- update files (2014-04-16)

1 files changed, 79 insertions, 85 deletions

diff --git a/choosePackages.html b/choosePackages.html
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--- a/choosePackages.html
+++ b/choosePackages.html
@@ -17,17 +17,27 @@
          <div class="titlepage">
             <div>
                <div>
-                  <h2 class="title"><a name="choosePackages"></a>Choosing packages to be installed
+                  <h2 class="title"><a name="choosePackages"></a>Choosing packages to be
+                         installed
                   </h2>
                </div>
             </div>
          </div>
+           
          
+           
+           
+           
+           
+           
+           
          
-         <p><a name="choosePackages-pa1"></a>Depending on your choice, you may get one or more screens about choosing packages
+           
+         <p><a name="choosePackages-pa1"></a>Depending on your selections
+              here, you may be offered further screens to fine tune your choices.
          </p>
          
-         
+           
          <div class="section" title="Desktop Selection">
             <div class="titlepage">
                <div>
@@ -36,27 +46,22 @@
                      </h3>
                   </div>
                </div>
-            </div>  
-            
-            <p>Choose whether you prefer to use the
-                       <span class="application">KDE</span> or <span class="application">Gnome</span> desktop environment. Both
-                     come with a full set of  useful applications and tools. Tick <span class="guilabel">Custom</span> if
-                     you want to use neither or both, or if you want something other than the default software
-                     choice for these desktop environments.
-            </p>
+            </div>
+                
             
-             
-            <p>Click <span class="guibutton">Next</span> to continue.
+                
+            <p>Choose whether you prefer to use the <span class="application">KDE</span>
+                   or <span class="application">Gnome</span> desktop environment. Both come with a
+                   full set of useful applications and tools. Tick
+                   <span class="guilabel">Custom</span> if you want to use neither or both, or if you
+                   want something other than the default software choice for these desktop
+                   environments. The LXDE desktop is lighter than the previous two, sporting
+                   less eye candy and fewer packages installed by default.
             </p>
-               
-               
+              
          </div>
          
-         
-         
-            
-            
-            
+           
          <div class="section" title="Package Group Selection">
             <div class="titlepage">
                <div>
@@ -65,60 +70,46 @@
                      </h3>
                   </div>
                </div>
-            </div>  
-               
-            <p>Packages have been sorted into groups, to make installing what you need on your system a lot easier.</p>
-               
-               
+            </div>
+                
+            
+                
+            <p>Packages have been sorted into groups, to make choosing what you
+                   need on your system a lot easier. The groups are fairly self explanatory,
+                   however more information about the content of each is available in
+                     tool-tips which become visible as the mouse is dragged over them.
+            </p>
+                
             <div class="itemizedlist">
                <ul class="itemizedlist">
                   <li class="listitem">
-                       
-                         
-                     <p>Workstation: <span class="emphasis"><em>ADD SOME TEXT</em></span>.
-                     </p>
-                       
-                       
+                               
+                     <p>Workstation.</p>
+                             
                   </li>
-                  <li class="listitem">  
-                       
-                       
-                     <p>Server: <span class="emphasis"><em>ADD SOME TEXT</em></span>.
-                     </p>
-                       
-                       
+                  <li class="listitem">
+                               
+                     <p>Server.</p>
+                             
                   </li>
                   <li class="listitem">
-                       
-                       
-                     <p>Graphical Environment: <span class="emphasis"><em>ADD SOME TEXT</em></span>. .
-                     </p>
-                       
-                       
+                               
+                     <p>Graphical Environment.</p>
+                             
                   </li>
                   <li class="listitem">
-                       
-                       
-                     <p>individual package selection: You can use
-                                    this option to manually add extra packages if you know what you want.
+                               
+                     <p>Individual package selection: You can use this option to
+                                  manually add extra packages.
                      </p>
-                       
-                        
-                        
+                             
                   </li>
                </ul>
             </div>
-            <p>
-               
-            </p>
-             
-            <p>Click <span class="guibutton">Next</span> to continue.
-            </p>
-               
-               
+              
          </div>
-            
-            
+         
+           
          <div class="section" title="Minimal Install">
             <div class="titlepage">
                <div>
@@ -127,42 +118,45 @@
                      </h3>
                   </div>
                </div>
-            </div>  
-               
-                 
-            <p>You can choose a Minumal Installation by deselecting everything in the Package Group Selection screen.  Minimal Installation
-               is
-                      intended for those with specific uses in mind for their Mageia, such as a server or a specialised workstation. You
-               will probably use this option combined with Manual Package
-                      Selection. If you choose this installation class, then the next screen will offer you a few useful extras to install,
-               such as documentation and X, if you wish. 
-                    
-            </p>
-               
+            </div>
                 
-         </div>
+            
+                
+            <p>You can choose a Minimal Installation by de-selecting everything in
+                   the Package Group Selection screen. Minimal Installation is intended for
+                   those with specific uses in mind for their Mageia, such as a server or a
+                   specialised workstation. You will probably use this option combined with
+                   Manual Package Selection. If you choose this installation class, then the
+                   next screen will offer you a few useful extras to install, such as
+                   documentation and X.
+            </p>
               
+         </div>
+         
+           
          <div class="section" title="Choose individual packages">
             <div class="titlepage">
                <div>
                   <div>
-                     <h3 class="title"><a name="choosePackagesTree"></a>Choose individual packages
+                     <h3 class="title"><a name="choosePackagesTree"></a>Choose individual
+                              packages
                      </h3>
                   </div>
                </div>
-            </div>  
-               
-                 
-            <p>TEXT
-                    
+            </div>
+                
+            
+                
+            <p>Here you can add any extra packages to customise your
+                   installation.
             </p>
-               
                 
+            <p>After having made your choice, you can click on the <span class="guibutton">floppy icon</span> at the bottom of the page to save your choice of packages (saving to a USB key works, too). You can then use this file to
+               install the same packages on another system, by pressing the same button during install and choosing to load it.
+            </p>
+              
          </div>
-             
-             
-             
-             
+         
       </div>
    </body>
 </html>