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diff --git a/zarb-ml/mageia-webteam/2011-May/001088.html b/zarb-ml/mageia-webteam/2011-May/001088.html new file mode 100644 index 000000000..91a1d726d --- /dev/null +++ b/zarb-ml/mageia-webteam/2011-May/001088.html @@ -0,0 +1,76 @@ +<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 3.2//EN"> +<HTML> + <HEAD> + <TITLE> [Mageia-webteam] release-notes.html edits + </TITLE> + <LINK REL="Index" HREF="index.html" > + <LINK REL="made" HREF="mailto:mageia-webteam%40mageia.org?Subject=Re%3A%20%5BMageia-webteam%5D%20release-notes.html%20edits&In-Reply-To=%3CBANLkTin83KRcLDLqN4_UHEMQeuAKTXiixA%40mail.gmail.com%3E"> + <META NAME="robots" CONTENT="index,nofollow"> + <META http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"> + <LINK REL="Previous" HREF="001009.html"> + + </HEAD> + <BODY BGCOLOR="#ffffff"> + <H1>[Mageia-webteam] release-notes.html edits</H1> + <B>Dennis Griffin</B> + <A HREF="mailto:mageia-webteam%40mageia.org?Subject=Re%3A%20%5BMageia-webteam%5D%20release-notes.html%20edits&In-Reply-To=%3CBANLkTin83KRcLDLqN4_UHEMQeuAKTXiixA%40mail.gmail.com%3E" + TITLE="[Mageia-webteam] release-notes.html edits">dennisgrif at gmail.com + </A><BR> + <I>Tue May 31 18:19:33 CEST 2011</I> + <P><UL> + <LI>Previous message: <A HREF="001009.html">[Mageia-webteam] Your Bugzilla bug list needs attention. +</A></li> + + <LI> <B>Messages sorted by:</B> + <a href="date.html#1088">[ date ]</a> + <a href="thread.html#1088">[ thread ]</a> + <a href="subject.html#1088">[ subject ]</a> + <a href="author.html#1088">[ author ]</a> + </LI> + </UL> + <HR> +<!--beginarticle--> +<PRE>I am not sure who should get this message but I have a comment about the +release-notes.html file. The particiular file I am looking at is: + +<A HREF="http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/mageia/distrib/cauldron/x86_64/release-notes.html">http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/mageia/distrib/cauldron/x86_64/release-notes.html</A> + +In the section "Using Mageia Control Center :" the contraction "do'nt" is +misspelled. The apostrophe should be between the n and the t not between +the o and the n. It appears twice in that paragraph. It is better style +not to to use contractions...use "do not" instead. + +Also, the file contains: + +Mageia mirrors web application/a></div> + +There needs to be a "<" in front of the "/a>"... + +Dennis Griffin +541-479-3079 +<A HREF="https://www.mageia.org/mailman/listinfo/mageia-webteam">dennisgrif at gmail.com</A> +<A HREF="http://griffin.isa-geek.net">http://griffin.isa-geek.net</A> +-------------- next part -------------- +An HTML attachment was scrubbed... +URL: </pipermail/mageia-webteam/attachments/20110531/a239b1a8/attachment-0001.html> +</PRE> + +<!--endarticle--> + <HR> + <P><UL> + <!--threads--> + <LI>Previous message: <A HREF="001009.html">[Mageia-webteam] Your Bugzilla bug list needs attention. +</A></li> + + <LI> <B>Messages sorted by:</B> + <a href="date.html#1088">[ date ]</a> + <a href="thread.html#1088">[ thread ]</a> + <a href="subject.html#1088">[ subject ]</a> + <a href="author.html#1088">[ author ]</a> + </LI> + </UL> + +<hr> +<a href="https://www.mageia.org/mailman/listinfo/mageia-webteam">More information about the Mageia-webteam +mailing list</a><br> +</body></html> |