=2, SerialNumber=3
@@ -334,19 +377,19 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
[72595.969446] sd 8:0:0:0: [sdd] Attached SCSI removable disk</screen></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Enter the command: <emphasis role="bold"># <userinput>dd
- if=path/to/the/ISO/file of=/dev/sdX
- bs=1M</userinput></emphasis></para>
- <para>Where X=your device name eg: /dev/sdd</para>
- <para>Example:<emphasis role="bold"> # <userinput>dd
+ <para>Enter the command: <command>dd if=path/to/the/ISO/file
+ of=/dev/sd<replaceable>X</replaceable> bs=1M</command></para>
+ <para>Where <replaceable>X</replaceable>=your device name eg:
+ <filename>/dev/sdd</filename></para>
+ <para>Example:<literal> dd
if=/home/user/Downloads/Mageia-6-x86_64-DVD.iso of=/dev/sdd
- bs=1M</userinput></emphasis></para>
+ bs=1M</literal></para>
<tip>
- <para>It might helpful to know that <emphasis role="bold">if</emphasis> stands for <emphasis role="bold">i</emphasis>nput <emphasis role="bold">f</emphasis>ile and <emphasis role="bold">of</emphasis> stands for <emphasis role="bold">o</emphasis>utput <emphasis role="bold">f</emphasis>ile</para>
+ <para>It might be helpful to know that <emphasis role="bold">if</emphasis> stands for <emphasis role="bold">i</emphasis>nput <emphasis role="bold">f</emphasis>ile and <emphasis role="bold">of</emphasis> stands for <emphasis role="bold">o</emphasis>utput <emphasis role="bold">f</emphasis>ile</para>
</tip>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Enter the command: # <userinput>sync</userinput></para>
+ <para>Enter the command: <command>sync</command></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>This is the end of the process, and you may now unplug your
@@ -356,4 +399,4 @@ Lebarhon updated for Mageia 6 2016 12 16 (still waiting for clarification about
</section>
</section>
</section>
-</section>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/acceptLicense.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/acceptLicense.xml
index b3b2508e..1f39e245 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/acceptLicense.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/acceptLicense.xml
@@ -21,6 +21,12 @@
<!-- JohnR 2012-04-19 language proofreading -->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/19 apb: Updated dx2-license.png to Mga6.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Slight reword to '..thanks for looking' sentence.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="acceptLicense-ti1">License and Release Notes</title>
</info>
@@ -40,19 +46,26 @@
<title xml:id="license-ti1">License Agreement</title>
</info>
- <para>Before installing <application>Mageia</application>, please read the
- license terms and conditions carefully.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Before installing Mageia, please read the license terms and
+ conditions carefully.</para>
+ </listitem>
- <para>These terms and conditions apply to the entire
- <application>Mageia</application> distribution and must be accepted before
- you can continue.</para>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>These terms and conditions apply to the entire Mageia
+ distribution and must be accepted before you can continue.</para>
+ </listitem>
- <para>To proceed, simply select <guilabel>Accept</guilabel> and then click
- on <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.</para>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>To proceed, simply select <emphasis>Accept</emphasis> and then
+ click on <emphasis>Next</emphasis></para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
<para>If you decide not to accept these conditions, then we thank you for
- looking. Clicking <guibutton>Quit</guibutton> will reboot your
- computer.</para>
+ your interest in Mageia. Clicking <emphasis>Quit</emphasis> will reboot
+ your computer.</para>
<!-- if you want two sections in a file, both need to be nested in a third section -
marja, 20120405 -->
@@ -67,8 +80,8 @@
<para>Release Notes</para>
-->
- <para>Important information about this release of
- <application>Mageia</application> can be viewed by clicking on the
- <guibutton>Release Notes</guibutton> button.</para>
+ <para>Important information about this particular Mageia release can be
+ viewed by clicking on the <emphasis>Release Notes</emphasis>
+ button.</para>
</section>
</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/addUser.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/addUser.xml
index bb398e43..13e08249 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/addUser.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/addUser.xml
@@ -1,17 +1,33 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="addUser">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="addUser" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
- <title xml:id="addUser-ti1">User and Superuser Management</title>
+ <title xml:id="addUser-ti1">User Management</title>
</info>
<!-- Lebarhon: 20170210 updated for Mageia 6 (umask)-->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and Typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/19 apb: Update dx2-setRootPassword.png to Mga6.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/21 apb: Changed title from 'User and Superuser Management' to 'User Management'. Docteam approved (plus, the SC title is User Management).
+ Also changed 'Advanced User Management' to 'User Management (advanced)'.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/24 apb: Changed list style.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-setRootPassword.png" align="center" revision="1" xml:id="setRootPassword-im1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-setRootPassword.png" format="PNG"
+ revision="1" xml:id="setRootPassword-im1"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="live-user1.png"/>
+ <imagedata fileref="live-user1.png" format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
@@ -21,17 +37,16 @@
Password:</title>
</info>
- <para>It is advisable for all <application>Mageia</application>
- installations to set a <emphasis role="bold">superuser</emphasis>
- (administrator) password, usually called the <emphasis>root
- password</emphasis> in Linux. As you type a password into the top box a
- shield will change from red to yellow to green depending on the strength
- of the password. A green shield shows you are using a strong password. You
- need to repeat the same password in the box underneath, to check that the
- first entry was not mistyped.</para>
+ <para>It is advisable for all Mageia installations to set a
+ <literal>superuser</literal> (Administrator) password, usually called the
+ <emphasis>root </emphasis>password in Linux. As you type a password into
+ the top box a shield will change from red-to-yellow-to-green depending on
+ the strength of the password. A green shield shows you are using a strong
+ password. You need to repeat the same password in the box underneath, to
+ check that the first entry was not mistyped.</para>
<note xml:id="givePassword">
- <para>All passwords are case sensitive. It is best to use a mixture of
+ <para>All passwords are case-sensitive. It is best to use a mixture of
letters (upper and lower case), numbers and other characters in a
password.</para>
</note>
@@ -42,42 +57,49 @@
<title xml:id="enterUser-ti3">Enter a user</title>
</info>
- <para>Add a user here. A regular user has fewer privileges than the
- <emphasis role="bold">superuser</emphasis> (root), but enough to use the
- internet, office applications or play games and anything else the average
- user might use their computer for.</para>
+ <para>Add a User here. A regular user has fewer privileges than the
+ <literal>superuser</literal> (root), but enough to use the Internet,
+ office applications or play games and anything else the average user might
+ use a computer for.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para><guibutton>Icon</guibutton>: if you click on this button it will
- change the user's icon.</para>
- </listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Icon</emphasis></para>
- <listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Real Name</guilabel>: Insert the user's real name into
- this text box.</para>
+ <para>Click on this button if you want to change the user's
+ icon</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Login Name</guilabel>: Enter the user login name or
- let DrakX use a version of the user's real name. <emphasis role="bold">The login name is case sensitive.</emphasis></para>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Real Name</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>Insert the user's real name into this text box</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Password</guilabel>: Type in the user password. There
- is a shield at the end of the text box that indicates the strength of
- the password. (See also <xref linkend="givePassword"/>)</para>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Login Name</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>Enter the user login name or let DrakX use a version of the
+ user's real name. <emphasis role="bold">The login name is
+ case-sensitive.</emphasis></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Password (again)</guilabel>: Retype the user password
- DrakX will check that you have not mistyped the password.</para>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Password</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>Type in the user password. There is a shield at the end of the
+ text box that indicates the strength of the password. (See also <xref
+ linkend="givePassword"/>)</para>
+
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Password (again):</emphasis> Retype the
+ user password. DrakX will check that you have not mistyped the
+ password.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<note>
- <para>Any users you added while installing Mageia, will have a home
- directory that is both read and write protected (umask=0027).</para>
+ <para>Any users added while installing Mageia, will have a home
+ directory that is both read and write protected (umask=0027)</para>
<para>You can add any extra needed users in the <emphasis>Configuration
- Summary</emphasis> step during the install. Choose <emphasis>User
@@ -88,31 +110,32 @@
</note>
</section>
- <section xml:id="addUserAdvanced" condition="classical">
+ <section condition="classical" xml:id="addUserAdvanced">
<info>
- <title xml:id="addUserAdvanced-ti3">Advanced User Management</title>
+ <title xml:id="addUserAdvanced-ti3">User Management (advanced)</title>
</info>
- <para>The <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> option allows you to edit
- further settings for the user you are adding.</para>
+ <para>The <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> option allows you to edit further
+ settings for the user you are adding.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Shell</guilabel>: This drop-down list allows you to
+ <para><emphasis>Shell</emphasis>: This drop-down list allows you to
change the shell available to any user you added in the previous
- screen. Options are <emphasis role="bold">Bash</emphasis>, <emphasis role="bold">Dash</emphasis> and <emphasis role="bold">Sh</emphasis></para>
+ screen. Options are <literal>Bash</literal>, <literal>Dash</literal>
+ and <literal>Sh</literal></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>User ID</guilabel>: Here you can set the <emphasis role="bold">user ID</emphasis> for any user you added in the previous
- screen. If you are unsure what the purpose of this is, then leave it
- blank.</para>
+ <para><emphasis>User ID</emphasis>: Here you can set the user ID for
+ any user you added in the previous screen. If you are unsure what the
+ purpose of this is, then leave it blank.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Group ID</guilabel>: This lets you set the <emphasis role="bold">group ID</emphasis>. Again, if unsure, leave it
- blank.</para>
+ <para><emphasis>Group ID</emphasis>: This lets you set the group ID.
+ Again, if unsure, leave it blank.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/add_supplemental_media.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/add_supplemental_media.xml
index 256cf9db..901a86be 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/add_supplemental_media.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/add_supplemental_media.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="add_supplemental_media" version="5.0" xml:lang="en">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:lang="en" xml:id="add_supplemental_media" version="5.0">
<info>
- <title xml:id="add_supplemental_media-ti1">Media Selection (Configure
- Supplemental Installation Media)</title>
+ <title xml:id="add_supplemental_media-ti1">Supplemental Installation
+ Media</title>
</info>
<!-- papoteur 2013-04-13 - created -->
@@ -10,40 +10,44 @@
<!-- marja 2013-04-16 s/a optical/an optcal/ s/support/disc/ s/or or/or/ s/at/during/ as suggested by Tristan Campbell -->
+ <!--2018/02/10 apb: Text and typgraphy.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/16 apb: Update dx2-add_supplemental_media.png to Mga6-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-add_supplemental_media.png" xml:id="dx2-add_supplemental_media-im1" align="center" revision="1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>This screen shows you the list of already recognized repositories. You
- can add other sources for packages, like an optical disc or a remote source.
+ <para>This screen shows you the list of already recognised repositories. You
+ can add other sources for packages, like an optical-disc or a remote source.
The source selection determines which packages will be available during the
- next steps.</para>
+ subsequent steps.</para>
<para>For a network source, there are two steps to follow:</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Choosing and activation of the network, if not already up.</para>
+ <para>Choosing and activating the network, if not already up.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Selecting a mirror or specifying a URL (very first entry). By
selecting a mirror, you have access to the selection of all repositories
- managed by Mageia, like the <emphasis role="bold">Nonfree</emphasis>,
- the <emphasis role="bold">Tainted</emphasis> repositories and the
- <emphasis role="bold">Updates</emphasis>. With the URL, you can
- designate a specific repository or your own NFS installation.</para>
+ managed by Mageia, like the <emphasis>Nonfree</emphasis>, the
+ <emphasis>Tainted</emphasis> repositories and the
+ <emphasis>Updates</emphasis>. With the URL, you can designate a specific
+ repository or your own NFS installation.</para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
<note>
- <para>If you are updating a 64 bit installation which may contain some 32
- bit packages, it is advised to use this screen to add an online mirror by
- ticking one of the Network protocols here. The 64-bit DVD ISO only
- contains 64-bit and noarch packages, it will not be able to update the
- 32-bit packages. However, after adding an online mirror, the installer
- will find the needed 32-bit packages there.</para>
+ <para>If you are updating a 64-bit installation which may contain some
+ 32-bit packages, it is advised to use this screen to add an online mirror
+ by selecting one of the Network protocols here. The 64-bit DVD ISO only
+ contains 64-bit and <emphasis>noarch</emphasis> packages, it will not be
+ able to update the 32-bit packages. However, after adding an online
+ mirror, the installer will find the needed 32-bit packages there.</para>
</note>
-</section>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/ask_mntpoint_s.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/ask_mntpoint_s.xml
index f2b70920..9ab8a986 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/ask_mntpoint_s.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/ask_mntpoint_s.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="ask_mntpoint_s" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="ask_mntpoint_s"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="ask_mntpoint_s-ti1">Choose the mount points</title>
</info>
@@ -23,55 +30,64 @@
<!-- 2012-04-19 Language proofreading done -->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2019/01/04 apb: Typo & minor reword on custom mount-points.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="chooseMountPoints-im1" align="center" fileref="dx2-chooseMountpoints.png" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-chooseMountpoints.png"
+ format="PNG" revision="1" xml:id="chooseMountPoints-im1"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="live-chooseMountpoints.png" align="center" xml:id="live-chooseMountPoints-im1" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-chooseMountpoints.png"
+ format="PNG" revision="1" xml:id="live-chooseMountPoints-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
<para>Here you see the Linux partitions that have been found on your
- computer. If you don't agree with the <application>DrakX</application>
- suggestions, you can change the mount points.</para>
-
- <note>
- <para>If you change anything, make sure you still have a <emphasis role="bold"><literal>/</literal></emphasis> (root) partition.</para>
- </note>
+ computer. If you don't agree with the DrakX suggestions, you can change the
+ mount points yourself.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Every partition is shown to the left as: <emphasis role="bold">Device (capacity, mount point, type).</emphasis></para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para><emphasis role="bold">Device</emphasis>, is made up of: <emphasis role="bold">hard drive</emphasis>, [<emphasis role="bold">hard drive
- name</emphasis> (letter)], <emphasis role="bold">partition
- number</emphasis> (for example, <emphasis role="bold">sda5</emphasis>).</para>
+ <para>To the left of the drop-down menus is a list of available
+ partitions. For example: <filename>sda</filename> is a hard drive - and
+ <filename>5</filename> is a <emphasis>partition number</emphasis>,
+ followed by the<emphasis> (capacity, mount point, filesystem
+ type)</emphasis> of the partition.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>If you have several partitions, you can choose various different
- mount points from the drop down menu, such as <emphasis role="bold">/</emphasis>, <emphasis role="bold"><literal>/home</literal></emphasis> and <emphasis role="bold">/var</emphasis>. You can even make your own mount points,
- for instance <emphasis role="bold"><literal>/video</literal></emphasis>
- for a partition where you want to store your films, or <emphasis role="bold">/Data</emphasis> (or some other name) for your data.</para>
+ <emphasis>mount points</emphasis> from the drop down menu, such as
+ <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/home</filename> and
+ <filename>/var</filename>. You can even make your own mount points, for
+ instance <filename>/video</filename> for a partition where you want to
+ store your films, or perhaps <filename>/Data</filename> for all your
+ data files.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>For any partitions that you don't need to make use of, you can leave the
- mount point field blank.</para>
+ <para>For any partitions that you don't need to make use of, you can
+ leave the mount point field blank.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<warning>
- <para>If you are not sure what to choose, click <emphasis role="bold">Previous</emphasis> to go back and then tick <guilabel>Custom
- disk partitioning</guilabel>, where, you can click on a partition to see
- its type and size.</para>
+ <para>If you make any changes here, ensure you still have a
+ <filename>/</filename> (root) partition.</para>
</warning>
+ <tip>
+ <para>If you are not sure what to choose, click
+ <emphasis>Previous</emphasis> to go back and then tick <emphasis>Custom
+ disk partitioning</emphasis>, where you can click on a partition to see
+ its type and size.</para>
+ </tip>
+
<para>If you are sure the mount points are correct, click on
- <guibutton>Next</guibutton>, and choose whether you only want to format the
- partition(s) DrakX suggests, or more.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <emphasis>Next</emphasis>, and choose whether you only want to format the
+ partition suggested by DrakX, or more.</para>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bestTime.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bestTime.xml
index e7227e6a..991822fe 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bestTime.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bestTime.xml
@@ -1,25 +1,15 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<section version="5.0" xml:id="bestTime"
- xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
- xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
- xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
- xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
- xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
- xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="bestTime">
+ <!--2018/03/01 apb: Slight adjustment to text-->
+ <!--2018/03/03/ apb: Redo definition for the Advanced option,-->
<info>
- <title xml:id="bestTime-ti1">Clock settings</title>
+ <title xml:id="bestTime-ti1">Clock Settings</title>
</info>
-
<mediaobject condition="live">
<imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-bestTime.png" format="PNG"
- revision="1" xml:id="bestTime-im1"/>
+ <imagedata format="PNG" align="center" fileref="live-bestTime.png" revision="1" xml:id="bestTime-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
-
- <para>In this step, you have to select on which time your internal clock is
- set, either local time or UTC time.</para>
-
- <para>In advanced tab, you will find more options about clock
- settings.</para>
-</section>
+ <para>Here, you can select whether your computer internal clock is set to
+ local time or UTC time.</para>
+ <para>In the <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> tab, you can enable automatic time synchronization and specify an NTP server.</para>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bootLive.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bootLive.xml
index bd74d9b9..5d05fb1f 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bootLive.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/bootLive.xml
@@ -1,33 +1,166 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xml:id="bootLive" version="5.0"><info><title xml:id="bootLive-ti1">Boot Mageia as Live system</title></info><section xml:id="bootLive-1"><info><title xml:id="bootLive1-ti1">Booting the medium</title></info><section><info><title xml:id="bootLive11-ti1">From a disc</title></info><para>You can boot directly from the media you used to burn your image
- (CD-ROM, DVD-ROM...). You usually just need to insert it in your CD/DVD
- drive for the bootloader to launch the installation automatically after
- rebooting the computer. If that does not happen you may need to
- reconfigure your BIOS or press one key that will offer you to choose the
- peripheral from which the computer will boot.</para><para>According to which hardware you have, and how it is configured,
- you get either one or another of the two screens below.</para></section><section><info><title xml:id="bootLive12-ti1">From a USB device</title></info><para>You can boot from the USB device on which you dumped your image
- ISO. According to your BIOS settings, the computer boots perhaps
- directly on the USB device already plugged in a port. If that does not
- happen you may need to reconfigure your BIOS or press one key that will
- offer you to choose the peripheral from which the computer will
- boot.</para></section></section><section xml:id="biosmode"><info><title xml:id="biosmode-ti1">In BIOS/CSM/Legacy mode</title></info><mediaobject><imageobject><imagedata fileref="../live-bootCSM.png"/></imageobject><caption><para>First screen while booting in BIOS mode</para></caption></mediaobject><para>In the middle menu, you have the choice between three
- actions:</para><itemizedlist><listitem><para>Boot Mageia: That means Mageia 5 will start from the connected
- media (CD/DVD or USB stick) without writing anything on the disk, so
- expect a very slow system. Once the boot is done, you can proceed to
- the installation on a hard disk.</para></listitem><listitem><para>Install Mageia: This choice will directly install Mageia on a
- hard disk.</para></listitem><listitem><para>Boot from hard disk: This choice allows to boot from hard disk,
- as usual, when no media (CD/DVD or USB stick) is connected. (not
- working with Mageia 5).</para></listitem></itemizedlist><para>In the bottom menu, are the Boot Options:</para><itemizedlist><listitem><para>F1 - Help. Explain the options "splash", "apm", "acpi" and
- "Ide"</para></listitem><listitem><para>F2 - Language. Choose the display language of the
- screens.</para></listitem><listitem><para>F3 - Screen resolution. Choose between text, 640x400, 800x600,
- 1024x728</para></listitem><listitem><para>F4 - CD-Rom. CD-Rom or Other. Normally, the installation is
- performed from the inserted installation medium. Here, select other
- sources, like FTP or NFS servers. If the installation is carried out
- in a network with an SLP server, select one of the installation
- sources available on the server with this option.</para></listitem><listitem><para>F5 - Driver. Yes or No. The system is aware about the presence
- of an optional disk with a driver update and will require its
- insertion during installation process.</para></listitem><listitem><para>F6 - Kernel options. This is a way to specify options according
- to your hardware and the drivers to use.</para></listitem></itemizedlist></section><section xml:id="uefimode"><info><title xml:id="uefimode-ti1">In UEFI mode</title></info><mediaobject condition="live"><imageobject><imagedata format="PNG" fileref="../live-bootUEFI.png" align="center" xml:id="bootUEFI-im1" revision="1"/></imageobject><caption><para>First screen while booting on UEFI system from disk</para></caption></mediaobject><para>You have only the choice to run Mageia in Live mode (first choice)
- or to process the installation (second choice).</para><para>If you booted from a USB stick, you get two supplemental lines which
- are a duplicata of the previous lines suffixed with "USB". You have to
- choose them.</para><para>In each case, the first steps will be the same to choose language,
- timezone and keyboard, then the processes differ, with <link linkend="testing">additional steps in Live mode</link>.</para></section></section> \ No newline at end of file
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0">
+ <!--2018/03/01 apb: a) center-align live-bootCSM.png b) Redo/expand text.-->
+ <!--2018/02/02 apb: a) update live-bootCSM.png and redo corresponding text.-->
+ <!--2018/02/03 apb: a) A couple of typos and slight adjustment to some text. b) Added definition for F6 Default boot option.-->
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="bootLive-ti1">Boot Mageia as Live system</title>
+ </info>
+ <section xml:id="bootLive-1">
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="bootLive1-ti1">Booting the medium</title>
+ </info>
+ <para>You can boot directly from a Live DVD or USB. Usually, you just need
+ to plug the USB device in or place the DVD in the drive and restart the
+ computer.</para>
+ <para>If the computer does not automatically boot from the USB or DVD you
+ may need to reconfigure your BIOS Boot Disk priority. Alternatively, you
+ might try accessing the boot device menu to select a device from which the
+ computer will boot.</para>
+ <tip>
+ <para>To access the BIOS or boot menu when the computer is starting, you
+ can try pressing either <keycap>F2</keycap>, <keycap>Del</keycap> or
+ <keycap>Esc</keycap> for the BIOS, or <keycap>Esc</keycap>,
+ <keycap>F8</keycap>, <keycap>F10</keycap> or <keycap>F11</keycap> for
+ the boot device menu. These (fairly common) keys are just a selection of
+ possible options though.</para>
+ </tip>
+ <note>
+ <para>The actual screen that you will first see when booting from the
+ Live media will depend on whether your computer motherboard is of the
+ Legacy (BIOS) or UEFI type.</para>
+ </note>
+ </section>
+ <section xml:id="biosmode">
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="biosmode-ti1">In BIOS/CSM/Legacy mode</title>
+ </info>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <title>Main Menu</title>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Boot Mageia</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This option will boot the Mageia Live system from the connected DVD/USB media (expect a very slow system compared to an installed OS).</para>
+ <para>Once the boot is done, you can proceed to the installation.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">+ use non-free video drivers (slower
+ to boot)</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Boot the Mageia Live system using non-free video
+ drivers</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Install Mageia</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This option will install Mageia to a hard disk.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">+ use non-free video drivers (slower
+ to boot)</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Install Mageia using non-free video drivers</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="live-bootCSM.png" align="center"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <caption>
+ <para>First screen while booting in BIOS mode</para>
+ </caption>
+ </mediaobject>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <title>Function Keys</title>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><keycap>F1</keycap> <emphasis role="bold">Help</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Within any of the <keycap>F2</keycap> to <keycap>F6</keycap>
+ options, you can view relevant help by pressing
+ <keycap>F1</keycap>.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><keycap>F2</keycap> <emphasis role="bold">Language</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Press <keycap>F2</keycap> to have the installer use a specific
+ language during the installation. Use the arrow keys to select the
+ language then press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><keycap>F3</keycap> <emphasis role="bold">Video
+ Mode</emphasis></para>
+ <para>If needed, change the screen resolution by pressing
+ <keycap>F3</keycap>. Options are: 640x480, 800x600, 1024x768.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><keycap>F4</keycap> <emphasis role="bold">Source</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Normally, the installation is performed from the inserted installation medium. Here, you may select other sources, like FTP or NFS servers.</para>
+ <para>If the installation is carried out in a network with an SLP server, then select one of the installation sources available on the server with this option.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><keycap>F5</keycap> <emphasis role="bold">Driver</emphasis></para>
+ <para>If you have a driver update that you wish to use, select this
+ option and then answer <emphasis>Yes</emphasis>. You will be prompted
+ to insert the update disc at the appropriate time.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><keycap>F6</keycap> <emphasis role="bold">Kernel
+ Options</emphasis></para>
+ <para>If you experience problems with the installation, you could try
+ modifying the default settings using the <emphasis>Kernel
+ Option</emphasis> menu:</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Default:</emphasis> splash quiet noiswmd resume audit=0</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Safe Settings:</emphasis>
+ <literal>apm=off acpi=off mce=off barrier=off ide=nodma idewait=50
+ i8042.nomux psmouse.proto=bare irqpoll
+ pci=nommconf</literal></para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">No ACPI:</emphasis> (Advanced
+ Configuration and Power Interface): Power management features are
+ not used.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">No Local APIC:</emphasis> (Local
+ Advanced Programmable Interrupt Controller): CPU interrupt. Select
+ this option if you experience system misbehaviour like a kernel
+ panic in relation to APIC.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ <para>If you open any of the above <keycap>F6</keycap> menu items, and
+ then click on <keycap>F1</keycap>, an info window will open to show
+ more details for that particular item:</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </section>
+ <section xml:id="uefimode">
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="uefimode-ti1">In UEFI mode</title>
+ </info>
+ <mediaobject condition="live">
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="live-bootUEFI.png" align="center" xml:id="bootUEFI-im1" revision="1"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <caption>
+ <para>First screen while booting in UEFI mode</para>
+ </caption>
+ </mediaobject>
+ <para>In UEFI mode, you have just the two menu options to choose from:</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Boot Mageia</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This option will boot the Mageia Live system from the connected Dvd/USB media (expect a very slow system compared to an installed OS). Once the boot is done, you can proceed to the installation</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Install Mageia</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This option will install Mageia to a hard disk.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ <note>
+ <para>If you booted from a USB stick, you will see the above menu
+ options duplicated, and in this case, you should choose from the menu
+ pair that will be suffixed with "USB".</para>
+ </note>
+ </section>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/chooseDesktop.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/chooseDesktop.xml
index b9f9ab00..dbb1193f 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/chooseDesktop.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/chooseDesktop.xml
@@ -1,29 +1,51 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="chooseDesktop">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="chooseDesktop"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Some wording and typograpy.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Change last 2 paras to bulleted-->
+
+ <!--2019/01/05 apb: Slight reword to para's 1,2 & 4.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="chooseDesktop-ti1">Desktop Selection</title>
</info>
<!--Lebarhon 20170209 updated SC-->
- <para>Depending on your selection here, you may be offered further screens
- to fine-tune your choice.</para>
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
- <para>After the selection step(s), you will see a slide-show during package
- installation. The slide show can be disabled by pressing the
- <guilabel>Details</guilabel> button</para>
+ <para>Some choices made here will open other screens with related
+ options.</para>
+
+ <para>After the selection step(s), you will see a slideshow during the
+ installation of required packages. The slideshow can be disabled by pressing
+ the <emphasis>Details</emphasis> button.</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-chooseDesktop.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-chooseDesktop.png" format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>Choose whether you prefer to use the <application>KDE</application>
- <emphasis role="bold">Plasma</emphasis> or <application>GNOME</application>
- desktop environment. Both come with a full set of useful applications and
- tools. Tick <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> if you wish to use neither (or even
- use both), or if you want to modify the default software choices for these
- desktop environments. The <application>LXDE</application> desktop, for
- instance, is lighter than the previous two, sporting less eye candy and
- fewer packages installed by default.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Choose whether you prefer to use the KDE Plasma or GNOME desktop
+ environment. Both come with a full set of useful applications and
+ tools.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Select <emphasis>Custom</emphasis> if you do not wish to use
+ either (or, actually use both) of these, or if you want to modify the
+ default software choices for these desktop environments. The LXDE
+ desktop, for instance, is lighter than the previous two, sporting less
+ eye candy and having fewer packages installed by default.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackageGroups.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackageGroups.xml
index 440022fb..f4e5cfe7 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackageGroups.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackageGroups.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,12 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="choosePackageGroups">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="choosePackageGroups" xreflabel="Choose Package Groups">
<info>
<title xml:id="choosePackageGroups-ti1">Package Group Selection</title>
</info>
<!--Lebarhon 20170209 Updated SC-->
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: add xreflabel to this section.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-choosePackageGroups.png" align="center"/>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackagesTree.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackagesTree.xml
index 0314129f..f240e351 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackagesTree.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/choosePackagesTree.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,14 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="choosePackagesTree" version="5.0">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="choosePackagesTree" xreflabel="Choose Packages Tree" version="5.0">
<info>
<title xml:id="choosePackagesTree-ti1">Choose Individual Packages</title>
</info>
<!--2012-12-26 marja - exported this section from choosePackages.xml to start a new page-->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: add xreflabel to this section.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-choosePackagesTree.png" align="center"/>
@@ -14,9 +18,9 @@
<para>Here you can add or remove any extra packages to customize your
installation.</para>
- <para>After having made your choice, you can click on the <guibutton>floppy
- icon</guibutton> at the bottom of the page to save your choice of packages
- (saving to a USB key works, too). You can then use this file to install the
- same packages on another system, by pressing the same button during install
- and choosing to load it.</para>
+ <para>After having made your choice, you can click on the
+ <emphasis>floppy</emphasis> icon at the bottom of the page to save your
+ choice of packages (saving to a USB key works, too). You can then use this
+ file to install the same packages on another system, by pressing the same
+ button during install and choosing to load it.</para>
</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureServices.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureServices.xml
index 24a75c40..d82144da 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureServices.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureServices.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="configureServices">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xreflabel="Configure Services" version="5.0" xml:id="configureServices">
<info>
<title xml:id="configureServices-ti1">Configure your Services</title>
</info>
@@ -7,6 +7,10 @@
<!-- 2013-05-05 marja - added screenshot -->
+ <!-- 2018/02/16 apb: Minor text adjustment.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: a) add xreflabel for this section. b) Added some bullets to the text.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-configureServices.png" xml:id="configureServices-im1" align="center" revision="1"/>
@@ -16,14 +20,19 @@
<para xml:id="configureServices-pa1" revision="1">Here you can choose which
services should start when you boot your system.</para>
- <para xml:id="configureServices-pa2" revision="1">Click on a triangle to
- expand a group to all the relevant services.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="configureServices-pa3" revision="1">The settings DrakX chose
- are usually good.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="configureServices-pa4" revision="1">If you highlight a
- service, some information about it is shown in the info box below.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para xml:id="configureServices-pa2" revision="1">Click on a triangle to
+ expand a group to all the relevant services. The settings DrakX chose
+ are usually good.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para xml:id="configureServices-pa4" revision="1">If you highlight a
+ service, some information about it is shown in the info box
+ below.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
<para xml:id="configureServices-pa5" revision="1">Only change things when
you know very well what you are doing.</para>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureTimezoneUTC.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureTimezoneUTC.xml
index 0210abad..a06ff733 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureTimezoneUTC.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureTimezoneUTC.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="configureTimezoneUTC" version="5.0">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xreflabel="Configure Timezone" xml:id="configureTimezoneUTC" version="5.0">
<info>
<title xml:id="configureTimezoneUTC-ti6">Configure your Timezone</title>
</info>
@@ -7,19 +7,27 @@
<!-- 2013-05-05 marja - added screenshot -->
+ <!--2018/02/13 apb: Minor text adjustment.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Added xreflabel to this section.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
<imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="configureTimezoneUTC-im1" align="center" fileref="dx2-configureTimezoneUTC.png" revision="1"/>
</imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="live-timeZone.png" condition="live"/>
+ <imageobject condition="live">
+ <imagedata format="png" fileref="live-timeZone.png" align="center"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para xml:id="configureTimezoneUTC-pa1" revision="1">Choose your time-zone
- by choosing your country or a city close to you in the same
- time-zone.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para xml:id="configureTimezoneUTC-pa1" revision="1">Choose your
+ timezone by choosing your country, or a city close to you in the same
+ timezone.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
<para xml:id="configureTimezoneUTC-pa2" revision="1">In the next screen you
can choose to set your hardware clock to local time or to GMT, also known as
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_card_list.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_card_list.xml
index 8bab1ffb..3f43ec2b 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_card_list.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_card_list.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="configureX_card_list" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="configureX_card_list"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<!-- Initiated by Marja 2012-08-08 -->
<!-- Further text JohnR 2012-08-29 -->
@@ -9,6 +16,10 @@
<!-- Done corrections accordind to tmb remarks. Papoteur -->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/21 apb: Merge last 2 paras + slight reword.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="configureX_card_list-ti1">Choose an X Server (Configure
your Graphic Card)</title>
@@ -16,7 +27,8 @@
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="configureX_card_list-im1" align="center" fileref="dx2-configureX_card_list.png" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-configureX_card_list.png"
+ format="PNG" revision="1" xml:id="configureX_card_list-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
@@ -26,34 +38,34 @@
<para>If the installer has not correctly detected your graphic card and you
know which one you have, you can select it from the tree by: <itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>vendor</para>
+ <para>Vendor</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>then the name of your card</para>
+ <para>then the make of your card</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>and the type of card</para>
+ <para>and the model of card</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist></para>
<para>If you cannot find your card in the vendor lists (because it's not yet
in the database or it's an older card) you may find a suitable driver in the
- <emphasis role="bold">Xorg</emphasis> category, which provides more than 40
- generic and open source video card drivers. If you still can't find a
- specific driver for your card there is the option of using the <emphasis role="bold">vesa</emphasis> driver which provides basic capabilities.</para>
+ <emphasis>Xorg</emphasis> category, which provides more than 40 generic and
+ open source video card drivers. If you still can't find a specific driver
+ for your card there is the option of using the VESA driver which provides
+ basic capabilities.</para>
- <para>Be aware that if you select an incompatible driver you may only have
- access to the <emphasis role="bold">Command-line</emphasis>
- Interface.</para>
+ <caution>
+ <para>Be aware that if you select an incompatible driver you may only have
+ access to the <emphasis>Command Line Interface</emphasis></para>
+ </caution>
<para>Some video card manufacturers provide proprietary drivers for Linux
- which may only be available in the <emphasis role="bold">Nonfree</emphasis>
- repository and in some cases only from the card manufacturers'
- websites.</para>
-
- <para>The <emphasis role="bold">Nonfree</emphasis> repository needs to be
- explicitly enabled to access them. If you didn't enable it previously, you
- should do this after your first reboot.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ which may only be available in the <emphasis>Nonfree</emphasis> repository
+ and in some cases only from the card manufacturers' websites. The
+ <emphasis>Nonfree</emphasis> repository needs to be explicitly enabled to
+ access them. If you didn't enable it previously, you should do this after
+ your first reboot.</para>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_chooser.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_chooser.xml
index fc1ea70b..8551977c 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_chooser.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_chooser.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,12 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="configureX_chooser" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="configureX_chooser"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="configureX_chooser-ti1">Graphic Card and Monitor
Configuration</title>
@@ -6,62 +14,86 @@
<!-- Marja 2012-08-10, copied setupX.xml to this file and replaced all "setupX" in the code by "configureX_chooser", because this is the correct filename for this page-->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Some text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/21 apb: a) Changed main options list style. b) Slight reword of 'wrong refresh rates' warning.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/23 apb: Typo.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="configureX_chooser-im1" fileref="dx2-configureX_chooser.png" align="center" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-configureX_chooser.png"
+ format="PNG" revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
<para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa1">No matter which graphical
environment (also known as desktop environment) you chose for this install
- of <application>Mageia</application>, they are all based on a graphical user
- interface system called <acronym>X Window System</acronym>, or simply
- <acronym>X</acronym>. So in order for <acronym>KDE</acronym> Plasma,
- <acronym>GNOME</acronym>, <acronym>LXDE</acronym> or any other graphical
- environment to work well, the following <acronym>X</acronym> settings need
- to be correct. Choose the correct settings if none are shown, or if you
- think the details are incorrect.</para>
+ of Mageia, they are all based on a graphical user interface system called
+ <literal>X Window System</literal>, or simply <quote>X</quote>. So in order
+ for KDE Plasma, GNOME, LXDE or any other graphical environment to work well,
+ the following <quote>X</quote> settings need to be correct. Choose the
+ appropriate settings - if none are shown, or if you think the details are
+ incorrect.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa2" revision="1"><emphasis><guibutton>Graphic
- card</guibutton></emphasis>: Choose your card from the list if
- needed.</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa2"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Graphic Card</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>If you need to, you can select a specific card from this
+ expandable list. See <xref linkend="configureX_card_list"/>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa3" revision="1"><emphasis><guibutton>Monitor</guibutton></emphasis>:
- You can choose <guilabel>Plug'n Play</guilabel> if applicable, or choose
- your monitor from the <guilabel>Vendor</guilabel> or
- <guilabel>Generic</guilabel> list. Choose <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> if
- you prefer to manually set the horizontal and vertical refresh rates of
- your monitor.</para>
-
- <warning>
- <para xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa3a" revision="1">Incorrect refresh
- rates may damage your monitor</para>
- </warning>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa3"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Monitor</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>You can choose Plug'n Play, if applicable, or choose your monitor
+ from the <emphasis>Vendor</emphasis> or <emphasis>Generic</emphasis>
+ list. Choose <emphasis>Custom</emphasis> if you prefer to manually set
+ the horizontal and vertical refresh rates of your monitor. See <xref
+ linkend="configureX_monitor"/>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa4" revision="1"><emphasis><guibutton>Resolution</guibutton></emphasis>:
- The resolution and color depth of your monitor can be set here.</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa4"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Resolution</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>The resolution and color depth of your monitor can be set
+ here</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa5" revision="1"><emphasis><guibutton>Test</guibutton></emphasis>:
- The test button does not always appear during install. If the option is
- there, and you test your settings, you should be ask whether your
- settings are correct. If you answer <emphasis role="bold">yes</emphasis>, the settings will be kept. If you don't see
- anything, you'll return to the configuration screen and be able to
- reconfigure everything until the test result is satisfactory. If the
- test option is not available, then make sure your settings are on the
- safe side.</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa5"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Test</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>The test button does not always appear during install. If the
+ option is there, and you test your settings, you should be asked whether
+ your settings are correct. If you answer <emphasis>Yes</emphasis>, the
+ settings will be kept. If you don't see anything, you'll return to the
+ configuration screen and be able to reconfigure everything until the
+ test result is satisfactory. If the test option is not available, then
+ make sure your settings are on the safe side.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa6" revision="1"><emphasis><guibutton>Options</guibutton></emphasis>:
- Here you can choose to enable or disable various options.</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa6"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Options</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>Here you can choose to enable or disable various options</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+
+ <warning>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_chooser-pa3a">There is a risk of
+ damaging a monitor if you choose refresh rates that are outside the
+ frequency range of that monitor. This applies to older CRT displays:
+ modern monitors will reject an unsupported frequency and normally enter
+ standby mode.</para>
+ </warning>
+
+ <xi:include href="configureX_card_list.xml"/>
+
+ <xi:include href="configureX_monitor.xml"/>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_monitor.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_monitor.xml
index 0884c5fd..e31a96f1 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_monitor.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/configureX_monitor.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="configureX_monitor" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="configureX_monitor"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<!-- Initiated by Marga 2012-8-09 -->
<!-- Further text JohnR 2012-08-30 -->
@@ -7,16 +14,21 @@
<!---->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Change list style.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="configureX_monitor-ti1">Choosing your Monitor</title>
</info>
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa1" revision="1">DrakX has a very
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa1">DrakX has a very
comprehensive database of monitors and will usually correctly identify
yours.</para>
<warning>
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa1w" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Selecting a monitor with different characteristics could
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa1w"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Selecting a monitor with different characteristics could
damage your monitor or video hardware. Please don't try something without
knowing what you are doing.</emphasis> If in doubt you should consult your
monitor documentation.</para>
@@ -24,54 +36,74 @@
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="configureX_monitor-im1" fileref="dx2-configureX_monitor.png" align="center" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-configureX_monitor.png"
+ format="PNG" revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa2" revision="1"><emphasis>Custom</emphasis></para>
-
- <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa3">This option allows you to
- set two critical parameters, the vertical refresh rate and the horizontal
- sync rate. Vertical refresh determines how often the screen is refreshed and
- horizontal sync is the rate at which scan lines are displayed.</para>
-
- <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa4">It is <emphasis>VERY
- IMPORTANT</emphasis> that you do not specify a monitor type with a sync
- range that is beyond the capabilities of your monitor: you may damage your
- monitor. If in doubt, choose a conservative setting and consult your monitor
- documentation.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa5" revision="1"><emphasis>Plug 'n
- Play</emphasis></para>
-
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa6" revision="1">This is the default
- option and tries to determine the monitor type from the monitor
- database.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa7" revision="1"><emphasis>Vendor</emphasis></para>
+ <variablelist spacing="compact">
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa2">Custom</term>
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa8" revision="1">If the installer has not
- correctly detected your monitor and you know which one you have, you can
- select it from the tree by selecting: <itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>vendor</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa3">This option allows
+ you to set two critical parameters: the vertical refresh rate and the
+ horizontal sync rate. Vertical refresh determines how often the screen
+ is refreshed and horizontal sync is the rate at which scan lines are
+ displayed.</para>
+
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa4">It is
+ <emphasis>VERY IMPORTANT</emphasis> that you do not specify a monitor
+ type with a sync range that is beyond the capabilities of your
+ monitor: you may damage your monitor. If in doubt, choose a
+ conservative setting and consult your monitor documentation.</para>
</listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa5">Plug'n Play</term>
<listitem>
- <para>the monitor manufacturers name</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa6">This is the default
+ option and automatically tries to determine the monitor type from the
+ monitor database.</para>
</listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa7">Vendor</term>
<listitem>
- <para>the monitor description</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa8">If the installer
+ has not correctly detected your monitor and you know which one you
+ have, you can select it from the tree by selecting:</para>
</listitem>
- </itemizedlist></para>
+ </varlistentry>
+ </variablelist>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Manufacturer</para>
+ </listitem>
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa9" revision="1"><emphasis>Generic</emphasis></para>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Monitor model</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
- <para xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa10" revision="1">selecting this group
- will list nearly 30 display configurations such as 1024x768 @ 60Hz and
- includes flat panel displays as used in laptops. This is often a good
- monitor selection group if you need to use the <emphasis role="bold">Vesa</emphasis> card driver when your video hardware cannot be
- determined automatically. Once again it may be wise to be conservative in
- your selections.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <variablelist spacing="compact">
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa9">Generic</term>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="configureX_monitor-pa10">Selecting this
+ group will list nearly 30 display configurations such as 1024x768 @
+ 60Hz and includes flat-panel displays as used in laptops. This is
+ often a good monitor selection group if you need to use the VESA card
+ driver when your video hardware cannot be determined automatically.
+ Once again it may be wise to be conservative in your
+ selections.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+ </variablelist>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/diskdrake.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/diskdrake.xml
index a36e49df..90caf8e7 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/diskdrake.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/diskdrake.xml
@@ -1,76 +1,118 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="diskdrake">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xreflabel="DiskDrake" xml:id="diskdrake"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<!-- Lebarhon 2016 12 16 updated for Mageia 6
Lebarhon 20170902 added SC-->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/17 apb: Fix a couple of tags that were out of place + added 'xreflabel="DiskDrake" at start of doc.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/27 apb: Reformat the text and add titles for the boot partition SC's.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/27 apb: Slight reword to 1st bullet-point.-->
+
<info>
- <title xml:id="diskdrake-ti1">Custom disk partitioning with
+ <title xml:id="diskdrake-ti1">Custom Disk Partitioning with
DiskDrake</title>
</info>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-diskdrake.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-diskdrake.png"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-diskdrake.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-diskdrake.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="diskdrake-pa3">Modify the layout of your
+ disk(s) here. You can remove or create partitions, change the filesystem
+ or size of a partition and even view their details before you
+ start.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="diskdrake-pa4">There is a tab at the top for
+ every detected hard disk (or other storage device, like a USB key). In
+ the screenshot above there are two available devices: <filename>sda
+ </filename>and <filename>sdb</filename>.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="diskdrake-pa6">For all other actions: click
+ on the desired partition first. Then view it, or choose a filesystem and
+ a mount point, resize it or wipe it. <emphasis>Expert mode</emphasis>
+ provides more options such as to label (name) a partition, or to choose
+ a partition type.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="diskdrake-pa6a">Continue until you have
+ adjusted everything to your satisfaction, then click
+ <emphasis>Done</emphasis> when you're ready.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+
<warning>
- <para revision="3" xml:id="diskdrake-pa1">If you wish to use encryption on
- your <emphasis role="bold">/</emphasis> partition you must ensure that you
- have a separate <emphasis role="bold">/boot</emphasis> partition. The
- encryption option for the <emphasis role="bold">/boot</emphasis> partition
- must NOT be set, otherwise your system will be unbootable.</para>
+ <orderedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="diskdrake-pa5">Take care with the
+ <emphasis>Clear all</emphasis> option, use it only if you are sure you
+ want to wipe all partitions on the selected storage device.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="3" xml:id="diskdrake-pa1">If you wish to use
+ encryption on your <filename>/</filename> partition you must ensure
+ that you have a separate <filename>/boot</filename> partition. The
+ encryption option for the <filename>/boot</filename> partition must
+ NOT be set, otherwise your system will be unbootable.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </orderedlist>
</warning>
- <para xml:id="diskdrake-pa3" revision="2">Modify the layout of your disk(s)
- here. You can remove or create partitions, change the filesystem of a
- partition or change its size and even view their details before you
- start.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="diskdrake-pa4" revision="1">There is a tab at the top for
- every detected hard disk (or other storage device like a USB key). In the
- screen-shot above there are two available devices: <emphasis role="bold">sda
- </emphasis>and <emphasis role="bold">sdb</emphasis>.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="diskdrake-pa5" revision="1">Take care with the <guibutton>Clear
- all</guibutton> option, use it only if you are sure you want to wipe all
- partitions on the selected storage device.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="diskdrake-pa6" revision="1">For all other actions: click on
- the desired partition first. Then view it, or choose a filesystem and a
- mount point, resize it or wipe it. <guibutton>Expert mode</guibutton>
- provides more options such as a label (give a name to) a partition, or to
- choose a partition type.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="diskdrake-pa6a" revision="1">Continue until you have adjusted
- everything to your satisfaction.</para>
+ <important>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>If you are installing Mageia on a UEFI system, check that an ESP
+ (EFI System Partition) is present and correctly mounted on
+ <filename>/boot/EFI</filename>. See Figure 1 below.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>If you are installing Mageia on a Legacy/GPT system, check that
+ a BIOS boot partition is present and of the correct type. See Figure 2
+ below.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </important>
+
+ <figure>
+ <title>EFI System Partition</title>
- <para xml:id="diskdrake-pa7" revision="1">Click <guibutton>Done</guibutton>
- when you're ready.</para>
-
- <note>
- <para>If you are installing Mageia on a UEFI system, check that an ESP
- (EFI System Partition) is present and correctly mounted on /boot/EFI (see
- below)</para>
-
- <para><mediaobject>
- <imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-diskdrake2.png" align="center"/>
- </imageobject>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject condition="classical">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-diskdrake2.png"/>
+ </imageobject>
- <imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-diskdrake2.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject></para>
- </note>
+ <imageobject condition="live">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-diskdrake2.png"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+ </figure>
- <note>
- <para>If you are installing Mageia on a Legacy/GPT system, check that a
- BIOS boot partition is present and of the correct type</para>
+ <figure>
+ <title>BIOS boot partition</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
@@ -81,5 +123,5 @@ Lebarhon 20170902 added SC-->
<imagedata align="center" fileref="live-doPartitionDisks3.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- </note>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ </figure>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/doPartitionDisks.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/doPartitionDisks.xml
index 46130388..09b3f106 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/doPartitionDisks.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/doPartitionDisks.xml
@@ -1,63 +1,101 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="doPartitionDisks">
- <!---->
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="doPartitionDisks"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+ <!--lebarhon 20161216 updated for Mageia 6
+
+lebarhon 20170209 added SC-->
- <!-- lebarhon 20161216 updated for Mageia 6
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography. Added link to diskdrake in 2nd Note-->
-lebarhon 20170209 added SC-->
+ <!--2018/02/17 apb: Centre-align last two PNG's. Also, fix some wonky XML formatting.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/17 apb: Moved 'Erase ...' & 'Custom ...' list items up with the other list items. I can see the reason for splitting the list with the example SC,
+ but I think this way is clearer (flow) overall. I don't believe that combining the list will interfere with the example SC and the relevant list item.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/21 apb: Changed list styles.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/24 apb: Changed list styles.-->
<info>
- <title xml:id="doPartitionDisks-ti1">Partitioning</title>
+ <title xml:id="doPartitionDisks-ti1">Suggested Partitioning</title>
</info>
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa1" revision="1">In this screen you can see
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa1">In this screen you can see
the content of your hard drive(s) along with the DrakX partitioning
- proposals for where to install <application>Mageia</application>.</para>
+ proposals for where to install Mageia.</para>
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa2" revision="1">The options available from
- those shown below will vary according to the layout and content of your
- particular hard drive(s).</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa2">The actual options
+ available from those shown below will vary according to the layout and
+ content of your particular hard drive(s).</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks.png"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-doPartitionDisks.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-doPartitionDisks.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa3"><itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa4">Use Existing
- Partitions</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa5" revision="1">If this option is
- available, then existing Linux compatible partitions have been found
- and may be used for the installation.</para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa6" revision="1">Use Free Space</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa7" revision="1">If you have unused
- space on your hard drive then this option will use it for your new
- Mageia installation.</para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa8" revision="1">Use Free Space on a
- Windows Partition</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa9" revision="1">If you have unused
- space on an existing Windows partition, the installer may offer to use
- it.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa10" revision="2">This can be a useful
- way of making room for your new Mageia installation, but is a risky
- operation so you should make sure you have backed up all important
- files!</para>
-
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <title>Main Options</title>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa4"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Use Existing Partitions</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa5">If this option is
+ available, then existing Linux compatible partitions have been found and
+ may be used for the installation.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa6"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Use Free Space</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa7">If you have unused
+ space on your hard drive then this option will use it for your new
+ Mageia installation.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa8"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Use Free Space on a Windows Partition</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="suggestedPartitioning-pa9">If you have unused
+ space on an existing Windows partition, the installer may offer to use
+ it. This can be a useful way of making room for your new Mageia
+ installation, but is a risky operation so you should make sure you have
+ backed up all important files!</para>
+
+ <para>With this option, the installer displays the remaining Windows
+ partition in light blue and the proposed Mageia partition in dark blue
+ with their intended sizes just underneath. You have the option to modify
+ these sizes by clicking and dragging the gap between both partitions.
+ See the following screenshot:</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa12"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Erase and use Entire Disk</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa13">This option will
+ allocate the entire drive for Mageia</para>
+
+ <warning>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa14">This will erase ALL
+ data on the selected hard drive. Take care! If you intend to use part
+ of the disk for something else, or you already have data on the drive
+ that you are not prepared to lose, then do not use this option.</para>
+ </warning>
+
+ <important>
<para revision="3" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa11">Note that this
involves shrinking the size of the Windows partition. The partition
must be "clean", meaning that Windows must have closed down correctly
@@ -65,133 +103,137 @@ lebarhon 20170209 added SC-->
although this is not a guarantee that all files in the partition have
been moved out of the area that is about to be used. It is highly
recommended to back up your personal files.</para>
+ </important>
+ </listitem>
- <para>With this option, the installer displays the remaining Windows
- partition in light blue and the proposed Mageia partition in dark blue
- with their intended sizes just underneath. You have the option to
- modify these sizes by clicking and dragging the gap between both
- partitions. See the following screen-shot.</para>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks2.png" align="center"/>
- </imageobject>
-
- <imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-doPartitionDisks2.png" align="center"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa12" revision="1">Erase and use Entire
- Disk.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa13" revision="1">This option will
- allocate the entire drive for Mageia.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa14" revision="1">Note! This will
- erase ALL data on the selected hard drive. Take care!</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa15" revision="1">If you intend to use
- part of the disk for something else, or you already have data on the
- drive that you are not prepared to lose, then do not use this
- option.</para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist><itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa16" revision="1">Custom disk
- partitioning</para>
-
- <para xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa17" revision="1">This gives you
- complete control over the placing of the installation on your hard
- drive(s).</para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist></para>
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa16"><emphasis
+ role="bold">Custom Disk Partitioning</emphasis></para>
- <para><emphasis role="bold">Partition sizing:</emphasis></para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="doPartitionDisks-pa17">This gives you
+ complete control over the placing of the installation on your hard
+ drive(s).</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
- <para>If you are not using the <emphasis role="bold">Custom disk
- partitioning</emphasis> option, the installer will allocate the available
- space according to the following rules:</para>
-
- <para><itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>If the total available space is less than 50 GB, then only one
- partition is created. This will be the <emphasis role="bold">/</emphasis> (root) partition.</para>
- </listitem>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject condition="classical">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks2.png"/>
+ </imageobject>
- <listitem>
- <para>If the total available space is greater than 50 GB, then three
- partitions are created</para>
-
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>6/19 of the total available place is allocated to <emphasis role="bold">/</emphasis> with a maximum of 50 GB</para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>1/19 is allocated to swap with a maximum of 4 GB</para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>the rest (at least 12/19) is allocated to <emphasis role="bold">/home.</emphasis></para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist></para>
+ <imageobject condition="live">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-doPartitionDisks2.png"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ </mediaobject>
- <para>That means that from 160 GB or greater available space, the installer
- will create three partitions: 50 GB for <emphasis role="bold">/</emphasis>,
- 4 GB for <emphasis role="bold">swap</emphasis> and the remainder for
- <emphasis role="bold">/home</emphasis>.</para>
+ <para>If you are not using the <emphasis>Custom disk partitioning</emphasis>
+ option, then the installer will allocate the available space according to
+ the following rules:</para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>If the total available space is less than 50 GB, then only one
+ partition is created. This will be the <filename>/</filename> (root)
+ partition.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>If the total available space is greater than 50 GB, then three
+ partitions are created</para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>6/19 of the total available place is allocated to
+ <filename>/</filename> with a maximum of 50 GB</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>1/19 is allocated to <filename>swap</filename> with a maximum
+ of 4 GB</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>the rest (at least 12/19) is allocated to
+ <emphasis>/</emphasis><filename>home</filename><emphasis
+ role="bold">.</emphasis></para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+
+ <para>This means that from 160 GB or greater available space, the installer
+ will create three partitions:</para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>50 GB for <filename>/</filename></para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>4 GB for <filename>swap</filename></para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>and the remainder for <filename>/home</filename>.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
<note>
<para>If you are using a UEFI system, the ESP (EFI System Partition) will
- be automatically detected - or created if it does not exist yet, and
- mounted on /boot/EFI. The <emphasis role="bold">Custom disk
+ be automatically detected - or created if it does not exist yet - and
+ mounted on <filename>/boot/EFI</filename>. The <emphasis>Custom disk
partitioning</emphasis> option is the only one that allows to check it has
- been correctly done</para>
- </note>
+ been correctly done.</para>
- <note>
- <para>If you are using a Legacy (CSM or BIOS) system with a GPT disk, you
- need to create a BIOS boot partition if not already existing. It is a
- roughly 1 MiB partition with no mount point. Choose <xref linkend="diskdrake"/> to be able to create it with the Installer like any
- other partition, just select BIOS boot partition as the filesystem
- type.</para>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks3.png"/>
- </imageobject>
-
- <imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-doPartitionDisks3.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks4.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
+ <para>If you are using a Legacy (also known as BIOS) system with a GPT
+ partitioned disk, you need to create a BIOS boot partition if it doesn't
+ already exist. It should be about 1 MiB with no mount point. It can be
+ created with the Installer, under <emphasis>Custom disk
+ partitioning</emphasis>, like any other partition. Be sure to select
+ <quote>BIOS boot partition</quote> for filesystem type.</para>
+
+ <para>See <xref linkend="diskdrake"/> for information on how to
+ proceed.</para>
</note>
- <warning>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject condition="classical">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks3.png"/>
+ </imageobject>
+
+ <imageobject condition="live">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-doPartitionDisks3.png"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-doPartitionDisks4.png"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+
+ <important>
<para>Some newer drives are now using 4096 byte logical sectors, instead
of the previous standard of 512. Due to lack of available hardware, the
partitioning tool used in the installer has not been tested with such a
- drive. Also some SSD devices now use an erase block size over 1 MB. If you
- have such a device we suggest that you partition the drive in advance,
- using an alternative partitioning tool like <emphasis role="bold">gparted</emphasis>, and to use the following settings:</para>
+ drive.</para>
- <para><emphasis role="bold">Align to</emphasis> = MiB</para>
+ <para>Some SSD devices now use an erase block size over 1 MB. If you have
+ such a device we suggest that you partition the drive in advance, using an
+ alternative partitioning tool like gparted, and to use the following
+ settings:</para>
- <para><emphasis role="bold">Free space preceding (MiB)</emphasis> =
- 2</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis>Align to</emphasis> = MiB</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis>Free space preceding (MiB)</emphasis> = 2</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
<para>Also make sure all partitions are created using an even number of
megabytes.</para>
- </warning>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ </important>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/exitInstall.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/exitInstall.xml
index cafa76f8..22ecc5cd 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/exitInstall.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/exitInstall.xml
@@ -5,6 +5,10 @@
<!-- Lebarhon 20170209 updated SC-->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Added clickable link to mageia.org-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-exitInstall.png" align="center" revision="1" xml:id="exitInstall-im1"/>
@@ -12,12 +16,12 @@
</mediaobject>
<para xml:id="exitInstall-pa1" revision="2">You have finished installing and
- configuring <application>Mageia</application> and it is now safe to remove
- the installation medium and reboot your computer.</para>
+ configuring Mageia and it is now safe to remove the installation medium and
+ reboot your computer.</para>
- <para xml:id="exitInstall-pa2" revision="2">After reboot, in the bootloader
- screen, you can choose between the operating systems (if there are more than
- one) on your computer.</para>
+ <para xml:id="exitInstall-pa2" revision="2">After rebooting, you can use the
+ bootloader screen to choose which operating system to start (if there are
+ more than one on your computer).</para>
<para xml:id="exitInstall-pa3" revision="1">If you didn't adjust the
settings for the bootloader, your Mageia install will be automatically
@@ -25,6 +29,6 @@
<para xml:id="exitInstall-pa4" revision="1">Enjoy!</para>
- <para xml:id="exitInstall-pa5" revision="1">Visit www.mageia.org if you have
+ <para xml:id="exitInstall-pa5" revision="1">Visit <link ns4:href="http://www.mageia.org/en/">www.mageia.org/en/</link> if you have
any questions or want to contribute to Mageia</para>
</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/firewall.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/firewall.xml
index 0309fd02..a27b09f2 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/firewall.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/firewall.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="firewall" version="5.0">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="firewall" version="5.0" xreflabel="Firewall">
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Added xreflabel for this section.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="firewall-ti1">Firewall</title>
</info>
@@ -10,23 +14,23 @@
Internet.</para>
<para>In the default setting (no button is checked), no service of the
- system is accessible from the network. The <emphasis role="bold">Everything
- (no firewall)</emphasis> enables access to all services of the machine - an
- option that does not make much sense in the context of the installer since
- it would create a totally unprotected system. Its veritable use is in the
- context of the Mageia Control Center (which uses the same GUI layout) for
- temporarily disabling the entire set of firewall rules for testing and
+ system is accessible from the network. The <emphasis>Everything (no
+ firewall)</emphasis> option enables access to all services of the machine -
+ an option that does not make much sense in the context of the installer
+ since it would create a totally unprotected system. Its veritable use is in
+ the context of the Mageia Control Center (which uses the same GUI layout)
+ for temporarily disabling the entire set of firewall rules for testing and
debugging purposes.</para>
<para>All other options are more or less self-explanatory. As an example,
- you will enable the <emphasis role="bold">CUPS server</emphasis> if you want
- printers on your machine to be accessible from the network.</para>
+ you will enable the CUPS server if you want printers on your machine to be
+ accessible from the network.</para>
<para><emphasis role="bold">Advanced</emphasis></para>
- <para>The <emphasis role="bold">Advanced</emphasis> option opens a window
- where you can enable a series of services by typing a list of couples (blank
- separated)</para>
+ <para>The <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> option opens a window where you can
+ enable a series of services by typing a list of <quote>couples</quote>
+ (blank separated)</para>
<para><emphasis>&lt;port-number>/&lt;protocol></emphasis></para>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/formatPartitions.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/formatPartitions.xml
index 5c27dc01..12a82831 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/formatPartitions.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/formatPartitions.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="formatPartitions" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="formatPartitions"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="formatPartitions-ti1">Formatting</title>
</info>
@@ -11,36 +18,39 @@
<!-- marja 2012-04-24 added emphasis tags in formatPartitions-pa1 -->
+ <!--2018/02/10 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-formatPartitions.png" xml:id="formatPartitions-im1" align="center" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-formatPartitions.png"
+ format="PNG" revision="1" xml:id="formatPartitions-im1"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="live-formatPartitions-im1" align="center" fileref="live-formatPartitions.png" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-formatPartitions.png"
+ format="PNG" revision="1" xml:id="live-formatPartitions-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para xml:id="formatPartitions-pa1" revision="2">Here you can choose which
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="formatPartitions-pa1">Here you can choose which
partition(s) you wish to format. Any data on partitions
<emphasis>not</emphasis> marked for formatting will be preserved.</para>
- <para xml:id="formatPartitions-pa2" revision="1">Usually at least the
- partitions DrakX selected, need to be formatted</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="formatPartitions-pa2">Usually, at least the
+ partitions that DrakX selected need to be formatted.</para>
- <para xml:id="formatPartitions-pa3" revision="1">Click on
- <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> to choose partitions you want to check for
- so called <emphasis>bad blocks</emphasis></para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="formatPartitions-pa3">Click on
+ <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> to choose the partitions you want to check for
+ so-called <emphasis>bad blocks</emphasis></para>
<tip>
- <para xml:id="formatPartitions-pa4" revision="1">If you're not sure you
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="formatPartitions-pa4">If you're not sure you
have made the right choice, you can click on
- <guibutton>Previous</guibutton>, again on <guibutton>Previous</guibutton>
- and then on <guibutton>Custom</guibutton> to get back to the main screen,
- where you can choose to view details of your partitions.</para>
+ <emphasis>Previous</emphasis>, again on <emphasis>Previous</emphasis> and
+ then on <emphasis>Custom</emphasis> to get back to the main screen, where
+ you can choose to view details of your partitions.</para>
</tip>
- <para xml:id="formatPartitions-pa5" revision="1">When you are confident
- about the selection, click on <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to
- continue.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="formatPartitions-pa5">When you are confident
+ about the selections, click on <emphasis>Next</emphasis> to continue.</para>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installUpdates.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installUpdates.xml
index 69e5924a..d6a68a83 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installUpdates.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installUpdates.xml
@@ -1,31 +1,44 @@
<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns52="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="installUpdates" version="5.0">
- <info>
- <title xml:id="installUpdates-ti1">Updates</title>
- </info>
-
<!-- Made by marja on 2012 03 30 -->
<!-- NEEDS TO BE REVIEWED! -->
- <!-- marja 20120418 removed xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"" from section tag, trying to restore correct html filename-->
+ <!-- marja 20120418 removed xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"" from section tag, trying to restore correct html filename-->
<!-- marja, 2012-04-24 added screenshot -->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Added bullets to some text.-->
+
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="installUpdates-ti1">Updates</title>
+ </info>
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-installUpdates.png" align="center" revision="1" xml:id="installUpdates-im1"/>
+ <imagedata format="png" fileref="dx2-installUpdates.png" align="center" revision="1" xml:id="installUpdates-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para xml:id="installUpdates-pa1" revision="1">Since this version of
- <application>Mageia</application> was released, some packages will have been
- updated or improved.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="installUpdates-pa2" revision="1">Choose
- <guilabel>Yes</guilabel> if you wish to download and install them, select
- <guilabel>No</guilabel> if you don't want to do this now, or if you aren't
- connected to the Internet</para>
-
- <para xml:id="installUpdates-pa3" revision="1">Press
- <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to continue</para>
+ <para xml:id="installUpdates-pa1" revision="1">Since this version of Mageia
+ was released, some packages will have been updated or improved.</para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para xml:id="installUpdates-pa2" revision="1">Select
+ <emphasis>Yes</emphasis> if you wish to download and install them</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Select <emphasis>No</emphasis> if you don't want to do this now,
+ or if you aren't connected to the Internet</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para xml:id="installUpdates-pa3" revision="1">Press
+ <emphasis>Next</emphasis> to continue</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installer.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installer.xml
index 7b4ac785..dcb3cb27 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installer.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/installer.xml
@@ -1,259 +1,161 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<section version="5.0" xml:id="installer"
- xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
- xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
- xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
- xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
- xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
- xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" version="5.0" xml:id="installer">
+ <!--2018/02/11 apb: Text and typography. F6 Default option needs to be better defined.-->
+ <!--2018/02/17 apb: Removed instances of surplus para tags from before and after some itemizedlist tags. These were present in the import from Mga6 WS.
+ Some listitem end-tags were directly after mediaobject end-tags, while the main listitem element was above the mediaobject.
+ So I moved the listitem end-tags above the mediaobjects, to their natural positions. This also was in the imported XML.-->
+ <!--2018/02/19 apb: Updated welcome.png to Mga6.-->
+ <!--2018/02/21 apb: a) Updated rest of BIOS PNG's, b) Refined text and reworked this XML.-->
+ <!--2018/02/24 apb: Changed main list type-->
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Split 1,1 Caution into 2 paras.-->
+ <!--2018/02/27 apb: Fixed UEFI section nest level.-->
+ <!--2018/03/16 apb: Fixed incorrect value for title installer-ti1 (leading to output error since last year in Documentation Workspace - and inherited here, when imported).-->
+ <!--2019/01/02 apb: 2.2 Typo. 2.2.1: Update dx-welcome.png (BIOS Welcome screen) to Mga7 and strip text for the options which have been removed from the Mga7 Welcome screen.-->
<info>
<title xml:id="installer-ti1">DrakX, the Mageia Installer</title>
</info>
-
<para>Whether you are new to GNU-Linux or an experienced user, the Mageia
Installer is designed to help make your installation or upgrade as easy as
possible.</para>
-
- <para>The initial menu screen has various options, however the default one
- will start the installer, which will normally be all that you will
- need.</para>
-
+ <section>
+ <title>The installation steps</title>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>The install process is divided into a number of steps - the
+ status of which is indicated in a panel to the left of the
+ screen.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Each step has one or more screens, which may also have
+ <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> sections with extra, less commonly
+ required options.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Most screens have <emphasis>Help</emphasis> buttons for further
+ details about the particular step.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ <caution>
+ <para>If at some point during the install you decide to abort the
+ installation, it is possible to reboot, but please think twice before
+ you do this. Once a partition has been formatted or updates have started
+ to be installed, your computer is no longer in the same state and
+ rebooting it could very well leave you with an unusable system.</para>
+ <para>If, in spite of this, you are very sure rebooting is what you
+ want, go to a text terminal by pressing the keys <keycombo><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F2</keycap></keycombo> together. After that, press <keycombo><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Delete</keycap></keycombo> together to reboot.</para>
+ </caution>
+ </section>
<section>
<title>Installation Welcome Screen</title>
-
+ <para>The particular screen that you will first see when booting from the
+ Installation media will depend on whether your computer motherboard is of
+ the Legacy (BIOS) or UEFI type.</para>
+ <para>The welcome menu screen has various options, however the default
+ option will start the installer, and is normally all that you will
+ need.</para>
<section>
- <title>Using a Mageia DVD</title>
-
- <para>Here are the default welcome screens when using a Mageia DVD, The
- first one is what you will see if you have a UEFI system, the second one
- is for a Legacy system:</para>
-
+ <title>Legacy (BIOS) Systems</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx-welcome2.png"/>
+ <imagedata fileref="dx-welcome.png" align="center"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
-
- <para>From this screen, you have access to options by pressing
- "<emphasis role="bold">e</emphasis>" to enter the edit mode. To come
- back to this screen, press either <emphasis role="bold">Esc</emphasis>
- key to quit without saving or press the key <emphasis
- role="bold">Ctrl</emphasis> or <emphasis role="bold">F10</emphasis> to
- quit with saving.</para>
-
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <title>Menu</title>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Install Mageia</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Install Mageia to a hard disk. This is the default option, and will automatically start after a short while unless another option is selected.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Rescue System</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This option allows you to either re-install the bootloader for
+ an existing Mageia installation or you can use it to restore a
+ Windows bootloader.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Memory Test</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Test the installed RAM by performing multiple read and write
+ operations. Reboot to end the test.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">F2: Language</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Press F2 for alternative languages.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title>UEFI Systems</title>
+ <para>From this screen, you can access options by pressing
+ <keycap>e</keycap> to enter the edit mode. To come back to this screen,
+ press <keycap>Esc</keycap> to quit without saving or press
+ <keycap>F10</keycap> to save and quit.</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx-welcome.png"/>
+ <imagedata fileref="dx-welcome2.png" align="center"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
-
- <para>From this screen, it is possible to set some preferences (note
- that the options <emphasis role="bold">F1</emphasis> to <emphasis
- role="bold">F6</emphasis> are available only on Legacy
- systems):<itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>Within any of the <emphasis role="bold">F2</emphasis> to
- <emphasis role="bold">F6</emphasis> options, you can view relevant
- help by pressing <emphasis role="bold">F1</emphasis></para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist></para>
-
- <para><itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>Press <emphasis role="bold">F2</emphasis> to have the
- installer use a specific language for the installation.</para>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx-welcome-lang.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
-
- <para>Use the arrow keys to select the language then press
- <emphasis role="bold">Enter</emphasis>.</para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>If needed, change the screen resolution by pressing
- <emphasis role="bold">F3</emphasis> (Legacy mode only).</para>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx-welcome5def.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>If you experience problems with the installation, you could
- try modifying the default settings using the <emphasis
- role="bold">F6</emphasis> <emphasis role="bold">Kernel
- Options</emphasis> (for UEFI systems press <emphasis
- role="bold">e</emphasis> instead).</para>
-
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>Default: It doesn't alter anything in the default
- options.</para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>Safe Settings: Priority is given to the safer options at
- the price of a performance detriment.</para>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>No ACPI: (Advanced Configuration and Power Interface):
- Power management features are not used.</para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
-
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>No Local APIC: (Local Advanced Programmable Interrupt
- Controller): CPU interrupt. Select this option if you
- experience system misbehaviour like a kernel panic in relation
- to APIC.</para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
-
- <para>When you select one of these entries, it modifies the
- default options displayed in the <guilabel>Boot Options</guilabel>
- line.</para>
-
- <note>
- <para>In some Mageia releases, it may happen that the entries
- selected with <emphasis role="bold">F6</emphasis> do not appear
- in the <guilabel>Boot Options</guilabel> line, despite this,
- they will in fact be applied.</para>
- </note>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx-welcome6opt.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </listitem>
-
- <listitem>
- <para>Pressing <emphasis role="bold">F1</emphasis> opens a help
- window for various boot options. Select an item with the arrow
- keys and press <emphasis role="bold">Enter</emphasis> for more
- details or press <emphasis role="bold">Esc</emphasis> to go back
- to the welcome screen.</para>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx-welcomeHelp1.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
-
- <para>The detailed view about the splash option. Press <emphasis
- role="bold">Esc</emphasis> or select <guilabel>Return to Boot
- Options</guilabel> to go back to the options list. These options
- can be added by hand in the <guilabel>Boot Options</guilabel>
- line.</para>
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx-welcomeHelp2.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
-
- <note>
- <para>The help is translated in the chosen language with
- <emphasis role="bold">F2</emphasis>.</para>
- </note>
-
- <para>For more information about kernel options on legacy and UEFI
- systems, see: <link
- ns2:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/How_to_set_up_kernel_options">https://wiki.mageia.org/en/How_to_set_up_kernel_options</link></para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist></para>
+ <para>In UEFI mode you have only two menu options to choose from:</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Install:</emphasis> Start the Install
+ process</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Rescue:</emphasis> This option allows
+ you to either re-install the bootloader for an existing Mageia
+ installation or you can use it to restore a Windows
+ bootloader.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ <para>If you booted from a USB stick, you will see the above options
+ duplicated, and in this case, you should use the set that will be
+ suffixed with "USB".</para>
</section>
</section>
-
- <section>
- <title>The installation steps</title>
-
- <para>The install process is divided into a number of steps, the status of
- which is indicated in a panel to the left of the screen.</para>
-
- <para>Each step has one or more screens which may also have
- <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> sections with extra, less commonly
- required, options.</para>
-
- <para>Most screens have <guibutton>Help</guibutton> buttons for further
- details about the particular step.</para>
-
- <note>
- <para>If at some points during the install you decide to stop the
- installation, it is possible to reboot, but please think twice before
- you do this. Once a partition has been formatted or updates have started
- to be installed, your computer is no longer in the same state and
- rebooting it could very well leave you with an unusable system. If in
- spite of this you are very sure rebooting is what you want, go to a text
- terminal by pressing the three keys <guibutton>Alt Ctrl F2</guibutton>
- at the same time. After that, press <guibutton>Alt Ctrl
- Delete</guibutton> simultaneously to reboot.</para>
- </note>
- </section>
-
<section>
<title>Installation Problems and Possible Solutions</title>
-
<section>
<title>No Graphical Interface</title>
-
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>After the initial screen you did not reach the language
- selection screen. This can happen with some graphic cards and older
- systems. Try using low resolution by typing <code>vgalo</code> at
- the prompt.</para>
+ <para>After the initial screen you did not progress to the
+ <emphasis>Language Selection</emphasis> screen. This can happen with
+ some graphic cards and older systems. Try using low resolution by
+ typing <command>vgalo</command> at the prompt.</para>
</listitem>
-
<listitem>
<para>If the hardware is very old, a graphical installation may not
- be possible. In this case it is worth trying a text mode
- installation. To use this press <emphasis role="bold">Esc</emphasis>
- at the first welcome screen and confirm with <emphasis
- role="bold">ENTER</emphasis>. You will be presented with a black
- screen with the word "boot:". Type "text" and press <emphasis
- role="bold">ENTER</emphasis> to continue with the installation in
- text mode.</para>
+ be possible. In this case it is worth trying a text-mode
+ installation. To use this press <keycap>Esc</keycap> at the
+ <emphasis>Welcome</emphasis> screen and confirm with
+ <keycap>ENTER</keycap>. You will be presented with a black screen
+ with a <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt. Type <command>text</command>
+ and press <keycap>ENTER</keycap> to continue with the installation
+ in text mode.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
-
<section>
<title>The Install Freezes</title>
-
<para>If the system appeared to freeze during the installation, this may
be a problem with hardware detection. In this case the automatic
- detection of hardware may be bypassed and dealt with later. To try this,
- type <code>noauto</code> at the prompt. This option may also be combined
- with other options as necessary.</para>
+ hardware detection may be bypassed and dealt with later. To try this,
+ type <command>noauto</command> at the prompt. This option may also be
+ combined with other parameters as necessary.</para>
</section>
-
<section>
<title>RAM problem</title>
-
<para>This will rarely be needed, but in some cases the hardware may
report the available RAM incorrectly. To specify this manually, you can
- use the <code>mem=xxxM</code> parameter, where xxx is the correct amount
- of RAM. e.g. <code>mem=256M</code> would specify 256MB of RAM.</para>
+ use the <literal>mem=<replaceable>xxx</replaceable>M</literal>
+ parameter, where <replaceable>xxx</replaceable> is the correct amount of
+ RAM. e.g. <literal>mem=256M</literal> would specify 256MB of RAM.</para>
</section>
-
<section>
<title>Dynamic partitions</title>
-
- <para>If you converted your hard disk from <emphasis
- role="bold">basic</emphasis> format to <emphasis
- role="bold">dynamic</emphasis> format in Microsoft Windows, then it is
- not possible to install Mageia on this disc. To revert to a basic disk,
- see the Microsoft documentation: <link
- ns2:href="http://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/cc776315.aspx">http://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/cc776315.aspx</link>.</para>
+ <para>If you converted your hard disk from <literal>Basic</literal>
+ format to <literal>Dynamic</literal> format in Microsoft Windows, then
+ it is not possible to install Mageia on this disc. To revert to a
+ <literal>Basic</literal> disk, see the Microsoft documentation: <link ns2:href="http://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/cc776315.aspx">http://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/cc776315.aspx</link>.</para>
</section>
</section>
-</section>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/login.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/login.xml
index be1a0f7b..01abae73 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/login.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/login.xml
@@ -1,3 +1,18 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xml:id="login" version="5.0"><info><title xml:id="label-to-adapt-ti1">Login screen</title></info><mediaobject condition="live"><imageobject><imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="login-im1" fileref="live-login.png" align="center" revision="1"/></imageobject><caption><para>KDM login screen</para></caption></mediaobject><para>Finally, you will come to the login screen.</para><para>Enter your user name and user password, and in a few seconds you will
- find yourself with a loaded KDE or GNOME desktop, depending on which live
- medium you used. You can now start using your Mageia installation.</para><para>You can find another part of our documentation in <link linkend="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Category:Documentation">the Mageia wiki</link>.</para></section> \ No newline at end of file
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xml:id="login" version="5.0">
+ <!--2018/03/03 apb: a) Slight adjustment to text and change image caption from KDM to SDDM also change KDE to KDE Plasma. b) update SC to Mga6.-->
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="label-to-adapt-ti1">Login Screen</title>
+ </info>
+ <mediaobject condition="live">
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="login-im1" fileref="live-login.png" align="center" revision="1"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <caption>
+ <para>SDDM login screen</para>
+ </caption>
+ </mediaobject>
+ <para>Finally, you will come to the desktop login screen.</para>
+ <para>Enter your user name and user password, and in a few seconds you will find yourself with a loaded KDE Plasma or GNOME desktop, depending on which live medium you used. You can now start using and enjoying your Mageia installation.</para>
+ <para>You can find further documentation in <link xmlns:ns0="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" ns0:href="../../installer/">the Mageia
+ wiki</link>.</para>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/media_selection.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/media_selection.xml
index ea03fb55..78d8cc39 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/media_selection.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/media_selection.xml
@@ -1,6 +1,13 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="media_selection" version="5.0" xml:lang="en">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="media_selection" xml:lang="en"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
- <title xml:id="media_selection-ti1">Media Selection (Nonfree)</title>
+ <title xml:id="media_selection-ti1">Nonfree Media</title>
</info>
<!-- papoteur 2013-04-11 - created -->
@@ -11,9 +18,12 @@
<!--marja 2013-04-17 s/xml:id="media-selection"/xml:id="media_selection"/ (html filename was wrong)-->
+ <!--2019.01.05 apb: Changed Ati to AMD in Nonfree para.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="media_selection-im1" align="center" revision="1" fileref="dx2-media_selection.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-media_selection.png" format="PNG"
+ revision="1" xml:id="media_selection-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
@@ -32,7 +42,7 @@
<para>The <emphasis>Nonfree</emphasis> repository includes packages that
are free-of-charge, i.e. Mageia may redistribute them, but they contain
closed-source software (hence the name - Nonfree). For example this
- repository includes nVidia and ATI graphics card proprietary drivers,
+ repository includes nVidia and AMD graphics card proprietary drivers,
firmware for various WiFi cards, etc.</para>
</listitem>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/minimal-install.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/minimal-install.xml
index d6696c6a..7db26ff6 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/minimal-install.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/minimal-install.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="minimal-install" version="5.0">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="minimal-install" xreflabel="Minimal Install" version="5.0">
<info>
<title xml:id="minimal-install-ti1">Minimal Install</title>
</info>
@@ -8,26 +8,39 @@
<!--2013-05-05 marja - added screenshot and s/next/related/ -->
- <para>You can choose a Minimal Installation by de-selecting everything in
- the Package Group Selection screen, see <xref linkend="choosePackageGroups"/>.</para>
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
- <para>If desired, you can additionally tick the <emphasis role="bold">Individual package selection</emphasis> option in the same
- screen.</para>
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Moved 'Minimal Instalation ...' para to top and rework the following paras.-->
- <para>Minimal Installation is intended for those with specific uses in mind
- for <application>Mageia</application>, such as a server or a specialised
- workstation. You will probably use this option combined with the <emphasis role="bold">Individual package selection</emphasis> option mentioned above,
- to fine-tune your installation, see <xref linkend="choosePackagesTree"/>.</para>
-
- <para>If you choose this installation method, then the relevant screen will
- offer you a few useful extras to install, such as documentation and
- X.</para>
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Added xreflabel to this section.-->
- <para>If <emphasis role="bold">With X</emphasis> is chosen, then IceWM (a
- lightweight desktop environment) will also be included.</para>
-
- <para>The basic documentation is provided in the form of man and info pages.
- It contains the man pages from the <link xlink:href="http://www.tldp.org/manpages/man.html">Linux Documentation
+ <para>Minimal Installation is intended for those with specific uses in mind
+ for Mageia, such as a server or a specialised workstation. You will probably
+ use this option combined with the <emphasis>Individual package
+ selection</emphasis> option to fine-tune your installation. See <xref linkend="choosePackagesTree"/>.</para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>You can choose a <emphasis>Minimal Installation</emphasis> by
+ de-selecting everything in the <emphasis>Package Group
+ Selection</emphasis> screen, see <xref linkend="choosePackageGroups"/>.</para>
+
+ <para>If desired, you can additionally tick the <emphasis>Individual
+ package selection</emphasis> option in the same screen.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>If you choose this installation method, then the relevant screen
+ (see screenshot below) will offer you a few useful extras to install,
+ such as documentation and <quote>X</quote>.</para>
+
+ <para>If the <emphasis>With X</emphasis> option is selected, then IceWM
+ (a lightweight desktop environment) will also be included.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+
+ <para>The basic documentation is provided in the form of <quote>man</quote>
+ and <quote>info</quote> pages. It contains the man pages from the <link xlink:href="http://www.tldp.org/manpages/man.html">Linux Documentation
Project</link> and the <link xlink:href="http://www.gnu.org/software/coreutils/manual/">GNU
coreutils</link> info pages.</para>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/misc-params.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/misc-params.xml
index 9df3ff00..c4019229 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/misc-params.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/misc-params.xml
@@ -1,21 +1,30 @@
<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="misc-params">
<info>
- <title xml:id="misc-params-ti1">Summary of miscellaneous
- parameters</title>
+ <title xml:id="misc-params-ti1">Configuration Summary</title>
</info>
<!-- Lebarhon 2016 12 16 updated for Mageia 6. 20170209 updated SC-->
+ <!--2018/02/09 apb: Changed title to Configuration Summary (as agreed). Also, text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Changed list styles.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/23 apb: Updated dx2-summaryBottom.png-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/24 apb: Changed list style-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/24 apb: Centre-align dx2-summaryTop.png-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-summaryTop.png"/>
+ <imagedata fileref="dx2-summaryTop.png" align="center"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
<para xml:id="misc-params-pa1" revision="1">DrakX presents a proposal for
the configuration of your system depending on the choices you made and on
the hardware detected. You can check the settings here and change them if
- you want by pressing <guibutton>Configure</guibutton>.</para>
+ you want by pressing <emphasis>Configure</emphasis>.</para>
<note>
<para>As a general rule, it is recommended that you accept the default
@@ -29,8 +38,8 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>some other factor mentionned in the detailed sections below is
- an issue.</para>
+ <para>some other factor mentioned in the detailed sections below is
+ an issue</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist></para>
</note>
@@ -42,16 +51,15 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa2" revision="1"><guilabel>Timezone</guilabel></para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa2" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Timezone</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa2a" revision="1">DrakX selects a
- time zone for you, depending on your preferred language. You can
- change it if needed. See also <xref linkend="configureTimezoneUTC"/></para>
+ timezone for you, depending on your preferred language. You can change
+ it if needed. See also <xref linkend="configureTimezoneUTC"/></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-system-pa3"><guilabel>Country /
- Region</guilabel></para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-system-pa3"><emphasis role="bold">Country / Region</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa3a" revision="1">If the selected
country is wrong, it is very important that you correct the setting.
@@ -59,29 +67,28 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-system-pa4"><guilabel>Bootloader</guilabel></para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-system-pa4"><emphasis role="bold">Bootloader</emphasis></para>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa4a" revision="2">DrakX has made
- good choices for the bootloader setting.</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa4a" revision="2">DrakX proposal for
+ the bootloader setting</para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa4b" revision="2">Do not change
- anything, unless you know how to configure GRUB2</para>
-
- <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa4c" revision="2">For more
+ anything, unless you know how to configure GRUB2. For more
information, see <xref linkend="setupBootloader"/></para>
+
+ <!-- revision="2" xml:id="misc-params-system-pa4c"-->
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa5" revision="1"><guilabel>User
- management</guilabel></para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa5" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">User management</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa5a" revision="2">You can add extra
- users here. They will each get their own <literal>/home</literal>
- directories.</para>
+ users here. They will each be allocated their own
+ <filename>/home</filename> directories.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa6" revision="1"><guilabel>Services</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa6" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Services</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa6a" revision="1">System services
refer to those small programs which run in the background (daemons).
@@ -89,9 +96,7 @@
<para xml:id="misc-params-system-pa6b" revision="1">You should check
carefully before changing anything here - a mistake may prevent your
- computer from operating correctly.</para>
-
- <para>For more information, see <xref linkend="configureServices"/></para>
+ computer from operating correctly. For more information, see <xref linkend="configureServices"/></para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -103,7 +108,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa1" revision="1"><guilabel>Keyboard</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa1" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Keyboard</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa1a" revision="1">Configure your
keyboard layout according to your location, language and type of
@@ -116,32 +121,33 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa2" revision="1"><guilabel>Mouse</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa2" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Mouse</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa2a" revision="1">Here you can add
or configure other pointing devices, tablets, trackballs etc.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa3" revision="1"><guilabel>Sound
- card</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa3" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Sound card</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa3a" revision="1">The installer
- uses the default driver - if there is a default one. The option to
- select a different driver is only given when there is more than one
- driver for your card, but where none of them is the default
- one.</para>
+ will use the default driver if one is available.</para>
+
+ <para>If there is no actual default driver for your sound card, there
+ may be other possible alternative drivers available to choose from. If
+ this is the case, but you think the installer has not made the most
+ appropriate choice, you can click on <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> to
+ manually specify a driver.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa4" revision="1"><guilabel>Graphical
- interface</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa4" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Graphical interface</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa4a" revision="1">This section
- allows you to configure your graphic card(s) and displays.</para>
+ allows you to configure your graphics card(s) and displays. For more
+ information, see <xref linkend="configureX_chooser"/></para>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa4b" revision="1">For more
- information, see <xref linkend="configureX_chooser"/>.</para>
+ <!--revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-hardware-pa4b"-->
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -160,12 +166,12 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-network-pa1" revision="1"><guilabel>Network</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-network-pa1" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Network</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-network-pa2" revision="1">You can configure
your network here, but for network cards with non-free drivers it is
- better to do that after reboot, using the <application>Mageia Control
- Center</application>, if you have not yet enabled the Nonfree media
+ better to do that after reboot, using the Mageia Control Center, if
+ you have not yet enabled the <emphasis>Nonfree</emphasis> media
repositories.</para>
<warning>
@@ -176,16 +182,16 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-network-pa4" revision="1"><guilabel>Proxies</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-network-pa4" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Proxies</emphasis></para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-network-pa4a" revision="1">A Proxy Server
- acts as an intermediary between your computer and the wider internet.
+ acts as an intermediary between your computer and the wider Internet.
This section allows you to configure your computer to utilize a proxy
service.</para>
<para xml:id="misc-params-network-pa4b" revision="1">You may need to
- consult your systems administrator to get the parameters you need to
- enter here.</para>
+ consult your systems administrator to obtain the parameters you need
+ to enter here.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -197,32 +203,35 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-security-pa1"><guilabel>Security
- Level</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-security-pa1"><emphasis role="bold">Security Level</emphasis></para>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa1a" revision="1">Here you set the
- Security level for your computer, in most cases the default setting
- (Standard) is adequate for general use.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa1b" revision="1">Check the option
- which best suits your usage.</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa1a" revision="1">The Security
+ level for your computer, in most cases the default setting (Standard)
+ is adequate for general use. Select the option which best suits your
+ usage.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa2" revision="1"><guilabel>Firewall</guilabel>:</para>
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa2" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Firewall</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa2b" revision="1">The firewall
+ allows you to manage which network connections are allowed on your
+ computer. The safe and secure default is to allow ZERO inbound
+ connections. This does not stop you connecting outbound and using your
+ computer normally.</para>
- <para revision="1" xml:id="misc-params-security-pa2a">A firewall is
- intended to be a barrier between your important data and the rascals
- out there on the internet who would compromise or steal it.</para>
+ <para revision="1">Please be aware that the Internet is a high risk
+ network where there are continuous attempts to probe and attack
+ systems. Even seemingly <quote>safe</quote> connections such as ICMP
+ (for ping) have been used as covert data channels for exfiltrating
+ data by malicious persons.</para>
- <para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa2b" revision="1">Select the
- services that you wish to have access to your system. Your selections
- will depend on what you use your computer for. For more information,
- see <xref linkend="firewall"/>.</para>
+ <para revision="1">For more information, see <xref linkend="firewall"/>.</para>
<warning>
<para xml:id="misc-params-security-pa2c" revision="1">Bear in mind
- that allowing everything (no firewall) may be very risky.</para>
+ that allowing <emphasis>everything</emphasis> (no firewall) may be
+ very risky.</para>
</warning>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/reboot.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/reboot.xml
index ba527d96..b638ad68 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/reboot.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/reboot.xml
@@ -3,16 +3,18 @@
<title xml:id="reboot-ti1">Reboot</title>
</info>
<!--Lebarhon 20170210 updated for Mageia6-->
- <para>Once the bootloader has been installed, you will be prompted to halt
- your computer, remove the live CD and restart the computer, click on
- <emphasis role="bold"><guibutton>Finish</guibutton></emphasis> and act as
- asked<emphasis role="bold"> in this order!</emphasis></para>
+ <!--2018/03/03 apb: Slight text adjustment and update PNG's to Mga6.-->
+ <para>Once the bootloader has been installed, you will be prompted to halt your computer, remove the live DVD/USB stick and restart the computer.</para>
+ <important>
+ <simpara>Ensure that you follow these shut-down and restart instruction steps in the <emphasis role="bold">same</emphasis> order.</simpara>
+ </important>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="live-reboot2.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-reboot2.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>When you restart, you will see a succession of download progress bars. These indicate that the software media lists are being downloaded (see Software management).</para>
+ <simpara>When you are ready, press <emphasis>Finish</emphasis>.</simpara>
+ <simpara>When you restart, you will see a succession of download progress bars. These indicate that the software media lists are being downloaded (see <emphasis>Software Management</emphasis>).</simpara>
<mediaobject condition="live">
<imageobject>
<imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="reboot-im1" fileref="live-reboot.png" align="center" revision="1"/>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/securityLevel.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/securityLevel.xml
index 72aae2b3..e7a8c0ae 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/securityLevel.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/securityLevel.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="securityLevel">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="securityLevel"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="securityLevel-ti1">Security Level</title>
</info>
@@ -7,29 +14,34 @@
<!-- 2013-05-05 marja - added screenshot -->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Minor wording.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="securityLevel-im1" align="center" fileref="dx2-securityLevel.png" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-securityLevel.png" format="PNG"
+ revision="1" xml:id="securityLevel-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
<para><emphasis role="bold">Please choose the desired security
level</emphasis></para>
- <para xml:id="securityLevel-pa1" revision="1"><emphasis role="bold">Standard</emphasis> is the default, and recommended setting for
- the average user. The <emphasis role="bold">Secure</emphasis> setting will
- create a highly protected system - for instance if the system is to be used
- as a public server.</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="securityLevel-pa1"><emphasis>Standard</emphasis>
+ is the default, and recommended setting for the average user.</para>
+
+ <para revision="1"><emphasis>Secure</emphasis> will create a highly
+ protected system - for instance if the system is to be used as a public
+ server.</para>
<para><emphasis role="bold">Security Administrator</emphasis></para>
- <para xml:id="securityLevel-pa2" revision="1">This item allows you to
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="securityLevel-pa2">This item allows you to
configure an email address to which the system will send <emphasis>security
alert messages</emphasis> when it detects situations which require
notification to a system administrator.</para>
<para>A good, and easy-to-implement, choice is to enter
- &lt;user>@localhost - where &lt;user> is the login name of the user to
+ &lt;user&gt;@localhost - where &lt;user&gt; is the login name of the user to
receive these messages.</para>
<note>
@@ -38,7 +50,7 @@
therefore be configured for receiving such mail!</para>
</note>
- <para revision="2" xml:id="securityLevel-pa3">After install, it will always
- be possible to adjust your security settings in the
- <guilabel>Security</guilabel> section of the Mageia Control Center.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="securityLevel-pa3">It will always be possible to
+ adjust your security settings post-install in the
+ <emphasis>Security</emphasis> section of the Mageia Control Center.</para>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml
index 6450e3a2..cf723f4e 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml
@@ -1,31 +1,40 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="selectCountry" version="5.0">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://docbook.org/ns/transclusion" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="selectCountry" xreflabel="Select Country" version="5.0">
<info>
<title xml:id="selectCountry-ti1">Select your Country / Region</title>
</info>
<!-- Lebarhon 2016 12 16 updated for Mageia 6-->
+ <!--2018/02/13 apb: Minor wording + typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: a) add xreflabel to this section. b) make some text bulleted.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="selectCountry-im1" align="center" fileref="dx2-selectCountry.png" revision="1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para revision="2" xml:id="selectCountry-pa1">Select your country or region.
- This is important for all kinds of settings, like the currency and wireless
- regulatory domain. Setting the wrong country can lead to not being able to
- use a Wireless network.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="selectCountry-pa1">Select your country or
+ region. This is important for all kinds of settings, like the currency
+ and wireless regulatory domain. Setting the wrong country can lead to
+ being unable to use a Wireless network.</para>
+ </listitem>
- <para revision="1" xml:id="selectCountry-pa2">If your country isn't in the
- list, click the <guilabel>Other Countries</guilabel> option and choose your
- country / region there.</para>
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="selectCountry-pa2">If your country isn't in
+ the list, click the <emphasis>Other Countries</emphasis> option and
+ choose your country / region there.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
<note>
<para revision="1" xml:id="selectCountry-pa3">If your country is only in
- the <guilabel>Other Countries</guilabel> list, after clicking
- <guibutton>OK</guibutton> it may seem that a country from the first list
- was chosen. Please ignore this, as DrakX will apply your actual
- choice.</para>
+ the <emphasis>Other Countries</emphasis> list, after clicking
+ <emphasis>OK</emphasis> it may seem that a country from the main list was
+ chosen. Despite this, DrakX will actually apply your choice.</para>
</note>
<section xml:id="inputMethod">
@@ -33,8 +42,8 @@
<title xml:id="inputMethod-ti7">Input method</title>
</info>
- <para xml:id="selectCountry-pa4" revision="1">In the <guilabel>Other
- Countries</guilabel> screen you can also select an input method (at the
+ <para xml:id="selectCountry-pa4" revision="1">In the <emphasis>Other
+ Countries</emphasis> screen you can also select an input method (at the
bottom of the list). Input methods allow users to input multilingual
characters (Chinese, Japanese, Korean, etc). IBus is the default input
method, so users should not need to configure it manually. Other input
@@ -43,10 +52,13 @@
<note>
<para xml:id="selectCountry-pa5" revision="1">If you missed the input
- method setup during installation, you can access it after you boot your
- installed system via <emphasis role="bold">Configure your
- Computer</emphasis> -> <emphasis role="bold">System</emphasis>, or by
- running localedrake as root.</para>
+ method setup during installation, you can access it post-install via
+ <menuchoice>
+ <guimenu>Configure your Computer</guimenu>
+
+ <guimenuitem>System</guimenuitem>
+ </menuchoice>, or by running <command>localedrake</command> as
+ <emphasis>root</emphasis>.</para>
</note>
</section>
</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectInstallClass.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectInstallClass.xml
index 91befa12..76523855 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectInstallClass.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectInstallClass.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="selectInstallClass">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="selectInstallClass"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<!-- Made by marja on 2012 03 18 -->
<!-- 20120405 updated JohnR -->
@@ -10,58 +17,62 @@
<!-- 2013-05-05 marja, corrected typo in screenshot name, removed -->
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/20 apb: a) Changed list style - was bulleted. b) Removed warning about aborting the installation, as this is now at the intro of section 2 (DrakX, the Mageia Installer).-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/24 apb: a) Changed list style.-->
+
+ <!--2019/01/03 apb: a) Install: reword text about retaining an existing /home partition.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="selectInstallClass-ti1">Install or Upgrade</title>
</info>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" align="center" fileref="dx2-selectInstallClass.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-selectInstallClass.png"
+ format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <itemizedlist>
+ <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
<listitem>
- <para>Install</para>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Install</emphasis></para>
- <para>Use this option to perform a fresh installation of
- <application>Mageia</application>. This will format the root partition
- (/), but can preserve a separated /home partition.</para>
+ <para>Use this option to perform a fresh installation of Mageia. This
+ will format the <literal>root</literal> partition
+ (<filename>/</filename>), but can preserve a pre-existing
+ <filename>/home</filename> partition (a dedicated /home partition, rather than being incorporated within the root (/) partition itself).</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Upgrade</para>
-
- <para>This can be used to upgrade an existing installation of
- <application>Mageia</application>.</para>
-
- <warning>
- <para>Only upgrading from a previous Mageia version that was
- <emphasis>still supported</emphasis> when this installer's version was
- released, has been thoroughly tested. If you want to upgrade a Mageia
- version that has reached its End Of Life, then it is better to do a
- clean install instead while preserving your <literal>/home</literal>
- partition.</para>
- </warning>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Upgrade</emphasis></para>
+
+ <para>Use this option to upgrade an existing installation of
+ Mageia.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <note>
- <para>If during install you decide to stop the installation, it is
- possible to reboot, but please think twice before you do this. Once a
- partition has been formatted or updates have started to be installed, your
- computer isn't in the same state anymore and rebooting it could very well
- leave you with an unusable system. If in spite of that, and only if you
- are very sure rebooting is what you want, go to a text terminal by
- pressing <guilabel>Alt Ctrl F2</guilabel> simultaneously. After that,
- press <guilabel>Alt Ctrl Delete</guilabel> simultaneously to
- reboot.</para>
- </note>
+ <important>
+ <para>Only upgrading from a previous Mageia version that was
+ <emphasis>still supported</emphasis> when this Installer's version was
+ released, has been thoroughly tested. If you want to upgrade a Mageia
+ version that has reached its <quote>End Of Life</quote> then it is better
+ to do a <quote>clean</quote> install instead, while preserving your
+ <filename>/home</filename> partition.</para>
+ </important>
<tip>
<para>If you have discovered that you forgot to select an additional
- language, you can return from the <emphasis role="bold">Install or
- Upgrade</emphasis> screen to the language choice screen by pressing
- <guilabel>Alt Ctrl Home</guilabel> simultaneously. <emphasis role="bold">Do not</emphasis> do this later in the install.</para>
+ language, you can return from the <emphasis>Install or Upgrade</emphasis>
+ screen to the language choice screen by pressing <keycombo>
+ <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>
+
+ <keycap>Alt</keycap>
+
+ <keycap>Home</keycap>
+ </keycombo>. Do<emphasis role="bold"> NOT</emphasis> do this later in
+ the install.</para>
</tip>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboard.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboard.xml
index 2913109f..9c2b06ad 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboard.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboard.xml
@@ -1,52 +1,66 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="selectKeyboard" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="selectKeyboard"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<!-- Started by marja on 2012 03 31 -->
<!-- NEEDS TO BE REVIEWED! -->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/19 apb: Updated dx2-selectKeyboard.png to Mga6.-->
+
+ <!--2019/01/03 apb: Minor edit to Note (insert colon).-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="selectKeyboard-ti1">Keyboard</title>
</info>
- <para xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa1" revision="1">DrakX selects an appropriate
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa1">DrakX selects an appropriate
keyboard for your language. If no suitable keyboard is found it will default
to a US keyboard layout.</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-selectKeyboard.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-selectKeyboard.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa2" revision="1">Make sure that the
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa2">Make sure that the
selection is correct or choose another keyboard layout. If you don't
know which layout your keyboard has, look in the specifications that
came with your system, or ask the computer vendor. There may even be a
label on the keyboard that identifies the layout. You can also look
- here: <link xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keyboard_layout">en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keyboard_layout</link></para>
+ here: <link
+ xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keyboard_layout">en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keyboard_layout</link></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa3" revision="1">If your keyboard isn't in
- the list shown, click on <guibutton>More</guibutton> to get a fuller
- list, and select your keyboard there.</para>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa3">If your keyboard isn't in
+ the list shown, click on <emphasis>More</emphasis> to get a fuller list,
+ and select your keyboard there.</para>
- <para revision="1"><warning>
+ <para revision="1"><note>
<para revision="1" xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa5">After choosing a
- keyboard from the <guibutton>More</guibutton> dialog, you'll return
- to the first keyboard choice dialog and it will seem as though a
+ keyboard from the <emphasis>More</emphasis> dialogue, you'll return
+ to the first keyboard choice dialogue and it will seem as though a
keyboard from that screen was chosen. You can safely ignore this and
continue the installation: the keyboard chosen from the full list
will be applied.</para>
- </warning></para>
+ </note></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa4" revision="1">If you choose a keyboard
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="selectKeyboard-pa4">If you choose a keyboard
based on non-Latin characters, you will see an extra dialogue screen
asking how you would prefer to switch between the Latin and non-Latin
keyboard layouts</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboardLive.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboardLive.xml
index 05243493..770c06d2 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboardLive.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectKeyboardLive.xml
@@ -1,15 +1,29 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="selectKeyboardLive">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="selectKeyboardLive"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+ <!--2018/03/01 apb: Slight adjustment to text-->
+
+ <!--2018/03/20 apb: Adjustment to text-->
+
<info>
- <title xml:id="selectKeyboardLive-ti1">Select keyboard</title>
+ <title xml:id="selectKeyboardLive-ti1">Select Keyboard</title>
</info>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata xml:id="selectKeyboardLive-im1" revision="1" align="center" format="PNG" fileref="live-selectKeyboard.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-selectKeyboard.png" format="PNG"
+ revision="1" xml:id="selectKeyboardLive-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>You will be required to set the keyboard layout you wish to use in
- Mageia​​. The default one is selected according to your language and
- timezone previously selected.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <para>Here you can set the keyboard layout you wish to use with
+ Mageia​​.</para>
+
+ <para>A suggested keyboard layout (highlighted), has been chosen for you
+ based upon your previously selected language and timezone choices.</para>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectLanguage.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectLanguage.xml
index 9af2326e..5b520a53 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectLanguage.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectLanguage.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="selectLanguage">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="selectLanguage"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<!-- Made by marja on 2012 04 01, using barjac's text -->
<!-- NEEDS TO BE REVIEWED! -->
@@ -11,59 +18,82 @@
<!-- barjac 2012-04-11 - removed image figure tag - and once again had to clean
up mess made of this header by xxe -->
+ <!--2018/09/02 apb: Text and typography. Classical/Live Conditions not respected in HTML or PDF output.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/17 apb: Changed 'preferred language' Warning tag to Important-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/19 apb: Updated dx2-selectLanguage.png to Mga6.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/20 apb: Slight reword of 'Choosing more than one language'-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/27 apb: Changed first 3 paras to Itemizedlist-->
+
+ <!--2018/03/11 apb: Test to see if placing condition within listitem - rather than within para - will fix seeing both conditions together in output.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="selectLanguage-ti1">Please choose a language to use</title>
</info>
- <para condition="classical">Select your preferred language, by first
- expanding the list for your continent. <application>Mageia</application>
- will use this selection during the installation and for your installed
- system.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem condition="classical">
+ <para>Select your preferred language, by first expanding the list for
+ your continent. Mageia will use this selection during the installation
+ and for your installed system.</para>
+ </listitem>
- <para condition="live">Select your preferred language.
- <application>Mageia</application> will use this selection during the
- installation and for your installed system.</para>
+ <listitem condition="live">
+ <para>Select your preferred language. Mageia will use this selection
+ during the installation and for your installed system.</para>
+ </listitem>
- <para condition="classical">If it is likely that you (or others) will
- require several languages to be installed on your system, then you should
- use the <guibutton>Multiple languages</guibutton> option to add them now. It
- will be difficult to add extra language support after installation.</para>
+ <listitem condition="classical">
+ <para>If it is likely that you (or others) will require several
+ languages to be installed on your system, then you should use the
+ <emphasis>Multiple languages</emphasis> option to add them now. It will
+ be difficult to add extra language support after installation.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-selectLanguage.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-selectLanguage.png" format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-language.png" format=""/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-language.png" format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <warning condition="classical">
+ <important condition="classical">
<para>Even if you choose more than one language, you must first choose one
- as your preferred language in the first language screen. It will also be
- marked as chosen in the multiple languages screen.</para>
- </warning>
+ as your preferred language from the main list of languages. It will also
+ be marked as chosen in the <emphasis>Multiple languages</emphasis>
+ screen.</para>
+ </important>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem condition="classical">
<para>If your keyboard language is not the same as your preferred
- language, then it is advisable to install the language of your keyboard
- as well.</para>
+ language, then it is advisable to install the required language for your
+ keyboard as well</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Mageia uses UTF-8 (Unicode) support by default.</para>
-
- <para condition="classical">This may be disabled in the <emphasis role="bold">Multiple languages</emphasis> screen if you know that it is
- inappropriate for your language. Disabling UTF-8 applies to all
- installed languages.</para>
+ <para>Mageia uses UTF-8 (Unicode) support by default. This may be
+ disabled in the <emphasis>Multiple languages</emphasis> screen if you
+ know that it is inappropriate for your language. Disabling UTF-8 applies
+ to all installed languages.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>You can change the language of your system after installation in
- the Mageia Control Center -> System -> Manage localization for
- your system.</para>
+ <para>You can change the language for your system post-installation in
+ the <menuchoice>
+ <guimenu>Mageia Control Center</guimenu>
+
+ <guimenuitem>System</guimenuitem>
+
+ <guimenuitem>localization for your system</guimenuitem>
+ </menuchoice>.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectMouse.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectMouse.xml
index ab6becac..43b2736f 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectMouse.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectMouse.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="selectMouse" version="5.0">
-
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="selectMouse"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="selectMouse-ti1">Select mouse</title>
</info>
@@ -7,22 +13,32 @@
<!-- Made by marja on 2012 04 11 -->
<!-- NEEDS TO BE REVIEWED! -->
-
+
<!-- adding some "real" text now that we know the page shows up in the right place-->
-
+
<!-- marja 2012-04-24 adding screenshot -->
-
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-selectMouse.png" align="center" format="PNG"
- >
- </imagedata>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
- <para revision="2" xml:id="selectMouse-pa1">If you are not happy with how your mouse responds, you can select a different one here.</para>
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-selectMouse.png" format="PNG"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="selectMouse-pa1">If you are not happy with how
+ your mouse responds, you can select a different one here.</para>
+
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="selectMouse-pa2">Usually, <menuchoice>
+ <guimenu>Universal</guimenu>
+
+ <guimenuitem>Any PS/2 and USB mice</guimenuitem>
+ </menuchoice> is a good choice.</para>
- <para revision="2" xml:id="selectMouse-pa2">Usually, <guilabel>Universal</guilabel> - <guilabel>Any PS/2 and USB mice</guilabel> is a good choice.</para>
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="selectMouse-pa3">Select <menuchoice>
+ <guimenu>Universal</guimenu>
- <para revision="2" xml:id="selectMouse-pa3">Select <guilabel>Universal</guilabel> - <guilabel>Force evdev</guilabel> to configure the buttons that do not work on a mouse with six or more buttons.</para>
+ <guimenuitem>Force edev</guimenuitem>
+ </menuchoice> to configure the buttons that do not work on a mouse with
+ six or more buttons.</para>
</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupBootloader.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupBootloader.xml
index ff5fff22..d27036b4 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupBootloader.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupBootloader.xml
@@ -1,169 +1,216 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" version="5.0" xml:id="setupBootloader">
- <!---->
- <!--Lebarhon 2015 07 04 Project for Mageia 5. The UEFI and BIOS systems are so different I think it is better to split the page
-
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xreflabel="Bootloader" version="5.0" xml:id="setupBootloader">
+ <!--Lebarhon 2015 07 04 Project for Mageia 5. The UEFI and BIOS systems are so different I think it is better to split the page
Lebarhon 2016 12 16 updated for Mageia 6. 20170209 updated SC-->
+ <!--2018/02/06 apb: Modified the layout for a (hopefully) easier flow. Also commented-out setupBootloaderAddEntry (was section 24) and incorporated it here, at the end of this file.-->
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Changed list styles.-->
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Changed 'Advanced' list style.-->
+ <!--2018/02/24 apb: Changed main list style.-->
+ <!--2018/02/25 apb: Added xreflabel to this section.-->
<info>
- <title xml:id="setupBootloader-ti1">Bootloader main options</title>
+ <title xml:id="setupBootloader-ti1">Bootloader</title>
</info>
<section>
- <title>Bootloader interface</title>
- <para>By default, Mageia uses exclusively:</para>
+ <title>Grub2</title>
<itemizedlist>
+ <title>Grub2 on Legacy MBR/GPT systems</title>
<listitem>
- <para>GRUB2 (with or without graphical menu) for a Legacy/MBR or
- Legacy/GPT system</para>
+ <para>GRUB2 (with or without graphical menu) will be used exclusively
+ as the bootloader for a Legacy/MBR or Legacy/GPT system.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>GRUB2-efi for a UEFI system.</para>
+ <para>By default, a new bootloader will be written into either the MBR
+ (Master Boot Record) of your first hard drive or in the BIOS boot
+ partition.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <tip>
- <para>The Mageia graphical menus are nice :)</para>
- </tip>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <title>Grub2-efi on UEFI systems</title>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>GRUB2-efi will be used exclusively as the bootloader for a UEFI
+ system.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>By default, a new bootloader (Grub2-efi) will be written into
+ the ESP (EFI System Partition).</para>
+ <para>If there are already UEFI-based operating systems installed on
+ your computer (Windows 8 for example), the Mageia installer will
+ detect the existing ESP created by Windows and add grub2-efi to it. If
+ no ESP exists, then one will be created. Although it is possible to
+ have several ESPs, only one is required, whatever the number of
+ operating systems you have.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="setupBootloader-ti2">Bootloader Setup</title>
+ </info>
<section>
- <title>GRUB2 on Legacy/MBR and Legacy/GPT systems</title>
+ <title>Bootloader main options</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-setupBootloader.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-setupBootloader.png"/>
</imageobject>
+
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata xml:id="setupBootloader-im1" fileref="live-setupBootloader.png"/>
+ <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader.png"
+ xml:id="setupBootloader-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>Don't modify the <emphasis role="bold">Boot Device</emphasis>
- unless you really know what you are doing.</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Bootloader to use</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This feature is only available to Legacy MBR/BIOS systems.
+ Users of UEFI systems will not see this option here.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Boot device</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Don't change this unless you really know what you are
+ doing</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Delay before booting the default
+ image</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This text box lets you set a delay, in seconds, before the
+ default operating system is started up.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Security</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This allows you to set a password for the bootloader. This
+ means a username and password will be required when booting in order
+ to select a booting entry or change settings. This is optional, and
+ most people are not likely to have a need for it. The username is
+ <literal>root</literal> and the password is the one chosen
+ hereafter.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Password</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Choose a password for the bootloader (optional)</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Password (again)</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Retype the password and DrakX will check that it matches with
+ the one set above</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ <para><emphasis>Advanced</emphasis></para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis>Enable ACPI</emphasis></para>
+ <para>ACPI (Advanced Configuration and Power Interface) is a
+ standard for power management. It can save energy by stopping unused
+ devices. Deselecting it could be useful if, for example, your
+ computer does not support ACPI or if you think the ACPI
+ implementation might cause some problems (for instance random
+ reboots or system lockups).</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis>Enable SMP</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This option enables/disables symmetric multiprocessing for
+ multi-core processors</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis>Enable APIC</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Enabling this gives the operating system access to the
+ Advanced Programmable Interrupt Controller. APIC devices permit more
+ complex priority models, and Advanced IRQ (Interrupt Request)
+ management.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis>Enable Local APIC</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Here you can set Local APIC, which manages all external
+ interrupts for a specific processor in an SMP system</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
</section>
<section>
- <title>GRUB2-efi on UEFI systems</title>
- <para>With a UEFI system, the user interface is slightly different as you cannot choose between the <emphasis role="bold">with</emphasis> or
- <emphasis role="bold">without graphical menu</emphasis> options.</para>
+ <title>Bootloader Configuration</title>
<mediaobject>
- <imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-setupBootloader2.png" align="center"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader2.png"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
- <para>If Mageia is the only system installed on your computer, the
- installer created an ESP (EFI System Partition) to house the bootloader
- (GRUB2-efi). If there are already UEFI operating systems installed on
- your computer (Windows 8 for example), the Mageia installer detects the
- existing ESP created by Windows and adds GRUB2-efi. Although it is
- possible to have several ESPs, only one is required (and advised),
- whatever the number of operating systems you have.</para>
- <para>Don't modify the <emphasis role="bold">Boot Device</emphasis>
- unless you really know what you are doing.</para>
- </section>
- </section>
- <section>
- <title xml:id="setupMageiaBootloader">Using a Mageia bootloader</title>
- <para>By default, and according to your system, Mageia writes one of the
- following:</para>
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>a GRUB2 bootloader either into the MBR (Master Boot Record) of
- your first hard drive or in the BIOS boot partition.</para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para>a GRUB2-efi bootloader into the ESP</para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
- <para>If you already have other operating systems installed, Mageia
- attempts to add them to your new Mageia boot menu. If you don't want this
- behaviour, click on <guibutton>Next</guibutton> and then untick the
- <emphasis role="bold">Probe Foreign OS</emphasis> option.</para>
- <mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
<imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-setupBootloader3.png"/>
</imageobject>
+
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader3.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-setupBootloader3.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- </section>
- <section>
- <title>Using an existing bootloader</title>
- <para>The exact procedure for adding your Mageia system to an existing
- bootloader is beyond the scope of this documentation, however in most
- cases it will involve running the relevant bootloader installation program
- which should detect and add it automatically. See the documentation for
- the operating system in question.</para>
- </section>
- <section>
- <title xml:id="setupChainLoading">Using chain loading</title>
- <para>If you don't want a bootable Mageia, but to chain-load it from
- another OS, click on <guibutton>Next</guibutton>, then on
- <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> and tick the box <guilabel>Do not touch
- ESP or MBR</guilabel>.</para>
- <mediaobject>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Default</emphasis></para>
+ <para>The operating system to started up by default</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Append</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This option lets you pass information to the kernel or tell
+ the kernel to give you more information as it boots</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para><emphasis role="bold">Probe foreign OS</emphasis></para>
+ <para>If you already have other operating systems installed, Mageia
+ attempts to add them to your new Mageia boot menu. If you don't want
+ this behaviour, then untick the Probe Foreign OS option.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ <para><emphasis>Advanced</emphasis></para>
+ <mediaobject>
<imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata fileref="dx2-setupBootloader4.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-setupBootloader4.png"/>
</imageobject>
+
<imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader4.png" align="center"/>
- </imageobject>
- </mediaobject>
- <para>You will get a warning that the bootloader is missing, ignore it by
- clicking <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.</para>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader5.png"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-setupBootloader4.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- </section>
- <section>
- <title>Options</title>
- <section>
- <title>First page</title>
- <para><itemizedlist><listitem><para><guilabel>Delay before booting the default image</guilabel>:
- This lets you set a delay in seconds before the default operating
- system is started up.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Security</guilabel>: This allows you to set a
- password for the bootloader. This means a username and password
- will be required when booting to select a booting entry or change
- settings. The username is <emphasis role="bold">root</emphasis> and the password is the one chosen here-after.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Password</guilabel>: Choose a password for the
- bootloader.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Password (again)</guilabel>: Retype the password
- and DrakX will check that it matches with the one above.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Advanced</guilabel></para><itemizedlist><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable ACPI:</guilabel> ACPI (Advanced
- Configuration and Power Interface) is a standard for power
- management. It can save energy by stopping unused devices.
- Deselecting it could be useful if, for example, your computer
- does not support ACPI or if you think the ACPI implementation
- might cause some problems (for instance random reboots or
- system lockups).</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable SMP</guilabel>: This option
- enables/disables symmetric multiprocessing for multi core
- processors.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable APIC</guilabel>: This gives the
- operating system access to the Advanced Programmable Interrupt
- Controller. APIC devices permit more complex priority models,
- and Advanced IRQ (Interrupt Request) management.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable Local APIC</guilabel>: Local APIC
- manages all external interrupts for a specific processor in an
- SMP system.</para></listitem></itemizedlist></listitem></itemizedlist></para>
- </section>
- <section>
- <title>Next page</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Default:</guilabel> Operating system started up by
- default</para>
+ <para><emphasis>Video mode</emphasis></para>
+ <para>This sets the screen size and colour depth to be used by the
+ boot menu. If you click the down-triangle you will be offered other
+ size and colour depth options.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Append:</guilabel> This option lets you pass the
- kernel information or tell the kernel to give you more information
- as it boots.</para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Probe foreign OS</guilabel>: see above <link linkend="setupMageiaBootloader">Using a Mageia
- bootloader</link></para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para><guilabel>Advanced</guilabel><itemizedlist><listitem><para><guilabel>Video mode:</guilabel> This sets the screen
- size and colour depth to be used by the boot menu. If you
- click the down triangle you will be offered other size and
- colour depth options.</para></listitem><listitem><para><emphasis role="bold">Do not touch ESP or
- MBR</emphasis>: see above <link linkend="setupChainLoading">Using the chain
- loading</link></para></listitem></itemizedlist></para>
+ <para><emphasis>Do not touch ESP or MBR</emphasis></para>
+ <para>Select this option if you don't want a bootable Mageia, but
+ would rather chain-load it from another OS. You will get a warning
+ that the bootloader is missing. Click<emphasis> Ok</emphasis> if you
+ are sure you understand the implications, and wish to
+ proceed.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader5.png" align="center"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+ </section>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title>Other Options</title>
+ <section>
+ <title>Using an existing bootloader</title>
+ <para>The exact procedure for adding Mageia to an existing bootloader is
+ beyond the scope of this documentation. However in most cases it will
+ involve running the relevant bootloader installation program, which
+ should detect Mageia and automatically add an entry for it in the
+ bootloader menu. See the documentation for the relevant operating
+ system.</para>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title>Installing Without a Bootloader</title>
+ <para>While you can opt to install Mageia without a bootloader (see
+ section 2.1 Advanced), this is not recommended unless you absolutely
+ know what you are doing, as without some form of bootloader your
+ operating system will be unable to start.</para>
+ </section>
+ <section>
+ <title>Add or Modify a Boot Menu Entry</title>
+ <para>To do this you need to manually edit
+ <filename>/boot/grub2/custom.cfg</filename> or use the software
+ <application>grub-customizer</application> tool instead (available in
+ the Mageia repositories).</para>
+ <note>
+ <para>For more information, see: <link ns4:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Grub2-efi_and_Mageia">https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Grub2-efi_and_Mageia</link></para>
+ </note>
</section>
</section>
</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupSCSI.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupSCSI.xml
index 77fca6b8..8ef8e575 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupSCSI.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupSCSI.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="setupSCSI" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="setupSCSI"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="setupSCSI-ti1">Setup SCSI</title>
</info>
@@ -18,9 +25,14 @@
<!-- marja 2012-04-25 replacing John's version 1.6 because that one was based on the
Mdv doc instead of on our setupSCSI file -->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/0217 apb: Merge 2nd/3rd paras and reword.-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-setupSCSI.png" align="center" xml:id="setupSCSI-im1" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-setupSCSI.png" format="PNG"
+ revision="1" xml:id="setupSCSI-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
@@ -29,9 +41,7 @@
to determine the correct drivers to use and subsequently fail to recognise
the drive.</para>
- <para revision="2" xml:id="setupSCSI-pa2">If this happens, you will need to
- manually tell DrakX which SCSI drive(s) you have.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="setupSCSI-pa3" revision="3">DrakX should then be able to
- configure the drive(s) correctly.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <para revision="2" xml:id="setupSCSI-pa2">If your device is not recognised,
+ you will need to manually tell DrakX which SCSI drive(s) you have. DrakX
+ should then be able to configure the drive(s) correctly.</para>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/soundConfig.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/soundConfig.xml
index 516d6f05..ad271af5 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/soundConfig.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/soundConfig.xml
@@ -1,28 +1,41 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="soundConfig" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="soundConfig"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="soundConfig-ti1">Sound Configuration</title>
</info>
<!-- Lebarhon 20170209 updated SC-->
+ <!--2018/02/13 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/17 apb: Centre-align PNG-->
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-soundConfig.png" xml:id="soundConfig-im1" revision="1"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-soundConfig.png" format="PNG"
+ revision="1" xml:id="soundConfig-im1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>In this screen the name of the driver that the installer chose for
- your sound card is given, which will be the default driver if one
- exists.</para>
+ <para>This screen shows the details of the sound card driver chosen for you
+ by the installer, and this driver should work without problems.</para>
- <para>The default driver should work without problems. However, if after
- install you do encounter problems, then run <command>draksound</command> or
- start this tool via MCC (Mageia Control Center), by choosing the
- <guilabel>Hardware</guilabel> tab and clicking on <guilabel>Sound
- Configuration</guilabel> at the top right of the screen.</para>
+ <para>However, if you encounter any issues post-install, then run
+ <command>draksound</command> or start this tool via <menuchoice>
+ <guimenu>Mageia Control Center</guimenu>
- <para>Then, in the <emphasis role="bold">draksound</emphasis> or <emphasis role="bold">Sound Configuration</emphasis> tool screen, click on
- <guibutton>Troubleshooting</guibutton> to find useful advice about how to
+ <guimenuitem>Hardware</guimenuitem>
+
+ <guimenuitem>Sound Configuration</guimenuitem>
+ </menuchoice>. Then, in the <literal>draksound</literal> or
+ <emphasis>Sound Configuration</emphasis> screen, click on
+ <emphasis>Troubleshooting</emphasis> to find useful advice about how to
solve the problem.</para>
<section xml:id="soundConfig-Advanced">
@@ -30,13 +43,10 @@
<title xml:id="soundConfig-Advanced-ti1">Advanced</title>
</info>
- <para>Clicking <emphasis role="bold"><guibutton>Advanced</guibutton></emphasis> in this screen,
- during install, is useful if there is no default driver and there are
- several drivers available, but you think the installer selected the wrong
- one.</para>
-
- <para>In that case you can select a different driver after clicking on
- <emphasis role="bold"><guibutton>Let me pick any
- driver</guibutton></emphasis>.</para>
+ <para>If there is no actual default driver for your sound card, there may
+ be other possible alternative drivers available to choose from. If this is
+ the case, but you think the installer has not made the most appropriate
+ choice, you can click on <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> to manually specify
+ a driver.</para>
</section>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/takeOverHdConfirm.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/takeOverHdConfirm.xml
index 53a614f5..a3289ace 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/takeOverHdConfirm.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/takeOverHdConfirm.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="takeOverHdConfirm" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="takeOverHdConfirm"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="takeOverHdConfirm-ti1">Confirm hard disk to be
formatted</title>
@@ -14,22 +21,35 @@
<!-- 2013-05-05 marja added screenshot -->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/20 apb: Change the 2 paras to itemized listitems.-->
+
<mediaobject>
- <imageobject condition="live">
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="live-takeOverHdConfirm.png" align="center"/>
+ <imageobject condition="classical">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-takeOverHdConfirm.png"
+ format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
- <imageobject condition="classical">
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-takeOverHdConfirm.png" align="center"/>
+ <imageobject condition="live">
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-takeOverHdConfirm.png"
+ format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para xml:id="takeOverHdConfirm-pa1" revision="1">Click on
- <guibutton>Previous</guibutton> if you are at all unsure about your
- choice.</para>
-
- <para xml:id="takeOverHdConfirm-pa2" revision="1">Click on
- <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to proceed if you are sure that it is ok to
- erase every partition, every operating system and all data that might be on
- that hard disk.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="takeOverHdConfirm-pa1">Click on
+ <emphasis>Previous</emphasis> if you are at all unsure about your
+ choice.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para revision="1" xml:id="takeOverHdConfirm-pa2">Click on
+ <emphasis>Next</emphasis> to proceed if you are sure that it is OK to
+ erase <emphasis role="bold">every</emphasis> partition, <emphasis
+ role="bold">every</emphasis> operating system and <emphasis
+ role="bold">all data</emphasis> that might be on that hard disk.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/testing.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/testing.xml
index a7758747..5f9d97fc 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/testing.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/testing.xml
@@ -1,10 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<section version="5.0" xml:id="testing" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
- xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
- xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
- xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
- xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
- xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="testing">
<info>
<title xml:id="testing-ti1">Testing Mageia as Live system</title>
</info>
@@ -14,24 +8,23 @@
<title xml:id="testing1-ti1">Live mode</title>
</info>
+ <para>This is the screen you will see if you selected the <emphasis role="bold">Boot Mageia </emphasis>option from the Live media menu.</para>
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="live-liveMode.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>You get this screen if you selected "Boot Mageia". If not, you get
- the "<link linkend="doPartitionDisks">Partitioning</link> step"</para>
-
<section>
<info>
<title xml:id="testing2-ti1">Testing hardware</title>
</info>
- <para>One of the Live mode goals is to test if the hardware is
- correctly managed by Mageia. You can check if all devices have a driver in
- the Hardware section of the Mageia Control Center. You can test the most
- current devices:</para>
+ <para>One of the aims of using the Live mode is to test that your
+ hardware is correctly managed by Mageia. You can check if all devices
+ have a driver in the Hardware section of the Mageia Control
+ Center:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -39,7 +32,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>graphical card: if you see the previous screen, it's already
+ <para>graphics card: if you see the previous screen, it's already
OK.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -52,7 +45,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>printer: configure it and print a test page</para>
+ <para>printer: configure your printer/s and print a test page</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -60,11 +53,14 @@
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <para>If all is OK for you, you can process to the installation. If not,
- you can leave with the quit button.</para>
+ <para>If everything is satisfactory, you can proceed with the
+ installation. If not, you can use the <emphasis>Quit</emphasis> button
+ to exit.</para>
- <remark>The configuration settings you made here are kept for the
- installation.</remark>
+ <note>
+ <para>The configuration settings you apply here are carried over if
+ you decide to proceed with the installation.</para>
+ </note>
</section>
<section>
@@ -72,17 +68,16 @@
<title xml:id="testing3-ti1">Launch installation</title>
</info>
+ <para>To launch the installation of the Live DVD to a hard disk or SSD
+ drive, simply click the <emphasis>Install on Hard Disk</emphasis> icon
+ on the Live desktop. You will then see this screen, followed by the
+ <link linkend="doPartitionDisks">Partitioning</link> step.</para>
+
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="live-liveMode-install.png"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
-
- <para>To launch the installation of Mageia LiveCD or Live DVD to the hard disc or
- SSD drive, simply click on the icon "Install on Hard Disk". You will get
- this screen, and then the "<link
- linkend="doPartitionDisks">Partitioning</link> step" as for the direct
- installation.</para>
</section>
</section>
-</section>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/uninstall-Mageia.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/uninstall-Mageia.xml
index 07b3c7d5..a8dacc17 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/uninstall-Mageia.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/uninstall-Mageia.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="uninstall-Mageia" version="5.0">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="uninstall-Mageia"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
<info>
<title xml:id="uninstall-Mageia-ti1">Uninstalling Mageia</title>
</info>
@@ -6,30 +13,43 @@
<!--Lebarhon 2015-07-06 Not true with UEFI
Lebarhon 2016 12 16 this page should be deleted or rewritten.-->
+ <!--2018/02/15 apb: Text and typography.-->
+
<para>If Mageia didn't convince you or you can't install it correctly - in
short you want get rid of it - that is your right and Mageia also gives you
the possibility to uninstall. This is not true for every operating
system.</para>
- <para>After your data backup, reboot your Mageia installation DVD and select
- <emphasis role="bold">Rescue system</emphasis>, then, <emphasis role="bold">Restore Windows boot loader</emphasis>. At the next boot, you
- will only have Windows, with no option to choose your operating
- system.</para>
+ <para>After backing up your data, reboot your Mageia installation DVD and
+ select <emphasis>Rescue system</emphasis>, then <emphasis>Restore Windows
+ boot loader</emphasis>. At the next boot, you will only have Windows, with
+ no option to choose your Mageia operating system.</para>
+
+ <para>In Windows, to recover the space used by Mageia partitions: click on
+ <menuchoice>
+ <guimenu>Start</guimenu>
+
+ <guimenuitem>Control Panel</guimenuitem>
+
+ <guimenuitem>Administrative Tools</guimenuitem>
+
+ <guimenuitem>Computer Management</guimenuitem>
+
+ <guimenuitem>Storage</guimenuitem>
- <para>In Windows to recover the space used by Mageia partitions: click on
- <code>Start -> Control Panel -> Administrative Tools -> Computer
- Management -> Storage -> Disk Management</code>. You will recognize a
- Mageia partition because they are labeled <guilabel>Unknown</guilabel>, and
- also by their size and place on the disk. Right click on each of these
- partitions and select <guibutton>Delete</guibutton> to free up the
- space.</para>
+ <guimenuitem>Disk Management</guimenuitem>
+ </menuchoice>. You will recognise a Mageia partition because they are
+ labeled <literal>Unknown</literal>, and also by their size and place on the
+ disk. Right-click on each of these partitions and select
+ <emphasis>Delete</emphasis> to free up the space.</para>
<para>If you are using Windows XP, you can create a new partition and format
- it (FAT32 or NTFS). It will get a partition letter.</para>
+ it (FAT32 or NTFS). It will then get a partition letter.</para>
<para>If you have Vista or 7, you have one more possibility, you can extend
the existing partition that is at the left of the freed space. There are
- other partitioning tools that can be used, such as <emphasis role="bold">gparted</emphasis>, available for both Windows and Linux. As
+ other partitioning tools that can be used, such as <emphasis
+ role="bold">gparted</emphasis>, available for both Windows and Linux. As
always, when changing partitions, be very careful to back up anything
important to you.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/unused.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/unused.xml
index 51fb643a..4f4b8601 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/unused.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/unused.xml
@@ -1,25 +1,26 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<section version="5.0" xml:id="unused" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
- xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
- xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
- xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
- xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
- xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="unused" version="5.0">
<info>
<title xml:id="unused-ti1">Keep or delete unused material</title>
</info>
+ <!--2018/03/03 apb: Adjusted text and updated SC's to Mga6.-->
+
<mediaobject condition="live">
<imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="live-unused.png" format="PNG"
- revision="1" xml:id="unused-im1"/>
+ <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="unused-im1" fileref="live-unused.png" align="center" revision="1"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
<para>In this step, the installer looks for unused locales packages and
- unused hardware packages. Then it proposes you to delete them. It is a good
- idea to accept, except if you prepare an installation which has to run on
- different hardware.</para>
+ unused hardware packages and you are then given an opportunity to delete
+ them.</para>
+
+ <para>If you do not foresee a case where your installation may need to run
+ on different hardware, or that you might need additional localization files
+ then you might wish to accept this proposal.</para>
+
+ <para>Clicking <emphasis>Advanced</emphasis> will list the unused hardware
+ and localization files that will be removed if you proceed.</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -27,7 +28,7 @@
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>The next step is the copying of files on hard disk. This takes some
- minutes. At the end, you get a blank screen for some time, it's
- normal.</para>
-</section>
+ <para>The next step is the copying of files to hard disk. This process
+ should just take a little while to complete. When it is finising you will
+ briefly get a blank screen - this is normal.</para>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file