From 4b9d142bd37dcdc94b7bcdbdb3f7109d7a915e25 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Thierry Vignaud Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 15:56:00 +0000 Subject: better english (writing style rather than spoken one) --- move/move.pm | 32 ++++++++++++++++---------------- move/tree/mdk_totem | 2 +- 2 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-) (limited to 'move') diff --git a/move/move.pm b/move/move.pm index 80894176d..ed6a19d04 100644 --- a/move/move.pm +++ b/move/move.pm @@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ sub init { run_program::run('chown', 'clamav.clamav', '/var/log/clamav/freshclam.log'); #- create remaining /etc and /var subdirectories if not already copied or symlinked, - #- because programs most often won't try to create the missing subdir before trying + #- because programs most often will not try to create the missing subdir before trying #- to write a file, leading to obscure unexpected failures foreach (cat_('/image/move/directories-to-create')) { my ($mode, $uid, $gid, $name) = split; @@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ drakx_stuff: : qw(initGraphical selectLanguage acceptLicense verifyKey selectMouse selectKeyboard configMove startMove) ]; $o->{steps}{first} = $o->{orderedSteps}[0]; - #- don't use shadow passwords since pwconv overwrites /etc/shadow hence contents will be lost for usb key + #- do not use shadow passwords since pwconv overwrites /etc/shadow hence contents will be lost for usb key delete $o->{authentication}{shadow}; foreach my $lang (keys %lang::langs) { @@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ sub key_mount { install_any::getHds($o, $o); } if ($virtual_key_part) { - #- :/ merge_from_mtab didn't got my virtual key, need to add it manually + #- :/ merge_from_mtab did not got my virtual key, need to add it manually push @{$o->{fstab}}, $virtual_key_part; $key_part = $virtual_key_part; return; @@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ sub key_installfiles { my (@files) = @_; my @etcpasswords = glob("$key_sysconf/*/etc/passwd"); if (@etcpasswords > 1) { - print "inconsistency: more than one /etc/passwd on key! can't proceed, please clean the key\n"; + print "inconsistency: more than one /etc/passwd on key! can not proceed, please clean the key\n"; exit 1; } return if !@etcpasswords; @@ -419,13 +419,13 @@ sub key_installfiles { $::o->{steps}{configMove}{done} = 1; } - #- /etc/sudoers can't be a link + #- /etc/sudoers can not be a link unlink($_), cp_f("/image$_", $_) foreach qw(/etc/sudoers); } sub reboot() { output('/var/run/rebootctl', "reboot"); #- tell X_move to not respawn - run_program::run('killall', 'X'); #- kill it ourselves to be sure that it won't lock console when killed by our init + run_program::run('killall', 'X'); #- kill it ourselves to be sure that it will not lock console when killed by our init exit 0; } @@ -443,9 +443,9 @@ sub check_key { #- argh, key is read-only #- try umounting if (eval { fs::umount_part($key_part); undef $key_part; 1 }) { - modules::unload('usb-storage'); #- it won't notice change on write protection otherwise :/ + modules::unload('usb-storage'); #- it will not notice change on write protection otherwise :/ - $o->ask_okcancel_({ title => N("Key isn't writable"), + $o->ask_okcancel_({ title => N("Key is not writable"), messages => formatAlaTeX( N("The USB key seems to have write protection enabled. Please unplug it, remove write protection, and then plug it again.")), @@ -457,9 +457,9 @@ unplug it, remove write protection, and then plug it again.")), } else { #- this case happens when the user boots with a write-protected key containing #- all user and host data, /etc/X11/X which is on key busyfies it - $o->ask_okcancel_({ title => N("Key isn't writable"), + $o->ask_okcancel_({ title => N("Key is not writable"), messages => formatAlaTeX( -N("The USB key seems to have write protection enabled, but we can't safely +N("The USB key seems to have write protection enabled, but we can not safely unplug it now. @@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ plug the key again, and launch Mandrake Move again.")), } } else { my $message = key_parts($o) ? -N("Your USB key doesn't have any valid Windows (FAT) partitions. +N("Your USB key does not have any valid Windows (FAT) partitions. We need one to continue (beside, it's more standard so that you will be able to move and access your files from machines running Windows). Please plug in an USB key containing a @@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ Windows partition instead. You may also proceed without an USB key - you'll still be able to use Mandrake Move as a normal live Mandrake Operating System.") : -N("We didn't detect any USB key on your system. If you +N("We did not detect any USB key on your system. If you plug in an USB key now, Mandrake Move will have the ability to transparently save the data in your home directory and system wide configuration, for next boot on this computer @@ -602,7 +602,7 @@ after_autoconf: log::l("doing remaining toBeDone for undone step $step"); eval { &$f() }; $o->ask_warn(N("Error"), [ -N("An error occurred, but I don't know how to handle it nicely. +N("An error occurred, but I do not know how to handle it nicely. Continue at your own risk."), formatError($@) ]) if $@; } } @@ -702,7 +702,7 @@ sub install2::startMove { require ugtk2; ugtk2::flush(); - #- get info from existing fstab. This won't do anything if we already wrote fstab in configMove + #- get info from existing fstab. This will not do anything if we already wrote fstab in configMove fs::get_info_from_fstab($o->{all_hds}, ''); foreach (fsedit::get_really_all_fstab($o->{all_hds})) { if (isSwap($_)) { @@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ sub install2::startMove { run_program::raw({ detach => 1 }, '/usr/bin/dnotify', '-MCRD', '/etc', '-r', '-e', '/usr/bin/etc-monitorer.pl', '{}') or die "dnotify not found!"; } - #- password in screensaver doesn't make sense if we keep the shell + #- password in screensaver does not make sense if we keep the shell if (cat_('/proc/cmdline') !~ /\bshell\b/) { kill 9, cat_('/var/run/drakx_shell.pid'); output('/dev/tty2', "Killed\n"); @@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ sub install2::startMove { sleep 1; log::l("DrakX waves bye-bye"); - open STDOUT, ">>/tmp/.kde-errors"; #- don't display startkde shit on first console + open STDOUT, ">>/tmp/.kde-errors"; #- do not display startkde shit on first console open STDERR, ">>/tmp/.kde-errors"; my (undef, undef, $uid, $gid, undef, undef, undef, $home, $shell) = getpwnam($username); diff --git a/move/tree/mdk_totem b/move/tree/mdk_totem index 5fbda05f4..0a54248ac 100755 --- a/move/tree/mdk_totem +++ b/move/tree/mdk_totem @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if (@$bad_busy) { $in->ask_from_({ title => N("Read carefully!"), - messages => N("You can't use another CDROM when the following programs are running: + messages => N("You can not use another CDROM when the following programs are running: %s", join(", ", uniq(sort @progs))) }, [ { type => 'list', val => \$choice, list => first(list2kv(@l)), format => sub { $l{$_[0]} } } ]) or $in->exit; -- cgit v1.2.1