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-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="chooseDesktop">
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<section version="5.0" xml:id="chooseDesktop"
+ xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+ xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml"
+ xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML"
+ xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
+ xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"
+ xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook">
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Some wording and typograpy.-->
+
+ <!--2018/02/22 apb: Change last 2 paras to bulleted-->
+
+ <!--2019/01/05 apb: Slight reword to para's 1,2 & 4.-->
+
<info>
<title xml:id="chooseDesktop-ti1">Desktop Selection</title>
</info>
<!--Lebarhon 20170209 updated SC-->
- <para>Depending on your selection here, you may be offered further screens
- to fine-tune your choice.</para>
+ <!--2018/02/12 apb: Text and typography.-->
- <para>After the selection step(s), you will see a slide-show during package
- installation. The slide show can be disabled by pressing the
- <guilabel>Details</guilabel> button</para>
+ <para>Some choices made here will open other screens with related
+ options.</para>
+
+ <para>After the selection step(s), you will see a slideshow during the
+ installation of required packages. The slideshow can be disabled by pressing
+ the <emphasis>Details</emphasis> button.</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
- <imagedata format="PNG" fileref="dx2-chooseDesktop.png" align="center"/>
+ <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-chooseDesktop.png" format="PNG"/>
</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
- <para>Choose whether you prefer to use the <application>KDE</application>
- <emphasis role="bold">Plasma</emphasis> or <application>GNOME</application>
- desktop environment. Both come with a full set of useful applications and
- tools. Tick <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> if you wish to use neither (or even
- use both), or if you want to modify the default software choices for these
- desktop environments. The <application>LXDE</application> desktop, for
- instance, is lighter than the previous two, sporting less eye candy and
- fewer packages installed by default.</para>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Choose whether you prefer to use the KDE Plasma or GNOME desktop
+ environment. Both come with a full set of useful applications and
+ tools.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Select <emphasis>Custom</emphasis> if you do not wish to use
+ either (or, actually use both) of these, or if you want to modify the
+ default software choices for these desktop environments. The LXDE
+ desktop, for instance, is lighter than the previous two, sporting less
+ eye candy and having fewer packages installed by default.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+</section>