1 files changed, 30 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml
index 6450e3a2..cf723f4e 100644
--- a/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml
+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/selectCountry.xml
@@ -1,31 +1,40 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="selectCountry" version="5.0">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns6="http://docbook.org/ns/transclusion" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="selectCountry" xreflabel="Select Country" version="5.0">
   <info>
     <title xml:id="selectCountry-ti1">Select your Country / Region</title>
   </info>
 
   <!-- Lebarhon 2016 12 16 updated for Mageia 6-->
 
+  <!--2018/02/13 apb: Minor wording + typography.-->
+
+  <!--2018/02/25 apb: a) add xreflabel to this section. b) make some text bulleted.-->
+
   <mediaobject>
     <imageobject>
       <imagedata format="PNG" xml:id="selectCountry-im1" align="center" fileref="dx2-selectCountry.png" revision="1"/>
     </imageobject>
   </mediaobject>
 
-  <para revision="2" xml:id="selectCountry-pa1">Select your country or region.
-  This is important for all kinds of settings, like the currency and wireless
-  regulatory domain. Setting the wrong country can lead to not being able to
-  use a Wireless network.</para>
+  <itemizedlist>
+    <listitem>
+      <para revision="2" xml:id="selectCountry-pa1">Select your country or
+      region. This is important for all kinds of settings, like the currency
+      and wireless regulatory domain. Setting the wrong country can lead to
+      being unable to use a Wireless network.</para>
+    </listitem>
 
-  <para revision="1" xml:id="selectCountry-pa2">If your country isn't in the
-  list, click the <guilabel>Other Countries</guilabel> option and choose your
-  country / region there.</para>
+    <listitem>
+      <para revision="1" xml:id="selectCountry-pa2">If your country isn't in
+      the list, click the <emphasis>Other Countries</emphasis> option and
+      choose your country / region there.</para>
+    </listitem>
+  </itemizedlist>
 
   <note>
     <para revision="1" xml:id="selectCountry-pa3">If your country is only in
-    the <guilabel>Other Countries</guilabel> list, after clicking
-    <guibutton>OK</guibutton> it may seem that a country from the first list
-    was chosen. Please ignore this, as DrakX will apply your actual
-    choice.</para>
+    the <emphasis>Other Countries</emphasis> list, after clicking
+    <emphasis>OK</emphasis> it may seem that a country from the main list was
+    chosen. Despite this, DrakX will actually apply your choice.</para>
   </note>
 
   <section xml:id="inputMethod">
@@ -33,8 +42,8 @@
       <title xml:id="inputMethod-ti7">Input method</title>
     </info>
 
-    <para xml:id="selectCountry-pa4" revision="1">In the <guilabel>Other
-    Countries</guilabel> screen you can also select an input method (at the
+    <para xml:id="selectCountry-pa4" revision="1">In the <emphasis>Other
+    Countries</emphasis> screen you can also select an input method (at the
     bottom of the list). Input methods allow users to input multilingual
     characters (Chinese, Japanese, Korean, etc). IBus is the default input
     method, so users should not need to configure it manually. Other input
@@ -43,10 +52,13 @@
 
     <note>
       <para xml:id="selectCountry-pa5" revision="1">If you missed the input
-      method setup during installation, you can access it after you boot your
-      installed system via <emphasis role="bold">Configure your
-      Computer</emphasis> -> <emphasis role="bold">System</emphasis>, or by
-      running localedrake as root.</para>
+      method setup during installation, you can access it post-install via
+      <menuchoice>
+          <guimenu>Configure your Computer</guimenu>
+
+          <guimenuitem>System</guimenuitem>
+        </menuchoice>, or by running <command>localedrake</command> as
+      <emphasis>root</emphasis>.</para>
     </note>
   </section>
 </section>
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