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    <B>R&#233;mi Verschelde</B> 
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    <I>Mon Dec 20 22:38:16 CET 2010</I>
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<PRE>Le 20 d&#233;cembre 2010 19:16, Marianne Lombard &lt;<A HREF="https://www.mageia.org/mailman/listinfo/mageia-i18n">marianne at tuxette.fr</A>&gt; a &#233;crit :
&gt;<i> Hi,
</I>&gt;<i>
</I>&gt;<i> Here is a first translation for the new donation page. Can someone
</I>&gt;<i> proofread and correct it ?
</I>&gt;<i>
</I>&gt;<i> Thank you
</I>&gt;<i>
</I>&gt;<i> Jehane
</I>&gt;<i>
</I>&gt;<i> --
</I>&gt;<i> Marianne (Jehane) Lombard
</I>&gt;<i> Mandriva User - Mageia french translation team
</I>&gt;<i> Inside every fat girl, there is a thin girl waiting to get out (and a lot
</I>of chocolate) - Terry Pratchett
&gt;<i>
</I>&gt;<i>
</I>
Sorry for the low reactivity :/
I proofread and corrected a few things (see the attached html):

    - &quot;association &#224; but non-lucratif&quot; : the hyphen was removed, for not
needed in French.
    - a space was added before the &quot;;&quot;.
    - &quot;&#233;ventuellement, conseils juridiques, et&quot; : even if &quot;eventually&quot; is
generally translated by &quot;finalement&quot;, here &quot;&#233;ventuellement&quot; is better (I
think the English text should be modified, though). I removed the &quot;et&quot;
(which was in the English text but useless) and the plural.
    - &quot;nous avons XXX &#8364; Merci &#224; tous nos donateurs!&quot; : that's a mistake I
already corrected on one of your translations : &quot;thanks to&quot; is a verb
meaning &quot;gr&#226;ce &#224; / &#224; cause de&quot; and not &quot;Merci &#224;&quot;. So the correct translation
is &quot;nous avons XXX &#8364; gr&#226;ce &#224; tous nos donateurs !&quot;.
    - in the following paragraph, I changed a tense and put the &quot;Assembl&#233;e
G&#233;n&#233;rale Constitutive&quot; on lower case (this is discutable though).
    - &quot;ou par ch&#232;que (&#8364; only)&quot; : I translated &quot;only&quot; by &quot;uniquement&quot;.

I think you can send it to Damien.

Cheers,
R&#233;mi
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