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<H1>[Mageia-i18n] String changes in perl-install</H1>
<B>Ahmad Samir</B>
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<I>Mon Apr 4 19:17:34 CEST 2011</I>
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<PRE>2011/4/4 Rémi Verschelde <<A HREF="https://www.mageia.org/mailman/listinfo/mageia-i18n">rverschelde at gmail.com</A>>:
><i> 2011/4/4 Ahmad Samir <<A HREF="https://www.mageia.org/mailman/listinfo/mageia-i18n">ahmadsamir3891 at gmail.com</A>>:
</I>>><i> Looking at drakx/trunk/perl-install/share/po/libDrakX.pot , I modified
</I>>><i> some strings in the various .pm files in perl-install to make them
</I>>><i> read better English (as best I could), since the changes[1] are a lot, I
</I>>><i> thought I'd better get other people to look at them before committing.
</I>>><i>
</I>>><i> [1] <A HREF="http://ryu.zarb.org/~ahmad/perl-install-svn-diff.diff">http://ryu.zarb.org/~ahmad/perl-install-svn-diff.diff</A>
</I>>><i>
</I>>><i> --
</I>>><i> Ahmad Samir
</I>>><i>
</I>><i>
</I>><i> It looks okay, except for a few ones (I checked only this modified
</I>><i> strings, though) :
</I>><i>
</I>><i>
</I>><i> Index: mygtk2.pm
</I>><i> ===================================================================
</I>><i> --- mygtk2.pm   (revision 805)
</I>><i> +++ mygtk2.pm   (working copy)
</I>><i> @@ -1540,7 +1540,7 @@
</I>><i>     my %weakness_tooltip = (
</I>><i>         1 => N("Password is trivial to guess"),
</I>><i>         2 => N("Password is trivial to guess"),
</I>><i> -        3 => N("Password should resist to basic attacks"),
</I>><i> +       3 => N("Password should resistant to basic attacks"),
</I>><i>         4 => N("Password seems secure"),
</I>><i>         5 => N("Password seems secure"));
</I>><i>     my $weakness_tooltip = $weakness_tooltip{$password_weakness} ||
</I>><i> return undef;
</I>><i> Index: raid.pm
</I>><i>
</I>><i> "Password should resistant" means nothing, so it should be either the
</I>><i> former sentence or "Password should be resistant".
</I>><i>
</I>
Yep, already said so to Thierry (I forwarded the email to him).
><i>
</I>><i> Index: fs/mount_options.pm
</I>><i> ===================================================================
</I>><i> --- fs/mount_options.pm (revision 804)
</I>><i> +++ fs/mount_options.pm (working copy)
</I>><i> @@ -109,38 +109,38 @@
</I>><i> [...]
</I>><i> -       'users' => N("Allow every user to mount and umount the file
</I>><i> system."),
</I>><i> +       'users' => N("Allow every user to mount and umount the filesystem."),
</I>><i>
</I>><i> Just to make sure: does "umount" refer to the command and is used
</I>><i> abusively as a verb meaning "to unmount", or is it a typo? Both
</I>><i> "umount" and "unmount" are correct depending on the context, whether
</I>><i> you want to speak about the commands which the user can use or the
</I>><i> actions he can perform.
</I>
But I didn't change that part it was umount originally :) (will change
it anyway).
><i>
</I>><i> [...]
</I>><i> @@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
</I>><i>        #- noatime on laptops (do not wake up the hd)
</I>><i>        #- otherwise relatime (wake up the hd less often / better performances)
</I>><i>        #- Do  not  update  inode  access times on this
</I>><i> -       #- file system (e.g, for faster access  on  the
</I>><i> +       #- filesystem (e.g, for faster access  on  the
</I>><i>        #- news spool to speed up news servers).
</I>><i>
</I>><i> Too many spaces, no ? In the third and fourth (corrected) sentences.
</I>
Again I didn't touch that part, and the double spaces are in comments,
so they don't matter.
><i>
</I>><i>
</I>><i> Index: fs/partitioning_wizard.pm
</I>><i> ===================================================================
</I>><i> --- fs/partitioning_wizard.pm   (revision 805)
</I>><i> +++ fs/partitioning_wizard.pm   (working copy)
</I>><i> @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
</I>><i> [...]
</I>><i> -Your Microsoft Windows® partition will be now resized.
</I>><i> +Your Microsoft Windows® partition will be resized now.
</I>><i>
</I>><i> I'd say "Your Microsoft Windows® partition will now be resized.", but
</I>><i> the sentence you proposed is okay.
</I>><i>
</I>><i> [...]
</I>><i> -                          $in->ask_from(N("Partitionning"), N("Which
</I>><i> size do you want to keep for Microsoft Windows® on partition %s?",
</I>><i> partition_table::description($part)), [
</I>><i> +                          $in->ask_from(N("Partitionning"), N("What
</I>><i> size do you want to keep for Microsoft Windows® on partition %s?",
</I>><i> partition_table::description($part)), [
</I>><i>
</I>><i> The new sentence is okay, but maybe this one would be clearer: "Which
</I>><i> disk space do you want to keep for Microsoft Windows® on partition
</I>><i> %s?"
</I>><i>
</I>
"Which" implies defined choices, i.e. "Which size do you want to keep for foo?
1) 500
2) 1000
3) 2000 "
if there're no given/defined choices, I think "what" is better in the context.
><i>
</I>><i> Index: fsedit.pm
</I>><i> ===================================================================
</I>><i> --- fsedit.pm   (revision 805)
</I>><i> +++ fsedit.pm   (working copy)
</I>><i>
</I>><i> [...]
</I>><i>            cdie N("You've selected a software RAID partition as root (/).
</I>><i> -No bootloader is able to handle this without a /boot partition.
</I>><i> -Please be sure to add a /boot partition");
</I>><i> +No bootloader is able to handle this without a separate separate
</I>><i> /boot partition.
</I>><i> +Please be sure to add a separate /boot partition");
</I>><i>
</I>><i> You wrote "separate" twice in the first corrected sentence.
</I>><i>
</I>
Yeah, too eager correction, will fix.
><i> [...]
</I>><i>  The bootloader is not able to handle this when the volume spans
</I>><i> physical volumes.
</I>><i> -You should create a /boot partition first") if $mntpoint eq "/" &&
</I>><i> isLVM($part) && lvm::lv_nb_pvs($part) != 1 &&
</I>><i> !fs::get::has_mntpoint("/boot", $all_hds);
</I>><i> +You should create a /boot separate partition first") if $mntpoint eq
</I>><i> "/" && isLVM($part) && lvm::lv_nb_pvs($part) != 1 &&
</I>><i> !fs::get::has_mntpoint("/boot", $all_hds);
</I>><i>
</I>><i> You used "separate /boot partition" in all the other modifications, so
</I>><i> why not here? (moreover "/boot separate partition" sounds bizarre).
</I>><i>
</I>
Typo, will fix.
Thanks :)
><i>
</I>><i> Cheers,
</I>><i> Rémi / Akien
</I>><i>
</I>
--
Ahmad Samir
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