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-rw-r--r--docs/installer/id/DrakX.xml6
-rw-r--r--docs/installer/id/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml124
-rw-r--r--docs/installer/id/setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml49
3 files changed, 93 insertions, 86 deletions
diff --git a/docs/installer/id/DrakX.xml b/docs/installer/id/DrakX.xml
index f1032fc9..3dbdfcb2 100644
--- a/docs/installer/id/DrakX.xml
+++ b/docs/installer/id/DrakX.xml
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ manual ini. Layar mana yang akan Anda lihat, tergantung pada hardware dan
pilihan yang Anda buat saat menginstall.</para>
</note></para>
- <para>Teks dan gambar pada manual ini berada di bawah lisensi CC BY-SA 3.0 <link
+ <para xml:id="CC_BY-SA">Teks dan gambar pada manual ini berada di bawah lisensi CC BY-SA 3.0 <link
ns6:href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link>.</para>
<para>Manual ini dibuat dengan bantuan <link ns6:href="http://www.calenco.com">CMS
@@ -130,7 +130,5 @@ Dokumentasi</link>, jika Anda ingin membantu memperbaiki manual ini.</para>
<xi:include href="exitInstall.xml"/>
-
-<!--STILL TO BE WRITTEN: <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
- -->
+ <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="uninstall-Mageia.xml"/>
</article>
diff --git a/docs/installer/id/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml b/docs/installer/id/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml
index 1e29db84..9cf7d965 100644
--- a/docs/installer/id/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml
+++ b/docs/installer/id/SelectAndUseISOs2.xml
@@ -11,8 +11,9 @@
<section>
<title>Definition</title>
- <para>We call a media here a ISO image file that allows to install and/or update
-Mageia and by extension any physical support where the ISO file is copied.</para>
+ <para>Here, a medium (plural: media) is an ISO image file that allows you to
+install and/or update Mageia and by extension any physical support the ISO
+file is copied to.</para>
<para>You can find them <link
ns4:href="http://www.mageia.org/en/downloads/">here</link>.</para>
@@ -26,7 +27,7 @@ ns4:href="http://www.mageia.org/en/downloads/">here</link>.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>They use the traditional installer called drakx.</para>
+ <para>These ISOs use the traditional installer called drakx.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -49,12 +50,11 @@ Hardware Detection Tool.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Each DVD contains any available desktop environments and languages.</para>
+ <para>Each DVD contains many available desktop environments and languages.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>You'll be given the choice during the installation to add or not non free
-software.</para>
+ <para>You'll be given the choice during the installation to add non free software.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -64,17 +64,17 @@ software.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Both architectures are present on the same media, the choice is made
+ <para>Both architectures are present on the same medium, the choice is made
automatically according to the detected CPU.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Xfce desktop only.</para>
+ <para>Uses Xfce desktop only.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Some languages only (be, bg, ca, de, en, es, fr, it, mk, pl, pt, ru, sv, uk)
-TO BE CHECKED!</para>
+ <para>Not all languages are available. (be, bg, ca, de, en, es, fr, it, mk, pl,
+pt, ru, sv, uk) TO BE CHECKED!</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -92,16 +92,17 @@ TO BE CHECKED!</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Can be used to preview the distribution without first installing it on a
-HDD, and optionally install Mageia on your HDD.</para>
+ <para>Can be used to preview the distribution without installing it on a HDD, and
+optionally install Mageia on to your HDD.
+ </para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>ISO contains only one desktop environment (KDE or GNOME).</para>
+ <para>Each ISO contains only one desktop environment (KDE or GNOME).</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</para>
+ <para>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -111,7 +112,7 @@ releases.</emphasis></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>They contains non free software.</para>
+ <para>They contain non free software.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -129,7 +130,7 @@ releases.</emphasis></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>32 bits only.</para>
+ <para>32 bit only.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -147,7 +148,7 @@ releases.</emphasis></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>32 bits only.</para>
+ <para>32 bit only.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -165,7 +166,7 @@ releases.</emphasis></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</para>
+ <para>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -183,14 +184,14 @@ releases.</emphasis></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</para>
+ <para>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
</section>
<section>
- <title>Boot-only CDs media</title>
+ <title>Boot-only CD media</title>
<section>
<title>Common features</title>
@@ -198,19 +199,20 @@ releases.</emphasis></para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Each one is a small image that contains no more than that which is needed to
-start the drakx installer and find the ISO file to continue and complete the
-install. These ISO files may be on the PC hard disk, on a local drive, on a
-local network or on the Internet.</para>
+start the drakx installer and find drakx-installer-stage2 and other packages
+that are needed to continue and complete the install. These packages may be
+on the PC hard disk, on a local drive, on a local network or on the
+Internet.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>These media are very light (less than 100 Mo) and are convenient when
-bandwidth is too low to download a full DVD, PC without DVD drive or PC that
-can't boot on a USB stick.</para>
+ <para>These media are very light (less than 100 MB) and are convenient when
+bandwidth is too low to download a full DVD, a PC without a DVD drive or a
+PC that can't boot from a USB stick.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Different media for architecture 32 or 64 bits.</para>
+ <para>Different media for 32 or 64 bit architectures.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -224,7 +226,8 @@ can't boot on a USB stick.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Contains only free software, for people who refuse non free software.</para>
+ <para>Contains only free software, for those people who refuse to use non-free
+software.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
@@ -234,7 +237,7 @@ can't boot on a USB stick.</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Contains non free software (mostly drivers, codecs...) for people who need
+ <para>Contains non-free software (mostly drivers, codecs...) for people who need
it.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
@@ -243,26 +246,27 @@ it.</para>
</section>
<section>
- <title>Media downloading and checking</title>
+ <title>Downloading and Checking Media</title>
<section>
<title>Downloading</title>
- <para>Once you have chosen your ISO file, you can download it either using http or
-BitTorrent. In both cases, a window give you some information, like the used
-mirror and the possibility to change if the bandwidth is to low. If http is
-chosen, you can also see something like</para>
+ <para>Once you have chosen your ISO file, you can download it using either http or
+BitTorrent. In both cases, a window gives you some information, such as the
+mirror in use and the possibility to change if the bandwidth is to low. If
+http is chosen, you may also see something like</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject> <imagedata fileref="Checking.png" contentwidth="650"/>
</imageobject></mediaobject>
- <para>md5sum and sha1sum are tools to check your ISO integrity. Use only one of
+ <para>md5sum and sha1sum are tools to check the ISO integrity. Use only one of
them. Both hexadecimal numbers have been calculated by an algorithm from the
-file to be downloaded. If you ask this algorithm to calculate again this
+file to be downloaded. When you ask these algorithms to recalculate this
number from your downloaded file, either you have the same number and your
-downloaded file is correct, or the number is different and you met a
-failure. Then this window appears:</para>
+downloaded file is correct, or the number is different and you have a
+failure. A failure infers that you should retry the download.Then this
+window appears:</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject> <imagedata fileref="Download.png"/> </imageobject></mediaobject>
@@ -295,33 +299,33 @@ while) with the number given by Mageia. Example:</para>
<section>
<title>Burn or dump the ISO</title>
- <para>The checked ISO can now be burned on a CD or DVD or dumped on a USB
-stick. These operations are not a simple copy and aim at make a boot-able
-media.</para>
+ <para>The checked ISO can now be burned to a CD or DVD or dumped to a USB
+stick. These operations are not a simple copy and aim to make a boot-able
+medium.</para>
<section>
- <title>Burn the ISO on a CD/DVD</title>
+ <title>Burning the ISO to a CD/DVD</title>
- <para>Use whatever burner you want but ensure the burning device is set correctly
+ <para>Use whatever burner you wish but ensure the burning device is set correctly
to <emphasis role="bold">burn an image</emphasis>, burn data or files is not
-correct. More information in <link
+correct. There is more information in <link
ns4:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Writing_CD_and_DVD_images">the Mageia
wiki</link>.</para>
</section>
<section>
- <title>Dump the ISO on a USB stick</title>
+ <title>Dump the ISO to a USB stick</title>
- <para>All Mageia ISOs are hybrid, which means you can 'dump' them on a USB stick
-and use it to boot and install the system.</para>
+ <para>All Mageia ISOs are hybrids, which means you can 'dump' them to a USB stick
+and then use it to boot and install the system.</para>
<warning>
- <para>"dumping" an image onto a flash device destroys any prior file-system in the
-partition; any data will be lost and partition capacity will be reduced to
-the image size.</para>
+ <para>"dumping" an image onto a flash device destroys any previous file-system on
+the device; any other data will be lost and the partition capacity will be
+reduced to the image size.</para>
</warning>
- <para>To recover the original capacity, you have to format the USB stick.</para>
+ <para>To recover the original capacity, you must re-format the USB stick.</para>
<section>
<title>Using Mageia</title>
@@ -338,7 +342,7 @@ ns4:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/IsoDumper_Writing_ISO_images_on_USB_sticks"
<listitem>
<para>Become root with the command <userinput>su -</userinput> (don't forget the
-final -)</para>
+final '-' )</para>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject> <imagedata fileref="Root.png" contentwidth="650"/>
@@ -346,8 +350,8 @@ final -)</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Plug your USB stick (do not mount it, that means do not open any application
-or file manager that read it)</para>
+ <para>Plug your USB stick (do not mount it, this also means do not open any
+application or file manager that could access or read it)</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -367,9 +371,9 @@ in the screenshot above, it is a 8Go USB stick.</para>
<para>Enter the command: # <userinput>dd if=path/to/the/ISO/file of=/dev/sdX
bs=1M</userinput></para>
- <para>(x)=your device name eg: /dev/sdc Example: # <userinput>dd
-if=/home/user/Downloads/Mageia-4-x86_64-DVD.iso of=/dev/sdb
-bs=1M</userinput></para>
+ <para>Where X=your device name eg: /dev/sdc</para>
+ <para> Example: # <userinput>dd if=/home/user/Downloads/Mageia-4-x86_64-DVD.iso
+of=/dev/sdb bs=1M</userinput></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -385,7 +389,7 @@ bs=1M</userinput></para>
<section>
<title>Using Windows</title>
- <para>You can try:</para>
+ <para>You could try:</para>
<para>- <link ns4:href="http://rufus.akeo.ie/?locale=en_US">Rufus</link></para>
@@ -403,9 +407,9 @@ Disk Imager</link></para>
<para>This step is detailed in <link ns4:href="http://www.mageia.org/en/doc/">the
Mageia documentation</link>.</para>
- <para>More information, is available in <link
+ <para>More information is available in <link
ns4:href="https://wiki.mageia.org/en/Category:Documentation">the Mageia
wiki</link>.</para>
</section>
-</section> \ No newline at end of file
+</section>
diff --git a/docs/installer/id/setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml b/docs/installer/id/setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml
index 1a793282..5c630672 100644
--- a/docs/installer/id/setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml
+++ b/docs/installer/id/setupBootloaderAddEntry.xml
@@ -1,34 +1,39 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?>
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns2="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xml:id="setupBootloaderAddEntry" version="5.0" xml:lang="id">
+ <info>
+ <title xml:id="setupBootloaderAddEntry-ti1">Tambah atau Modifikasi Entri Menu Boot</title>
+ </info>
-
-
-<section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:lang="id" xml:id="setupBootloaderAddEntry"><info><title xml:id="setupBootloaderAddEntry-ti1">Tambah atau Modifikasi Entri Menu Boot</title></info>
-
-
-
- <mediaobject>
+ <mediaobject>
<imageobject> <imagedata revision="1"
-fileref="dx2-bootloaderConfiguration.png" format="PNG" align="center"
-xml:id="bootloaderConfiguration-im1"></imagedata> </imageobject></mediaobject>
-
-
-
+fileref="dx2-bootloaderConfiguration.png" align="center" format="PNG"
+xml:id="bootloaderConfiguration-im1"/> </imageobject></mediaobject>
+
<para>Anda bisa menambah atau memodifikasi entri yang Anda pilih, dengan menekan
tombol yang sesuai di layar <emphasis>Konfigurasi Bootloader</emphasis> dan
mengedit layar yang muncul di atasnya.</para>
-
- <mediaobject>
-<imageobject> <imagedata revision="1"
-fileref="dx2-setupBootloaderAddEntry.png" format="PNG" align="center"
-xml:id="setupBootloaderAddEntry-im1"></imagedata> </imageobject></mediaobject>
-
+ <note>
+ <para>If you have chosen <code>Grub 2</code> as your bootloader, you cannot use
+this tool to edit entries at this step, press 'Next'. You need to manually
+edit <code>/boot/grub2/custom.cfg</code> or use <code>grub-customizer</code>
+instead.</para>
+ </note>
+
+ <mediaobject>
+<imageobject> <imagedata revision="1" xml:id="setupBootloaderAddEntry-im1"
+align="center" format="PNG" fileref="dx2-setupBootloaderAddEntry.png"/>
+</imageobject></mediaobject>
+
<para>Beberapa hal yang bisa dilakukan tanpa resiko adalah mengubah label entri
dan memilih kotak untuk membuat entri menjadi bawaan.</para>
+
<para>Anda bisa menambah nomor versi entri yang tepat, atau mengganti namanya.</para>
+
<para>Entri bawaan adalah entri yang dipilih sistem untuk dijalankan jika Anda
tidak memilih saat mulai berjalan.</para>
-<warning><para>Mengedit lainnya bisa membuat komputer Anda tidak berjalan. Jangan lakukan
-apapun yang Anda tidak mengerti.</para></warning>
- </section>
+ <warning>
+ <para>Mengedit lainnya bisa membuat komputer Anda tidak berjalan. Jangan lakukan
+apapun yang Anda tidak mengerti.</para>
+ </warning>
+</section> \ No newline at end of file