corrected advertising text

13 files changed, 14 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/01-gnu.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/01-gnu.pl
index 6c48b6aec..bf5bc2787 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/01-gnu.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/01-gnu.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Join the Free Software world"), 0, 10, 400, 50, 1],
-	 [ _("Want to get to know the Open Source community? Be a part? To share your knowledge, and help build tools, join the discussion forums you'll find on our \"Community\" webpages"), 0, 100, 400, 70, 0],
+	 [ _("Get to know the Open Source community and become a member. Learn, teach, and help others by joining the many discussion forums that you will find in our \"Community\" webpages"), 0, 100, 400, 70, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/02-internet.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/02-internet.pl
index b734961cb..643e9aeb7 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/02-internet.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/02-internet.pl
@@ -7,7 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Internet and Messaging"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 gives you the best choice of software to access all the Internet has to offer. Surf the web and view animations with Mozilla and Konqueror, read your mail and handle your personal information with Evolution and Kmail"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
-
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 provides the best software to access everything the Internet has to offer: Surf the web & view animations with Mozilla and Konqueror, exchange email & organize your personal information with Evolution and Kmail, and much more"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/03-graphic.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/03-graphic.pl
index 310be6405..0bf3e2de7 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/03-graphic.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/03-graphic.pl
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ $icon = 1;
 $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
-	 [ _("Art and Multimedia"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 will let you push your multimedia computer to its limits! Use the very latest software to play audio files, edit and handle your images or photos, and play videos"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
+	 [ _("Multimedia and Graphics"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 lets you push your multimedia computer to its limits! Use the latest software to play music and audio files, edit and organize your images and photos, watch TV and videos, and much more"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/04-develop.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/04-develop.pl
index bef32a901..66bf68a5c 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/04-develop.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/04-develop.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Development"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 is the ultimate development platform. Use the full power of the GNU gcc compiler as well as the best Open Source development environments"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 is the ultimate development platform. Discover the power of the GNU gcc compiler as well as the best Open Source development environments"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/05-contcenter.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/05-contcenter.pl
index 88953c43a..905f5db33 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/05-contcenter.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/05-contcenter.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Mandrake Control Center"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 provides a powerful tool to fully customize and configure your machine"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
+	 [ _("The Mandrake Linux 8.2 Control Center is a one-stop location for fully customizing and configuring your Mandrake system"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/06-user.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/06-user.pl
index 8adc09a23..93f3a505d 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/06-user.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/06-user.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("User interfaces"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("A total of 11 different user interfaces are provided, including GNOME 1.4, KDE 2.2.2, Window Maker, ..."), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 provides 11 different graphical desktop environments and window managers to choose from including GNOME 1.4, KDE 2.2.2, Window Maker 0.8, and the rest"), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/07-server.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/07-server.pl
index 67c64a10d..44c6669c6 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/07-server.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/07-server.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Server Software"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Transform your machine into a powerful server in a few clicks of your mouse: Web server, mail, firewall, router, file and print server, ..."), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
+	 [ _("Transform your machine into a powerful server with just a few clicks of the mouse: Web server, email, firewall, router, file and print server, ..."), 0, 20, 400, 60, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/08-games.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/08-games.pl
index 3a7a5d14b..7aea73362 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/08-games.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/08-games.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("Games"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 provides the best in Open Source games - arcade, action, strategy, ..."), 0, 20, 400, 40, 0],
+	 [ _("Mandrake Linux 8.2 provides the best Open Source games - arcade, action, cards, sports, strategy, ..."), 0, 20, 400, 40, 0],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/09-MDKcampus.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/09-MDKcampus.pl
index 3ddfe082e..11b50656f 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/09-MDKcampus.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/09-MDKcampus.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("MandrakeCampus"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Want to learn Linux in a simple, quick, and most of all free way? We provide free training on Linux, as well as a way to test your progress, via our online training center MandrakeCampus"), 0, 20, 400, 50 ],
+	 [ _("Would you like to learn Linux simply, quickly, and for free? MandrakeSoft provides free Linux training, as well as a way to test your progress, at MandrakeCampus -- our online training center"), 0, 20, 400, 50 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/10-MDKexpert.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/10-MDKexpert.pl
index 55777dfce..6653ff815 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/10-MDKexpert.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/10-MDKexpert.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("MandrakeExpert"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Quality support from the Linux Community, and from MandrakeSoft, is just around the corner! Be an Expert, and you can share your knowledge and help others at our support website"), 0, 20, 400, 60 ],
+	 [ _("Quality support from the Linux Community, and from MandrakeSoft, is just around the corner. And if you're already a Linux veteran, become an \"Expert\" and share your knowledge at our support website"), 0, 20, 400, 60 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/11-consul.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/11-consul.pl
index 021a7a3dc..810f85d6b 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/11-consul.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/11-consul.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("MandrakeConsulting"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("For all your IT projects, our consultants are there to understand your needs and offer solutions meeting your requirements. MandrakeSoft, from its strong experience as an editor, brings a true IT alternative"), 0, 30, 400, 200 ],
+	 [ _("For all of your IT projects, our consultants are ready to analyze your requirements and offer a customized solution. Benefit from MandrakeSoft's vast experience as a Linux producer to provide a true IT alternative for your business organization"), 0, 30, 400, 200 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/12-MDKstore.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/12-MDKstore.pl
index 0a7290945..3b7920f1b 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/12-MDKstore.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/12-MDKstore.pl
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ $icon_dx = 51;
 $icon_dy = 41;
 @data = (
 	 [ _("MandrakeStore"), 0, 0, 400, 20, 1],
-	 [ _("Our full range of Linux solutions, as well as special offers on our products and other 'goodies', is available on our e-store"), 0, 20, 400, 50 ],
+	 [ _("A full range of Linux solutions, as well as special offers on products and 'goodies', are available online at our e-store"), 0, 20, 400, 50 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],
 	);
diff --git a/perl-install/share/advertising/13-Nvert.pl b/perl-install/share/advertising/13-Nvert.pl
index c11683fff..8500c7df9 100644
--- a/perl-install/share/advertising/13-Nvert.pl
+++ b/perl-install/share/advertising/13-Nvert.pl
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ $icon = 0;
 $icon_dx = 0;
 $icon_dy = 0;
 @data = (
-	 [ _("To access to more commercial informations, please contact us on the following toll free:"), 0, 0, 400, 100, 0],
+	 [ _("For more information on MandrakeSoft's Professional Services and commercial offerings, please dial the toll-free number that you will find here:"), 0, 0, 400, 100, 0],
 	 # This phone number has to be '1877 MDKCORP' for USA and Canada, '0821 231 231' for France. For other, I dunno! (dams)
 	 [ _("http://www.mandrakesoft.com/sales/contact"), 0, 120, 400, 150 ],
 #	 [ 'text', $x, $y, $area_width, $area_height ],