- new version (2012-04-25)

1 files changed, 29 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/addUser.html b/addUser.html
index 83d1a4f..9762bd8 100644
--- a/addUser.html
+++ b/addUser.html
@@ -32,6 +32,12 @@
          
            
          
+           
+         
+           
+           
+           
+            
          
            
          <div class="section" title="Set Administrator (root) Password:">
@@ -50,7 +56,7 @@
             <p>It is advisable for all <span class="application">Mageia</span>
                    installations to set a superuser or administrator's password, usually
                    called the <span class="emphasis"><em>root password</em></span> in Linux. As you type a
-               password into the top box the shield in its colour will change from red to
+               password into the top box the colour of its shield will change from red to
                yellow to green depending on the strength of the password. A green shield
                    shows you are using a strong password. You need to repeat the same
                    password in the box just below the first password box, this checks that
@@ -93,10 +99,9 @@
                 
             
                 
-            <p>Add a user here. A user has less rights than the superuser (root),
-                   but by default enough to surf the internet, use office applications or
-                   play games and anything else the average user does with his
-                   computer
+            <p>Add a user here. A user has fewer rights than the superuser (root),
+                   but enough to surf the internet, use office applications or play games and
+                   anything else the average user does with his computer
             </p>
             
                 
@@ -111,31 +116,31 @@
                   </li>
                   <li class="listitem">
                              
-                     <p><span class="guilabel">Real Name</span>: Insert a users real name into
+                     <p><span class="guilabel">Real Name</span>: Insert the users real name into
                                 this text box.
                      </p>
                            
                   </li>
                   <li class="listitem">
                              
-                     <p><span class="guilabel">Login Name</span>: Here you can type in a log in
-                                name or drakx will use a version of the users real name. <span class="emphasis"><em>The
-                                      log in name is case sensitive.</em></span></p>
+                     <p><span class="guilabel">Login Name</span>: Here you enter the user login
+                                name or let drakx use a version of the users real name. <span class="emphasis"><em>The
+                                      login name is case sensitive.</em></span></p>
                            
                   </li>
                   <li class="listitem">
                              
                      <p><span class="guilabel">Password</span>: In this text box you should type
-                                in a users pass word. Again it has a shield in the corner of the text
-                                box that indicates the strength of the users password. (See also <a class="xref" href="addUser.html#givePassword" title="Note">Note</a>)
+                                in the user password. There is a shield at the end of the text box
+                                that indicates the strength of the password. (See also <a class="xref" href="addUser.html#givePassword" title="Note">Note</a>)
                      </p>
                            
                   </li>
                   <li class="listitem">
                              
-                     <p><span class="guilabel">Password (again)</span>: Retype the users password
+                     <p><span class="guilabel">Password (again)</span>: Retype the user password
                                 into this text box and drakx will check you have the same password in
-                                each of the users password text boxes.
+                                each of the user password text boxes.
                      </p>
                            
                   </li>
@@ -157,10 +162,9 @@
                 
             
                 
-            <p>If the <span class="guibutton">advanced</span> button is clicked then you
-                   are offered this screen that allows you to edit the settings for the user
-                   you are adding. Additionally, you can disable or enable a guest account.
-                   
+            <p>If the <span class="guibutton">advanced</span> button is clicked you are
+                   offered a screen that allows you to edit the settings for the user you are
+                   adding. Additionally, you can disable or enable a guest account.
             </p>
             
                 
@@ -174,8 +178,8 @@
                      <td align="left" valign="top">
                               
                         <p>Anything a guest with a default <span class="emphasis"><em>rbash</em></span> guest
-                                 account saves to his /home directory will be erased. The guest should
-                                 save his important files to a USB key.
+                                 account saves to his /home directory will be erased when he logs out.
+                                 The guest should save his important files to a USB key.
                         </p>
                             
                      </td>
@@ -189,8 +193,9 @@
                   <li class="listitem">
                              
                      <p><span class="guilabel">Enable guest account</span>: Here you can enable
-                                or disable a guest account. The guest account allows a guest to log into
-                                and use the PC, but he has more restricted access than normal users.
+                                or disable a guest account. The guest account allows a guest to log
+                                into and use the PC, but he has more restricted access than normal
+                                users.
                      </p>
                            
                   </li>
@@ -206,14 +211,15 @@
                              
                      <p><span class="guilabel">User ID</span>: Here you can set the user ID for
                                 the user you are adding in the previous screen. This is a number.
-                                Don't enter anything here if you don't know what it should be.
+                                Leave it blank unless you know what you are doing.
                      </p>
                            
                   </li>
                   <li class="listitem">
                              
                      <p><span class="guilabel">Group ID</span>: This lets you set the group ID.
-                                Also a number, usually the same one as for the user.
+                                Also a number, usually the same one as for the user. Leave it blank
+                                unless you know what you are doing.
                      </p>
                            
                   </li>