From 4f6e9b525a4986824446d23b7df5c86bfb0a4a15 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pablo Saratxaga <pablo@mandriva.com>
Date: Fri, 24 Jan 2003 09:11:31 +0000
Subject: English proofreading

---
 perl-install/standalone/harddrake2 | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'perl-install/standalone/harddrake2')

diff --git a/perl-install/standalone/harddrake2 b/perl-install/standalone/harddrake2
index 7e1a150dc..48cffaded 100755
--- a/perl-install/standalone/harddrake2
+++ b/perl-install/standalone/harddrake2
@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ my %fields =
      [ N("Bus"), 
        N("this is the physical bus on which the device is plugged (eg: PCI, USB, ...)") ],
      "channel" => [ N("Channel"), N("EIDE/SCSI channel") ],
-     "bogomips" => [ N("Bogomips"), N("The GNU/Linux kernel needs to do run a calculation loop at boot time to initialize a timer counter.  Its result is stored as bogomips as a way to \"benchmark\" the cpu.") ],
+     "bogomips" => [ N("Bogomips"), N("The GNU/Linux kernel needs to run a calculation loop at boot time to initialize a timer counter.  Its result is stored as bogomips as a way to \"benchmark\" the cpu.") ],
      "bus_id" => 
      [ N("Bus identification"), 
-       N("- PCI and USB devices: this list the vendor, device, subvendor and subdevice PCI/USB ids") ],
+       N("- PCI and USB devices: this lists the vendor, device, subvendor and subdevice PCI/USB ids") ],
      "bus_location" => 
      [ N("Location on the bus"), 
        N("- pci devices: this gives the PCI slot, device and function of this card
@@ -38,16 +38,16 @@ my %fields =
      "device" => [ N("Old device file"),
                    N("old static device name used in dev package") ],
      "devfs_device" => [ N("New devfs device"),  
-                         N("new dinamic device name generated by incore kernel devfs") ],
-     "driver" => [ N("Module"), N("the module of the GNU/Linux kernel that handle that device") ],
+                         N("new dinamic device name generated by core kernel devfs") ],
+     "driver" => [ N("Module"), N("the module of the GNU/Linux kernel that handles the device") ],
      "flags" => [ N("Flags"), N("CPU flags reported by the kernel") ],
      "fdiv_bug" => [ N("Fdiv bug"), 
-                     N("Early Intel Pentium chips manufactured have a bug in their floating point processor which did not achieve the attended precision when performing a Floating point DIVision (FDIV)") ],
+                     N("Early Intel Pentium chips manufactured have a bug in their floating point processor which did not achieve the required precision when performing a Floating point DIVision (FDIV)") ],
 
 
      "fpu" => [ N("Is FPU present"), N("yes means the processor has an arithmetic coprocessor") ],
      "fpu_exception" => [ N("Whether the FPU has an irq vector"), N("yes means the arithmetic coprocessor has an exception vector attached") ],
-     "f00f_bug" => [N("F00f bug"), N("Early pentium were buggy and freezed when decoding the F00F bytecode")],
+     "f00f_bug" => [N("F00f bug"), N("Early pentiums were buggy and freezed when decoding the F00F bytecode")],
      "hlt_bug" => [ N("Halt bug"), 
                     N("Some of the early i486DX-100 chips cannot reliably return to operating mode after the \"halt\" instruction is used") ],
 
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ my @menu_items =
                                N("Description of the fields:\n\n")
                                . join("\n\n", map { if_($fields{$_}[0], "$fields{$_}[0]: $fields{$_}[1]") } sort keys %$current_device))
                  } else {
-                     $in->ask_warn(N("Select a device !"), N("Once you've selected a device, you'll be able to see explanations on fields displayed on the right frame (\"Information\")"))
+                     $in->ask_warn(N("Select a device !"), N("Once you've selected a device, you'll be able to see the device information in fields displayed on the right frame (\"Information\")"))
                  }
              }
      },
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ my $selection = gtksignal_connect($tree->get_selection(), 'changed' => sub {
             return 1;
         }
     }
-    $text->get_buffer->set_text(N_("Click on a device in the left tree in order to get its information displayed here."), -1);
+    $text->get_buffer->set_text(N_("Click on a device in the left tree in order to display its information here."), -1);
     $config_button->hide;
     $module_cfg_button->hide;
 });
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