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diff --git a/zarb-ml/mageia-webteam/attachments/20110531/a239b1a8/attachment-0001.html b/zarb-ml/mageia-webteam/attachments/20110531/a239b1a8/attachment-0001.html new file mode 100644 index 000000000..af1420d47 --- /dev/null +++ b/zarb-ml/mageia-webteam/attachments/20110531/a239b1a8/attachment-0001.html @@ -0,0 +1,4 @@ +I am not sure who should get this message but I have a comment about the release-notes.html file. The particiular file I am looking at is:<br><br><a href="http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/mageia/distrib/cauldron/x86_64/release-notes.html">http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/mageia/distrib/cauldron/x86_64/release-notes.html</a><br> +<br>In the section "Using Mageia Control Center :" the contraction "do'nt" is misspelled. The apostrophe should be between the n and the t not between the o and the n. It appears twice in that paragraph. It is better style not to to use contractions...use "do not" instead.<br> +<br>Also, the file contains:<br><pre id="line248">Mageia mirrors web application/a></<span class="end-tag">div</span>> <br><br></pre>There needs to be a "<" in front of the "/a>"...<br><br clear="all"> +Dennis Griffin<br>541-479-3079<br><a href="mailto:dennisgrif@gmail.com" target="_blank">dennisgrif@gmail.com</a><br><a href="http://griffin.isa-geek.net" target="_blank">http://griffin.isa-geek.net</a><br><br> |