Improving a sentence according to report on ML

https://ml.mageia.org/l/arc/atelier-discuss/2017-03/msg00043.html

1 files changed, 35 insertions, 57 deletions

diff --git a/langs/ja/about.po b/langs/ja/about.po
index e118a8232..97941ae53 100644
--- a/langs/ja/about.po
+++ b/langs/ja/about.po
@@ -2,27 +2,27 @@
 # Copyright (C) 2014 - 2015 Mageia
 # This file is distributed under the same license as
 # the content of the corresponding web page(s).
-# 
+#
 # Generated by extract2gettext.php
 # Domain: about
-# 
+#
 # include translation strings from:
 # en/about/index.php
-# 
+#
 # Translators:
 # 堀 風羽 <muniruri@outlook.jp>, 2016
 msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: Mageia\n"
 "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: mageia-i18n@mageia.org\n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2015-06-19 20:15:07+0000\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2017-03-26 19:25:11+0000\n"
 "PO-Revision-Date: 2016-05-08 09:27+0000\n"
 "Last-Translator: 堀 風羽 <muniruri@outlook.jp>\n"
 "Language-Team: Japanese (http://www.transifex.com/MageiaLinux/mageia/language/ja/)\n"
+"Language: ja\n"
 "MIME-Version: 1.0\n"
 "Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8\n"
 "Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit\n"
-"Language: ja\n"
 "Plural-Forms: nplurals=1; plural=0;\n"
 
 #: "/web/en/about/index.php +12"
@@ -34,107 +34,85 @@ msgid "Mageia is a Free Software, community-led project. Learn more about it."
 msgstr "Mageiaは完全なフリーソフトウェアです。コミュニティ主導のプロジェクトです。これについての詳しい内容は、詳細をごらんください。"
 
 #: "/web/en/about/index.php +14"
-msgid ""
-"mageia, mageia.org, about, mission, contacts, governance, values, timeline"
+msgid "mageia, mageia.org, about, mission, contacts, governance, values, timeline"
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +34"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +35"
 msgid "Mageia is a GNU/Linux-based, Free Software operating system."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +35"
-msgid ""
-"It is a <a href=\"../community/\">community project</a>, supported by <a "
-"href=\"#mageia.org\">a nonprofit organisation</a> of elected contributors."
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +36"
+msgid "It is a <a href=\"../community/\">community project</a>, supported by <a href=\"#mageia.org\">a nonprofit organisation</a> of elected contributors."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +38"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +39"
 msgid "Our mission: to build great tools for people."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +39"
-msgid ""
-"Further than just delivering a secure, stable and sustainable operating "
-"system, the goal is to set up a stable and trustable governance to direct "
-"collaborative projects."
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +40"
+msgid "Beyond just delivering a secure, stable and sustainable operating system, the goal is also to become and maintain a credible and recognized community in the free software world."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +40"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +41"
 msgid "To date, Mageia:"
 msgstr "現在までに、Mageia:"
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +43"
-msgid ""
-"<a href=\"2010-sept-announcement.html\">started in September 2010 as a "
-"fork</a> of Mandriva Linux,"
-msgstr ""
-
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +45"
-msgid ""
-"gathered <a href=\"../community/\">hundreds of careful individuals and "
-"several companies worldwide</a>,"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +44"
+msgid "<a href=\"2010-sept-announcement.html\">started in September 2010 as a fork</a> of Mandriva Linux,"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: "/web/en/about/index.php +46"
-msgid ""
-"who coproduce the infrastructure, the distribution itself, <a "
-"href=\"https://wiki.mageia.org/\">documentation</a>, <a "
-"href=\"../downloads/\">delivery</a> and <a href=\"../support/\">support</a>,"
-" using Free Software tools;"
+msgid "gathered <a href=\"../community/\">hundreds of careful individuals and several companies worldwide</a>,"
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +48"
-msgid ""
-"released five major stable releases <a href=\"../1/\">in June 2011</a>, <a "
-"href=\"../2/\">in May 2012</a>, <a href=\"../3/\">in May 2013</a>, <a "
-"href=\"../4/\">in February 2014</a> and <a href=\"../5/\">in June 2015</a>."
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +47"
+msgid "who coproduce the infrastructure, the distribution itself, <a href=\"https://wiki.mageia.org/\">documentation</a>, <a href=\"../downloads/\">delivery</a> and <a href=\"../support/\">support</a>, using Free Software tools;"
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +69"
-msgid ""
-"is the French, Paris-based legal structure supporting the Mageia project."
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +49"
+msgid "released five major stable releases <a href=\"../1/\">in June 2011</a>, <a href=\"../2/\">in May 2012</a>, <a href=\"../3/\">in May 2013</a>, <a href=\"../4/\">in February 2014</a> and <a href=\"../5/\">in June 2015</a>."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +72"
-msgid ""
-"<a href=%s>Mageia.Org's legal constitution</a> and <a href=%s>governance</a>"
-" rules;"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +70"
+msgid "is the French, Paris-based legal structure supporting the Mageia project."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: "/web/en/about/index.php +73"
-msgid "\"https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Org\""
+msgid "<a href=%s>Mageia.Org's legal constitution</a> and <a href=%s>governance</a> rules;"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: "/web/en/about/index.php +74"
-msgid ""
-"<a href=\"../about/reports/\">financial reports</a>, <a href=\"../thank-"
-"you/\">donators</a>."
+msgid "\"https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Org\""
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +78"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +75"
+msgid "<a href=\"../about/reports/\">financial reports</a>, <a href=\"../thank-you/\">donators</a>."
+msgstr ""
+
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +79"
 msgid "Mageia license"
 msgstr "Mageia ライセンス"
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +79"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +80"
 msgid "Our contributions are based on <a href=%s>our license</a>."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +82"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +83"
 msgid "Code of conduct"
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +83"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +84"
 msgid "In our community we use <a href=%s>Code of conduct</a>."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +86"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +87"
 msgid "Media &amp; artwork"
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +88"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +89"
 msgid "<a href=\"%s\">Logo, CD covers files, media files</a>."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: "/web/en/about/index.php +89"
+#: "/web/en/about/index.php +90"
 msgid "<a href=\"%s\">Current graphics charter</a>."
 msgstr ""