Use official marketing ads

10 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/02-community.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/02-community.pl
index 4a7e51d1a..5e86c822c 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/02-community.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/02-community.pl
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Get involved in the Free Software world"), 0, 30, 400, 0, 1],
 	 [ _("Want to know more about the Open Source community?"), 0, 90, 400, 20, 0],
-	 [ _("To share your own knowledge and help build Linux tools, join the discussions forum you'll find on our \"Community\" webpages"), 0, 150, 400, 0, 0],
+	 [ _("To share your own knowledge and help build Linux tools, join the discussion forums you'll find on our \"Community\" webpages"), 0, 150, 400, 0, 0],
 
 
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height, $bold ],
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/03-internet.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/03-internet.pl
index 2b3a9046b..d224a7ee4 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/03-internet.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/03-internet.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Get the most from the Internet"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 9.0 has selected the best software for you. Surf the Web and view animations with Mozilla and Konqueror, or read your mail and handle your personal information with Evolution and Kmail"), 0, 30, 400, 60, 0],
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 9.0 has selected the best softwares for you. Surf the Web and view animations with Mozilla and Konqueror, or read your mail and handle your personal information with Evolution and Kmail"), 0, 30, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/04-multimedia.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/04-multimedia.pl
index 6ce32e4d1..dcc184957 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/04-multimedia.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/04-multimedia.pl
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ $icon = 0;
 $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
-	 [ _("Discover the most up-to-date graphics and multimedia tools!"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
+	 [ _("Discover the most up-to-date graphical and multimedia tools!"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
 	 [ _("Push multimedia to its limits!"), 0, 20, 400, 20, 0],
 	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 9.0 enables you to use the very latest software to play audio files, edit and handle your images or photos, and play videos"), 0, 50, 400, 20, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/05-games.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/05-games.pl
index fc75fda83..dfb3a3f95 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/05-games.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/05-games.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Games"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 9.0 provides the best Open Source games - arcade, action, cards, sports, strategy..."), 0, 30, 400, 0, 0],
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 9.0 provides the best Open Source games - arcade, action, strategy, ..."), 0, 30, 400, 0, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/07-desktop.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/07-desktop.pl
index 219bfd188..4437eb1f4 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/07-desktop.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/07-desktop.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("User interfaces"), 0, 0, 400, 0, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 9.0 provides 11 user interfaces which can be fully modified: KDE 3, Gnome 2, WindowMaker..."), 0, 40, 400, 0, 0],
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 9.0 provides you with 11 user interfaces which can be fully modified: KDE 3, Gnome 2, WindowMaker, ..."), 0, 40, 400, 0, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/09-server.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/09-server.pl
index 7c97582cb..f6477e390 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/09-server.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/09-server.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Turn your machine into a reliable server"), 0, 10, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Transform your machine into a powerful server in a few clicks of your mouse: Web server, mail, firewall, router, file and print server..."), 0, 50, 400, 60, 0],
+	 [ _("Transform your machine into a powerful Linux server in a few clicks of your mouse: Web server, mail, firewall, router, file and print server, ..."), 0, 50, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/11-mdkstore.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/11-mdkstore.pl
index f47c2c30c..190ecc4b6 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/11-mdkstore.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/11-mdkstore.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("The official MandrakeSoft store"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Our full range of Linux solutions, as well as special offers on products and 'goodies', are available online at our e-store"), 0, 40, 400, 50 ],
+	 [ _("Our full range of Linux solutions, as well as special offers on products and other \"goodies\", are available online on our e-store:"), 0, 40, 400, 50 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/12-mdkstore.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/12-mdkstore.pl
index bda1e46bf..f141fca92 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/12-mdkstore.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/12-mdkstore.pl
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Strategic partners"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("MandrakeSoft works alongside a selection of companies offering professional solutions compatible with Mandrake Linux; a list of these partners is available on the MandrakeStore"), 0, 30, 400, 50, 0 ],
+	 [ _("MandrakeSoft works alongside a selection of companies offering professional solutions compatible with Mandrake Linux. A list of these partners is available on the MandrakeStore"), 0, 30, 400, 50, 0 ],
 	 [ "www.mandrakestore.com/license", 0, 60, 400, 80, 0 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/13-mdkcampus.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/13-mdkcampus.pl
index 4c1a35c4d..482168cbd 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/13-mdkcampus.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/13-mdkcampus.pl
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Discover MandrakeSoft's training catalogue Linux-Campus"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1 ],
-	 [ _("The training program has been create to respond to the needs of both users and experts (Network and System administrations)"), 0, 40, 400, 20, 0 ],
+	 [ _("The training program has been created to respond to the needs of both end users and experts (Network and System administrators)"), 0, 40, 400, 20, 0 ],
 	 [ _("Certify yourself on Linux"), 0, 80, 400, 40, 0 ],
 	 [ _("Whether you choose to teach yourself online or via our network of training partners, the Linux-Campus catalogue prepares you for the acknowledged LPI certification program (worldwide professional technical certification)"), 0, 120, 400, 20, 0 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/14-mdkexpert.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/14-mdkexpert.pl
index 58c14623f..e9a57b41e 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/14-mdkexpert.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/14-mdkexpert.pl
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Become a MandrakeExpert"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Find the solutions to your problems via MandrakeSoft's online support platform"), 0, 30, 400, 0, 0 ],
-	 [ _("Join the MandrakeSoft support teams and the Linux Community online to share your knowledge and help others by becoming a recognized Expert on the online technical support website:"), 0, 70, 400, 0, 0 ],
+	 [ _("Find the solutions of your problems via MandrakeSoft's online support platform"), 0, 30, 400, 0, 0 ],
+	 [ _("Join the MandrakeSoft support teams and the Linux Community online to share your knowledge and help your others by becoming a recognized Expert on the online technical support website:"), 0, 70, 400, 0, 0 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);