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+++ b/docs/docs/stable/installer/en/setupBootloader.xml
@@ -1,255 +1,167 @@
-<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" version="5.0" xml:id="setupBootloader">
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:ns3="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" xmlns:ns4="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xmlns:ns42="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" xmlns:ns5="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" version="5.0" xml:id="setupBootloader">
   <!---->
-
   <!--Lebarhon 2015 07 04 Project for Mageia 5. The UEFI and BIOS systems are so different I think it is better to split the page
 
 Lebarhon 2016 12 16 updated for Mageia 6.  20170209 updated SC-->
-
   <info>
     <title xml:id="setupBootloader-ti1">Bootloader main options</title>
   </info>
-
   <section>
     <title>Bootloader interface</title>
-
     <para>By default, Mageia uses exclusively:</para>
-
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Grub2 (with or without graphical menu) for a Legacy/MBR or
+        <para>GRUB2 (with or without graphical menu) for a Legacy/MBR or
         Legacy/GPT system</para>
       </listitem>
-
       <listitem>
-        <para>Grub2-efi for a UEFI system.</para>
+        <para>GRUB2-efi for a UEFI system.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
     <tip>
       <para>The Mageia graphical menus are nice :)</para>
     </tip>
-
     <section>
-      <title>Grub2 on Legacy/MBR and Legacy/GPT systems</title>
-
+      <title>GRUB2 on Legacy/MBR and Legacy/GPT systems</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject condition="classical">
           <imagedata fileref="dx2-setupBootloader.png" align="center"/>
         </imageobject>
-
         <imageobject condition="live">
           <imagedata xml:id="setupBootloader-im1" fileref="live-setupBootloader.png"/>
         </imageobject>
       </mediaobject>
-
-      <para>Don't modify the "Boot Device" unless you really know what you are
-      doing.</para>
+      <para>Don't modify the <emphasis role="bold">Boot Device</emphasis>
+      unless you really know what you are doing.</para>
     </section>
-
     <section>
-      <title>Grub2-efi on UEFI systems</title>
-
-      <para>With an UEFI system, the user interface is slightly different as
-      you cannot choose between with or without graphical menu</para>
-
+      <title>GRUB2-efi on UEFI systems</title>
+      <para>With a UEFI system, the user interface is slightly different as you cannot choose between the <emphasis role="bold">with</emphasis> or
+      <emphasis role="bold">without graphical menu</emphasis> options.</para>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject condition="classical">
           <imagedata fileref="dx2-setupBootloader2.png" align="center"/>
         </imageobject>
-
         <imageobject condition="live">
           <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader2.png"/>
         </imageobject>
       </mediaobject>
-
       <para>If Mageia is the only system installed on your computer, the
-      installer created an ESP (EFI System Partition) to receive the
-      bootloader (Grub2-efi). If there are already UEFI operating systems
-      installed on your computer (Windows 8 for example), the Mageia installer
-      detects the existing ESP created by Windows and adds grub2-efi. Although
-      it is possible to have several ESPs, only one is advised and enough
+      installer created an ESP (EFI System Partition) to house the bootloader
+      (GRUB2-efi). If there are already UEFI operating systems installed on
+      your computer (Windows 8 for example), the Mageia installer detects the
+      existing ESP created by Windows and adds GRUB2-efi. Although it is
+      possible to have several ESPs, only one is required (and advised),
       whatever the number of operating systems you have.</para>
-
-      <para>Don't modify the "Boot Device" unless you really know what you are
-      doing.</para>
+      <para>Don't modify the <emphasis role="bold">Boot Device</emphasis>
+      unless you really know what you are doing.</para>
     </section>
   </section>
-
   <section>
     <title xml:id="setupMageiaBootloader">Using a Mageia bootloader</title>
-
-    <para>By default, according to your system, Mageia writes a new:</para>
-
+    <para>By default, and according to your system, Mageia writes one of the
+    following:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>GRUB2 bootloader either into the MBR (Master Boot Record) of
+        <para>a GRUB2 bootloader either into the MBR (Master Boot Record) of
         your first hard drive or in the BIOS boot partition.</para>
       </listitem>
-
       <listitem>
-        <para>Grub2-efi bootloader into the ESP</para>
+        <para>a GRUB2-efi bootloader into the ESP</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
     <para>If you already have other operating systems installed, Mageia
     attempts to add them to your new Mageia boot menu. If you don't want this
-    behaviour, click on <guibutton>Next</guibutton> and then uncheck the box
-    <guilabel>Probe Foreign OS</guilabel></para>
-
+    behaviour, click on <guibutton>Next</guibutton> and then untick the
+    <emphasis role="bold">Probe Foreign OS </emphasis>option </para>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject condition="classical">
         <imagedata align="center" fileref="dx2-setupBootloader3.png"/>
       </imageobject>
-
       <imageobject condition="live">
         <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader3.png" align="center"/>
       </imageobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </section>
-
   <section>
     <title>Using an existing bootloader</title>
-
     <para>The exact procedure for adding your Mageia system to an existing
-    bootloader is beyond the scope of this help, however in most cases it will
-    involve running the relevant bootloader installation program which should
-    detect and add it automatically. See the documentation for the operating
-    system in question.</para>
+    bootloader is beyond the scope of this documentation, however in most
+    cases it will involve running the relevant bootloader installation program
+    which should detect and add it automatically. See the documentation for
+    the operating system in question.</para>
   </section>
-
   <section>
     <title xml:id="setupChainLoading">Using chain loading</title>
-
-    <para>If you don't want a bootable Mageia, but to chain load it from
+    <para>If you don't want a bootable Mageia, but to chain-load it from
     another OS, click on <guibutton>Next</guibutton>, then on
-    <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> and Check the box <guilabel>Do not touch
+    <guibutton>Advanced</guibutton> and tick the box <guilabel>Do not touch
     ESP or MBR</guilabel>.</para>
-
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject condition="classical">
         <imagedata fileref="dx2-setupBootloader4.png" align="center"/>
       </imageobject>
-
       <imageobject condition="live">
         <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader4.png" align="center"/>
       </imageobject>
     </mediaobject>
-
     <para>You will get a warning that the bootloader is missing, ignore it by
     clicking <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.</para>
-
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
         <imagedata fileref="live-setupBootloader5.png"/>
       </imageobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </section>
-
   <section>
     <title>Options</title>
-
     <section>
       <title>First page</title>
-
-      <para><itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>
-            <para><guilabel>Delay before booting the default image</guilabel>:
-            This text box lets you set a delay in seconds before the default
-            operating system is started up.</para>
-          </listitem>
-
-          <listitem>
-            <para><guilabel>Security</guilabel>: This allows you to set a
+      <para><itemizedlist><listitem><para><guilabel>Delay before booting the default image</guilabel>:
+            This lets you set a delay in seconds before the default operating
+            system is started up.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Security</guilabel>: This allows you to set a
             password for the bootloader. This means a username and password
-            will be asked at the boot time to select a booting entry or change
-            settings. The username is "root" and the password is the one
-            chosen here after.</para>
-          </listitem>
-
-          <listitem>
-            <para><guilabel>Password</guilabel>: This text box is where you
-            actually put the password</para>
-          </listitem>
-
-          <listitem>
-            <para><guilabel>Password (again)</guilabel>: Retype the password
-            and Drakx will check that it matches with the one set
-            above.</para>
-          </listitem>
-
-          <listitem>
-            <para><guilabel>Advanced</guilabel></para>
-
-            <itemizedlist>
-              <listitem>
-                <para><guilabel>Enable ACPI:</guilabel> ACPI (Advanced
-                Configuration and Power Interface) is a standard for the power
-                management. It can save energy by stopping unused devices,
-                this was the method used before APM. Unchecking it could be
-                useful if, for example, your computer does not support ACPI or
-                if you think the ACPI implementation might cause some problems
-                (for instance random reboots or system lockups).</para>
-              </listitem>
-
-              <listitem>
-                <para><guilabel>Enable SMP</guilabel>: This option enables /
-                disables symmetric multiprocessing for multi core
-                processors.</para>
-              </listitem>
-
-              <listitem>
-                <para><guilabel>Enable APIC</guilabel>: Enabling or disabling
-                this gives the operating system access to the Advanced
-                Programmable Interrupt Controller. APIC devices permit more
-                complex priority models, and Advanced IRQ (Interrupt Request)
-                management.</para>
-              </listitem>
-
-              <listitem>
-                <para><guilabel>Enable Local APIC</guilabel>: Here you can set
-                local APIC, which manages all external interrupts for a
-                specific processor in an SMP system.</para>
-              </listitem>
-            </itemizedlist>
-          </listitem>
-        </itemizedlist></para>
+            will be required when booting to select a booting entry or change
+            settings. The username is <emphasis role="bold">root</emphasis> and the password is the one chosen here-after.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Password</guilabel>: Choose a password for the
+            bootloader.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Password (again)</guilabel>: Retype the password
+            and DrakX will check that it matches with the one above.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Advanced</guilabel></para><itemizedlist><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable ACPI:</guilabel> ACPI (Advanced
+                Configuration and Power Interface) is a standard for power
+                management. It can save energy by stopping unused devices.
+                Deselecting it could be useful if, for example, your computer
+                does not support ACPI or if you think the ACPI implementation
+                might cause some problems (for instance random reboots or
+                system lockups).</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable SMP</guilabel>: This option
+                enables/disables symmetric multiprocessing for multi core
+                processors.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable APIC</guilabel>: This gives the
+                operating system access to the Advanced Programmable Interrupt
+                Controller. APIC devices permit more complex priority models,
+                and Advanced IRQ (Interrupt Request) management.</para></listitem><listitem><para><guilabel>Enable Local APIC</guilabel>: Local APIC
+                manages all external interrupts for a specific processor in an
+                SMP system.</para></listitem></itemizedlist></listitem></itemizedlist></para>
     </section>
-
     <section>
       <title>Next page</title>
-
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para><guilabel>Default:</guilabel> Operating system started up by
           default</para>
         </listitem>
-
         <listitem>
           <para><guilabel>Append:</guilabel> This option lets you pass the
           kernel information or tell the kernel to give you more information
           as it boots.</para>
         </listitem>
-
         <listitem>
           <para><guilabel>Probe foreign OS</guilabel>: see above <link linkend="setupMageiaBootloader">Using a Mageia
           bootloader</link></para>
         </listitem>
-
         <listitem>
-          <para><guilabel>Advanced</guilabel><itemizedlist>
-              <listitem>
-                <para><guilabel>Video mode:</guilabel> This sets the screen
-                size and colour depth the boot menu will use. If you click the
-                down triangle you will be offered other size and colour depth
-                options.</para>
-              </listitem>
-
-              <listitem>
-                <para><emphasis role="bold">Do not touch ESP or
+          <para><guilabel>Advanced</guilabel><itemizedlist><listitem><para><guilabel>Video mode:</guilabel> This sets the screen
+                size and colour depth to be used by the boot menu. If you
+                click the down triangle you will be offered other size and
+                colour depth options.</para></listitem><listitem><para><emphasis role="bold">Do not touch ESP or
                 MBR</emphasis>: see above <link linkend="setupChainLoading">Using the chain
-                loading</link></para>
-              </listitem>
-            </itemizedlist></para>
+                loading</link></para></listitem></itemizedlist></para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </section>