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   <H1>[Mageia-webteam] release-notes.html edits</H1>
    <B>Dennis Griffin</B> 
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    <I>Tue May 31 18:19:33 CEST 2011</I>
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<PRE>I am not sure who should get this message but I have a comment about the
release-notes.html file.  The particiular file I am looking at is:

<A HREF="http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/mageia/distrib/cauldron/x86_64/release-notes.html">http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/mageia/distrib/cauldron/x86_64/release-notes.html</A>

In the section &quot;Using Mageia Control Center :&quot; the contraction &quot;do'nt&quot; is
misspelled.  The apostrophe should be between the n and the t not between
the o and the n.  It appears twice in that paragraph.  It is better style
not to to use contractions...use &quot;do not&quot; instead.

Also, the file contains:

Mageia mirrors web application/a&gt;&lt;/div&gt;

There needs to be a &quot;&lt;&quot; in front of the &quot;/a&gt;&quot;...

Dennis Griffin
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