english proof reading by Alastair Scott

2 files changed, 43 insertions, 40 deletions

diff --git a/control-center b/control-center
index ef42b9cd..7eaf9983 100755
--- a/control-center
+++ b/control-center
@@ -98,44 +98,44 @@ $::isRpmDrake = -e "/usr/sbin/rpmdrake";
 # { key => [ log_exp, [ binary, win_nb ], gtkplug?, description ] }
 my $exec_hash =
 {
-    "Auto Install" => [ "drakautoinst", "$sbindir/drakautoinst", 1, N("DrakAutoInst enables to configure an Auto Install floppy") ],
+    "Auto Install" => [ "drakautoinst", "$sbindir/drakautoinst", 1, N("DrakAutoInst helps you produce an Auto Install floppy") ],
     "Backups" => [ "drakbackup", "$sbindir/drakbackup", 1, N("DrakBackup help in configuring Backups") ],
-    "Boot Config" => [ "drakboot", "$sbindir/drakboot", 1, N("DrakBoot help in configuring the system bootstrapping") ],
-    "Boot Disk" => [ "drakfloppy", "$sbindir/drakfloppy", 1, N("Drakfloppy enables to build a customized Boot Disk") ],
-    "Connection Sharing" => [ "drakgw", "$sbindir/drakgw", 1, N("DrakGw enables to share an internet connection") ],
-    "Connection" => [ "drakconnect", "$sbindir/drakconnect", 1, N("DrakConnect help in configuring network connections") ],
+    "Boot Config" => [ "drakboot", "$sbindir/drakboot", 1, N("DrakBoot helps you set up how your system boots") ],
+    "Boot Disk" => [ "drakfloppy", "$sbindir/drakfloppy", 1, N("DrakFloppy helps you produce your own boot floppy") ],
+    "Connection Sharing" => [ "drakgw", "$sbindir/drakgw", 1, N("DrakGw helps you share your Internet connection") ],
+    "Connection" => [ "drakconnect", "$sbindir/drakconnect", 1, N("DrakConnect helps you set up your network and Internet connection") ],
     # little workaround to avoid drakconf freeze
 #   "Console" => [ "rxvt", "$xbindir/rxvt", -1, "" ],
-    "Console" => [ "rxvt", [ "$xbindir/rxvt", "rxvt", 1 ], 0, N("The Console will help you to solve issues") ],
-    "Date & Time" => [ "clock", "$sbindir/clock.pl", 1, N("Date & Time configuration") ],
-    "Firewall" => [ "drakfirewall", "$sbindir/drakfirewall", 1, N("DrakFirewall configures a personal firewall (look at MNF for a powerful dedicated firewall solution)") ],
-    "Fonts" => [ "drakfont", "$sbindir/drakfont", 1, N("DrakFont enables to install and remove fonts") ],
-    "Graphical server configuration" => [ "XFdrake", "$sbindir/XFdrake", 1, N("The X configurator help in configuring the graphical server") ],
-    "Hard Drives" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --hd", 1, N("DiskDrake enables to alter hard disks partitionning scheme and to resize partitions") ],
-    "Hardware List" => [ "harddrake", "$sbindir/harddrake2", 1, N("Harddrake enables to list and configure the hardware") ],
-    "Install Software" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/rpmdrake", -1, N("Install Software: RpmDrake enables to install software packages") ],
-    "Keyboard" => [ "keyboarddrake", "$sbindir/keyboarddrake", 1, N("KeyboardDrake let configure the keyboard layout") ],
-    "Logs" => [ "logdrake", "$sbindir/logdrake", 1, N("Logdrake enables to search in system logs") ],
-    "Mandrake Update" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/MandrakeUpdate", -1, N("Mandrake Update will enable you to update your system pacakges") ],
-    "Menus" => [ "menudrake", "$sbindir/menus_launcher.pl", 1,  N("MenuDrake enables to manage menus"), "$bindir/menudrake" ],
-    "Monitor" => [ "XFdrake", "$sbindir/XFdrake monitor", 1, N("Monitor configuration") ],
-    "Mouse" => [ "mousedrake", "$sbindir/mousedrake", 1, N("MouseDrake enables to configure the mouse") ],
-    "NFS mount points" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --nfs", 1, N("NFS mount points: dummy description") ],
+    "Console" => [ "rxvt", [ "$xbindir/rxvt", "rxvt", 1 ], 0, N("Open a console") ], #The Console will help you to solve issues
+    "Date & Time" => [ "clock", "$sbindir/clock.pl", 1, N("Set date and time") ],
+    "Firewall" => [ "drakfirewall", "$sbindir/drakfirewall", 1, N("drakfirewall helps you set up a personal firewall") ],
+    "Fonts" => [ "drakfont", "$sbindir/drakfont", 1, N("DrakFont helps you add and remove fonts, including Windows fonts") ],
+    "Graphical server configuration" => [ "XFdrake", "$sbindir/XFdrake", 1, N("XFdrake helps you set up the  graphical server") ],
+    "Hard Drives" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --hd", 1, N("DiskDrake helps you define and resize hard disk partitions") ],
+    "Hardware List" => [ "harddrake", "$sbindir/harddrake2", 1, N("Harddrake lists and helps you set up your hardware") ],
+    "Install Software" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/rpmdrake", -1, N("RpmDrake helps you install software packages") ],
+    "Keyboard" => [ "keyboarddrake", "$sbindir/keyboarddrake", 1, N("KeyboardDrake helps you to set your keyboard layout") ],
+    "Logs" => [ "logdrake", "$sbindir/logdrake", 1, N("LogDrake helps you view and search system logs") ],
+    "Mandrake Update" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/MandrakeUpdate", -1, N("Mandrake Update helps you apply any fixes or upgrades to installed packages") ],
+    "Menus" => [ "menudrake", "$sbindir/menus_launcher.pl", 1,  N("MenuDrake helps you change what programs are shown on the menu"), "$bindir/menudrake" ],
+    "Monitor" => [ "XFdrake", "$sbindir/XFdrake monitor", 1, N("Configure your monitor") ],
+    "Mouse" => [ "mousedrake", "$sbindir/mousedrake", 1, N("MouseDrake helps you set up your mouse") ],
+    "NFS mount points" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --nfs", 1, N("Set NFS mount points") ],
     "Partition Sharing" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --fileshare", 1, N("Partition Sharing enables to allow users to share some of their directories, allowing users to simply click on \"Share\" in konqueror and nautilus") ],
-    "Printer" => [ "printerdrake", "$sbindir/printerdrake", 1, N("Printerdrake help in configuring printers, print job queues, ..."), "$sbindir/printerdrake" ],
-    "Programs scheduling" => [ "drakcronat", "/usr/X11R6/bin/drakcronat", 1, N("DrakCronAt enables to schedule Programs execution through crond and atd daemons") ],
-    "Proxy Configuration" => [ "drakproxy", "$sbindir/drakproxy", 1, N("DrakProxy help in configuring file and web proxy") ],
-    "Remove Software" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/rpmdrake-remove", -1, N("Remove Software: RpmDrake enables to remove software packages") ],
-    "Resolution" => [ "XFdrake", "$sbindir/XFdrake resolution", 1, N("Screen resolution configuration") ],
-    "Samba mount points" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --smb", 1, N("Samba mount points: dummy description") ],
-    "Scanner" => [ "scannerdrake", "$sbindir/scannerdrake", 1, N("ScannerDrake enables to configure scanners") ],
-    "Security Level" => [ "draksec", "$sbindir/draksec", 1, N("DrakSec enables to shrewdly configure the system Security Level") ],
-    "Security Permissions" => [ "drakperm",  "$sbindir/drakperm", 1, N("Security Permissions: dummy description") ],
-    "Services" => [ "drakxservices", "$sbindir/drakxservices", 1, N("DrakxServices provides an easy way to enabling or disabling system services") ],
-    "Software Sources Manager" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/edit-urpm-sources.pl", -1, N("The Software Sources Manager enables to configure packages sources") ],
-    "TV Cards" => [ "drakxtv", "$sbindir/drakxtv", 1, N("DrakxTV help in configuring tv cards") ],
-    "Users" => [ "userdrake", "$bindir/userdrake", 1, N("Userdrake help in managing system's users") ],
-    "WebDAV mount points" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --dav", 1, N("WebDAV mount points: dummy description") ],
+    "Printer" => [ "printerdrake", "$sbindir/printerdrake", 1, N("PrinterDrake helps you set up your printer, job queues ...."), "$sbindir/printerdrake" ],
+    "Programs scheduling" => [ "drakcronat", "/usr/X11R6/bin/drakcronat", 1, N("DrakCronAt helps you run programs or scripts at certain times") ], #DrakCronAt enables to schedule Programs execution through crond and atd daemons
+    "Proxy Configuration" => [ "drakproxy", "$sbindir/drakproxy", 1, N("DrakProxy helps you set up proxy servers") ], #for files and web browsing
+    "Remove Software" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/rpmdrake-remove", -1, N("RpmDrake helps you remove software packages") ],
+    "Resolution" => [ "XFdrake", "$sbindir/XFdrake resolution", 1, N("Change your screen resolution") ],
+    "Samba mount points" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --smb", 1, N("Set Samba mount points") ],
+    "Scanner" => [ "scannerdrake", "$sbindir/scannerdrake", 1, N("ScannerDrake helps you set up your scanner") ],
+    "Security Level" => [ "draksec", "$sbindir/draksec", 1, N("DrakSec helps you set the system security level") ],
+    "Security Permissions" => [ "drakperm",  "$sbindir/drakperm", 1, N("DrakPerm helps you fine-tune the system security level and permissions") ],
+    "Services" => [ "drakxservices", "$sbindir/drakxservices", 1, N("DrakXServices helps you enable or disable services") ],
+    "Software Sources Manager" => [ "rpmdrake", "$sbindir/edit-urpm-sources.pl", -1, N("Software Sources Manager helps you define where software packages are downloaded from") ],
+    "TV Cards" => [ "drakxtv", "$sbindir/drakxtv", 1, N("DrakxTV helps you set up your TV card") ],
+    "Users" => [ "userdrake", "$bindir/userdrake", 1, N("UserDrake helps you add, remove or change users of your system") ],
+    "WebDAV mount points" => [ "diskdrake", "$sbindir/diskdrake --dav", 1, N("Set WebDAV mount points") ],
 };
 
 # [ [ class_label, class icon name, [ [ program_label, program icon name ] ... ] ] ]
@@ -175,11 +175,11 @@ my @tree =
             foreach (detect_devices::cdroms()) {
                 my $type = detect_devices::isBurner($_) ? 'burner' : detect_devices::isDvdDrive($_) ? 'DVD' : 'cdrom';
                 push @{$cdroms_by_type{$type}}, $_;
-            } ([ 'cdrom', N("CD-ROM"), sub { @{$cdroms_by_type{cdrom} || []} }, N("CD-ROM drive: mount point configuration") ],
-               [ 'dvd', N("DVD"), sub { @{$cdroms_by_type{DVD} || []} }, N("DVD drive: mount point configuration") ],
-               [ 'cdwriter', N("CD Burner"), sub { @{$cdroms_by_type{burner} || []} }, N("CD/DVD burner: mount point configuration") ],
-               [ 'floppy', N("Floppy"), \&detect_devices::floppies, N("Floppy drive: mount point configuration") ],
-               [ 'zip', N("Zip"), \&detect_devices::zips, N("ZIP drive: mount point configuration") ],
+            } ([ 'cdrom', N("CD-ROM"), sub { @{$cdroms_by_type{cdrom} || []} }, N("Set where your CD-ROM drive is mounted") ],
+               [ 'dvd', N("DVD"), sub { @{$cdroms_by_type{DVD} || []} }, N("Set where your DVD-ROM drive is mounted") ],
+               [ 'cdwriter', N("CD Burner"), sub { @{$cdroms_by_type{burner} || []} }, N("Set where your CD/DVD burner is mounted") ],
+               [ 'floppy', N("Floppy"), \&detect_devices::floppies, N("Set where your floppy drive is mounted") ],
+               [ 'zip', N("Zip"), \&detect_devices::zips, N("Set where your ZIP drive is mounted") ],
                ),
         }),
         [ "NFS mount points", 'diskdrake_nfs',  ],
diff --git a/drakconf.spec b/drakconf.spec
index 24fc5f57..5cbdb0db 100644
--- a/drakconf.spec
+++ b/drakconf.spec
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 Summary:  The Mandrake Control Center 
 Name:     drakconf
 Version:  9.1
-Release:  0.8mdk
+Release:  0.9mdk
 # get the source from our cvs repository (see
 # http://www.linuxmandrake.com/en/cvs.php3)
 Source0:  %name-%version.tar.bz2
@@ -110,6 +110,9 @@ rm -rf $RPM_BUILD_ROOT
 %_datadir/mcc/themes/kde
 
 %changelog
+* Tue Jan 21 2003 Thierry Vignaud <tvignaud@mandrakesoft.com> 9.1-0.9mdk
+- better describe tools (Alastair Scott, )
+
 * Fri Jan 17 2003 Daouda LO <daouda@mandrakesoft.com> 9.1-0.8mdk
 - drakhelp support